Ultimate Evolution Through Devouring

The villains seem to lack both intelligence and emotional intelligence; given the precarious state of human survival, the major factions all seem incredibly petty and lack common sense. Not a single smart person was seen; they all acted with brute force, making it feel less like a modern, technologically advanced martial arts civilization and more like an ancient martial arts civilization where…

This book... How should I put it? It's endless killing—killing the young to take the old, killing the old to take the old's wife, it's like the whole world is against the protagonist. And the villains always say, "I'll kill you, then I'll kill your whole family," and then they get killed themselves. I really, really couldn't keep going after chapter 50.

This is disgusting! The added power is completely useless; the enemies just keep feeding the protagonist, giving him free time to level up. This is such an old, clichéd plot.

It's possible; as long as it doesn't collapse, it can at least achieve a small success.

I thought it was a fanfiction about Swallowed Star, but it turns out it isn't.

This is disgusting. Dude, it's 2020, how come there are still so many of these tricks?

Hmm! The writing skills are still fine, but the formula is too old-fashioned. Basically, it's the same old story: the protagonist's hatred aura kicks in, the younger ones are beaten, the older ones appear, the older ones are beaten, then a relative appears, the younger ones are beaten again, and the older ones appear.

Humanity is on the verge of extinction, beset by internal and external troubles, and internal class divisions are emerging. The protagonist is an ordinary person with no deep-seated hatred, yet he still plays the dark side? Chapter Two mentions that even a basic martial arts technique or footwork isn't widely available? Ordinary people simply can't obtain it!

This is a hodgepodge, it's better to just stick to writing a proper fanfiction about Swallowed Star. At least then there's a sense of immersion to fill in the gaps in the story, and fanfiction is more forgiving of glaring flaws. This imitation is completely off-putting and incredibly awkward to watch. It's all the same old, tired tropes.

Honestly, he doesn't even have the strength to protect himself, yet he seeks out the female lead... If it weren't for the protagonist's halo... The female lead would have been tortured countless times...!