Kind Uchiha

Uchiha is also very gentle and kind... But they also know that others are prying into the Sharingan they possess, so they have to package themselves up. The most important emotion but no one knows it

War is a continuation of politics. The Third Generation Danzo and the others destroyed the Uchiha clan just for profit, to continue the current rule and avoid another Nine-Tails incident in Konoha. After all, they all saw the three magatama blood-ring eyes in the eyes of the Nine-Tails at that time. It is impossible to have peace based on kindness alone. It is impossible to improve the legal system and ensure everyone's most basic rights and obligations. And Konoha? The interest group headed by the third generation divided the ninjas into three parts, and they speculated and were hostile to each other. For example, the family ninjas represented Hinata and Uchiha. Civilian ninjas - such as Mizuki. The family inherited ninjutsu, knowledge and experience. It is too difficult for civilian ninjas to climb up. But think about it, Danzo, does the third generation belong to the family ninja or the civilian ninja? No, none of them. They are vested interests. The orphanage exists as a war orphan, but it has become an ANBU? The place where talents are selected at the root. For example, Kabuto. Konoha's will of fire is just an idea that they ruled for three generations. Naruto is not equal to Konoha. Konoha should be greater than Naruto. If you want peace, you can only change or revolution. Change is from top to bottom. Win one group and suppress one group. Replace the original small circle of vested interests with another, and then promote reforms including people's livelihood and the military. Revolution is bottom-up. It is the flag of the sickle and hammer dyed red with blood. Change everyone's ideology. Work together to get rich together. First, we must break the one-village-one-country system. Promote ninjutsu into production ninjas and military ninjas. Arm everyone with a unified mind. Sweep all unreasonable systems into the garbage dump of history. Establish a sound and realistic system. Use chakra for production. Change life. Vigorously develop science and technology. Finally, list Otsutsuki as an enemy and predator. Establish a crisis awareness for the ninja world and make other countries, villages. Regions have to unify in order to survive

Summary: Some designs and concepts are quite good. It is recommended to refer to Ye Zi, the protagonist of "Naruto: Scourge" when shaping the protagonist. After all, the goal is to go home. Don't start the chapter with a funny face, and then end up with a poker face the whole time. In addition, kindness is not something you think of yourself, but a style of behavior, the evaluation of others, or a bottom line. There are many members in the Akatsuki organization who are kind to their companions. The whole time the protagonist is in the Akatsuki organization, it can be described as a mess. Apart from capturing Vulpix, he has been playing emotional cards with Fei. Didn't even get the ring. I was wondering where Hidan Kakuzu wouldn't be easier to get than Orochimaru? I don't object to helping Konoha, but it shouldn't be kneeling and licking/being molested by Tsunade, or even strutting into Konoha after breaking up with A Fei, many times! Rather than providing information erratically, just to obtain the asylum promised by Tsunade/the responsibility of Konoha ninja, it should be like the time when the detonating talisman was riding on each other, each time the information should be marked with a price, and no too important information would be revealed. ​Compared with Uchiha Itachi's behavior, if the protagonist's behavior is noticed by Obito, there will be no deep hatred. That blood escape female ninja. . . I don't remember the name at all. Her portrayal is the worst failure of the entire film. Worse than Yakushi Kabuto. To summarize, there are some bugs in the root chapter, and the betrayal at the end is too frivolous. Xiaopian is a mess. In the Great Ninja War, the protagonist replaced Itachi Uchiha. In order to follow the original route throughout the entire process, it can be said that no means were spared. Even Boruto has to post it. . . There are many areas for improvement. For example, if you have an experience like that on Earth, the characters in the previous text should be shaped in advance. . . At the end of the Akatsuki chapter, after Uchiha Itachi's death, the protagonist's half-truth and half-fake confusion is actually okay. If the conversations with Obito could be more realistic, for example, Obito said, I have known that you are a spy of Konoha, but you have not interfered with Akatsuki's plan, so this time you will officially join Akatsuki. . . Something like that. There is nothing wrong with plotting the Samsara Eye and seizing the power of the Six Paths to return home. But the specific reversal is too bad. . . The plot on Earth has been skipped by me, the Crimson King, at a glance. Very full, give it 5 points.

