Dainavel and Hogwarts

The introduction says not to interfere or get close, but to follow the original plot at all times and everywhere. Find various reasons to follow the original plot. Those reasons are all prepared for the protagonist. The protagonist can use them to deceive himself, but none of them are suitable for the author. The author deliberately arranged this to make it easier to copy the original work. Apart from this, there is no other reason to explain.

The book is still good. It is better for the author to write according to his own ideas. Don't overly feel the readers' requirements when writing a book. The work is not RMB, and not everyone will like it. If you care too much about the readers' thoughts, the book will be unreadable. Write your own thoughts. Everyone also comes to see your views on the magical world. Caring too much about other things will not make you write better, it will only make you irritated. Come on, don't be a eunuch. You are considered a good writer in the fandom.

Chapter 21, Persuading you to quit, Snape inexplicably used Legilimency on you, a new student, you are sick, or do you think that after practicing Occlumency, he did not use Legilimency on you, you feel that the practice was in vain

The protagonist is too pushy. Although he has various plans, he always thinks that he is a god and does everything by himself. He says that he is not involved in Harry Potter, but all he thinks about is that I want to kill Voldemort with my own hands.

Please advise. It's like having a persecutory delusion. Every day, you feel that someone will peek into your private memories. They can use Legilimency, but they will definitely look at your memories? They don't know that you are a time traveler. I find that most of the people who write this have persecutory delusions. . . . . Among those who traveled to American comics, there is also Ancient Yi. . .

It was really good before going to school, but since then I have felt awkward. Snape and Quirrell faced Legilimency with the students every day. I asked who would dare to do this except Lao Deng. The protagonist started to get good grades after two classes and was exempted from classes. Boss, you don't dare to do this even if you have a system. Why are you going to school? Just find a library.

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I agree with the previous post written by Universal Knowledge. This is the first time I read an HP fan who can maintain the taste and write my own things bit by bit, so I read it in one go. After catching up with the progress, I actually had a "withdrawal reaction" 😂 There are so many so-called suggestions, opinions, complaints from readers, and even the so-called evaluation of "studying the original work intensively and reading the fan works widely". In fact, just take a look. The more self-centered this type of evaluation is, the easier it is to stand up and talk without back pain. Although it is important to cater to the market, a few people do not represent the market. I hope the author can stick to writing things with his own style. (However, I feel that Dana's strength is slightly weakened now. This is the feeling that he has defeated the student world. But think about it, if we only consider students, I estimate that one person can cut from the basement of Hogwarts to the tower without blinking. In the original book, he was really plotted by Lao Deng to death. Really hard steel, I feel that unless Lao Deng does not die, no one can survive)

The book is still worth reading, and it's not bad among fans. However, many details and character descriptions are inaccurate ~ Flying carpets are banned items by the British Ministry of Magic, but someone actually made a flying carpet to go to King's Cross Station. For example, when the protagonist went to the kitchen, the elf didn't carefully ask the gentleman if he needed anything. Instead, he asked the little wizard what he wanted to do, and then exchanged gifts with the protagonist. He didn't act like a slave at all. For example, Snape actually used Legilimency for all first-year students in the first class~ Professor McGonagall actually exempted the protagonist from class because the protagonist has mastered the knowledge of first-year students. Because if you perform well in the classes of spells and herbal medicine, you don't have to do homework, and you don't even have to write papers. There are many other places where the descriptions are not very consistent with the original characters. For example, Neville's character doesn't quite fit. Then in the second design, the protagonist meditates, but there is no such thing in the original work. I think this is the second design. The protagonist can also see the heald contract in his consciousness when he meditates. However, it's not unusual to have two fan-fics, as long as they don't change too much, there's nothing wrong with it. Overall, the book was okay, but the original character's personality didn't quite match.

In Harry Potter, when wizards meet each other, they use Legilimency?