Dainavel and Hogwarts

The synopsis says it won't interfere or get too close, but it follows the original plot in every way. It finds all sorts of reasons to follow the original plot, but those reasons are all prepared for the protagonist, who can use them to deceive himself. There isn't a single reason suitable for the author. The author deliberately arranged it this way to facilitate copying the original work, and there is no other explanation besides that.

The book is pretty good. It's better for the author to write according to their own ideas and not be overly concerned with readers' demands. A book isn't a banknote; not everyone will like it. If you're too concerned about readers' opinions, the book will be unreadable. Write your own thoughts; people are there to see your perspective on the magical world.

Chapter 21, a warning to quit: Snape inexplicably used Legilimency on a freshman like you. Is he crazy? Or do you think that if you practiced Occlumency, you'd have wasted your time if he didn't use Legilimency on you?

The protagonist is too arrogant. Despite having various plans, he always thinks he's a god and does everything himself. He claims he won't participate in Harry Potter, but his mind is full of thoughts about personally killing Voldemort.

Let me give you some advice. Don't act like you have paranoia, constantly worrying that someone is spying on your memories and privacy. They might use mind control, but does that mean they'd actually see your memories? They don't know you're a time traveler. I've noticed that most people who write this kind of thing have paranoia... What about those who travel to American comics, like the Ancient One...?

It was really great before school started, but everything felt awkward from the beginning. Snape and Quirrell were using Legilimency on the students all the time. I just want to ask, besides Dumbledore, who would dare to do that? The protagonist started getting good grades and skipping classes after just two lessons. Seriously, even if you had a system, you wouldn't dare to do that. Why even bother going to school? Just find a library!

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I agree with the previous post by the all-knowing author. This is the first HP fanfic I've read that manages to maintain its flavor while still gradually developing its own unique style, so I read it all in one go. And sure enough, after catching up, I experienced "withdrawal symptoms" 😂

The book is still readable, not bad for a fanfiction. However, many details and character descriptions are inaccurate. For example, the flying carpet is a banned item by the British Ministry of Magic, yet someone uses it to travel to King's Cross Station.

In Harry Potter, wizards would use Legilimency on each other whenever they met?