If I turn Sai into an eye-opening tool, will I still have to help him support his wife?

Reading your novel is better than reading the original work. The protagonist is just like a pickled fish, sour, vegetable and superfluous.

I hope the author doesn't need to pay attention to what others say and write according to his own ideas. It's difficult to agree with others. At least I like your works very much. I've read a lot of Naruto fandoms. Except for the time-traveling four generations of rebirth, you have to be the best. Others either become dark political battles with intrigues and completely forget the original intention of writing Naruto, or they are mixed with pirates, Dragon Ball Bleach and other miscellaneous things. Eight's masturbation and high-octane articles are boring after the passion, or they are dark articles written like Obito. The whole world owes me, I will destroy the world, and those readers, no matter how unfair they are, or if they are not worthy of being the protagonist of Naruto, they force the author not to stand in the Konoha camp. If he does, he will kneel down and lick. They have completely forgotten that it is precisely Naruto who has moved so many people! So write according to your own ideas, don't be swayed or influenced by others, and write the "if I was also in Naruto" style fanfic that you want, come on! ! !

Uchiha returns to the city? This is something I never expected 🙂

It is recommended that this book be renamed: Konoha Dog Licker: Konoha destroyed my entire clan, I still dedicate my life to him, I am the Uchiha of Konoha

The protagonist is like a puppet on strings, nothing can stop him, nothing can be done. Really, I like the author's writing style very much, I really like it, but the author is also really abusive! The protagonist never had a happy moment, and there was no result with Ino. Both Sai and Nobu died, and Chan also died. He went home, and then he couldn't be with his family. This made me confused why the author wrote this fanfic. What on earth did the protagonist want to do, but was unable to do anything every time? Isn't the original intention of writing fan fiction to make up for the regrets we see in the story? I really can't understand it! Why does the sacred tree come back with the protagonist? It's not reasonable! Earlier I just said that the loss of the protagonist's power leads to the possibility of spiritual practice in the world. The setting of this sacred tree is simply inexplicable! From the beginning to the present, there has never been a happy ending.

It's a bit disgusting, Tsunade, but it may have something to do with my own three views. For time-travelers, the night of genocide was caused by Konoha. If you Tsunade doesn't know shit, you still have a reason to waste the protagonist's time. If you want to wait for Orochimaru, just pretend that I didn't say anything. Otherwise, the protagonist is fooling around with Tsunade here, coveting her ninjutsu and psychic skills? This Tsunade still has a reason to say that Konoha's Uchiha, Konoha is a hammer, can't I go to Iwagakure and Kirigakure? Do you still want to attack me if I say no? I read that the protagonists in this book have no bonds but hatred in Konoha. Sasuke and Naruto, Sakura and Kakashi, the protagonists really have no one. If I return to Konoha like this, I really don't know what the reason is. If I don't have any relatives in my family, they are all strangers, this is not my home. Don't tell me that bonds can be re-established. What's the reason? I have a grudge against Konoha, why should I establish a bond with the people of Konoha? When I go to other villages, I just start over and still have no grudge against me. It's like you want to join two companies. One is stronger but has a grudge against you, and the other is not as strong but has no grudge against you. Which one do you choose? Even Sasuke has thought about betraying Konoha. You have a grudge against Konoha and have no friends. You don't want to destroy Konoha. It's funny. Uchiha who cares about Konoha is ridiculous, let alone other people's emphasis on stealing your money and having a grudge against you. If you ask me, you are really unworthy. If you can get the Eternal Eye, work hard. There is really no other way. Hashirama cells are also available. Others can also find ways to join other ninja villages in exchange for conditional research. Or you can write that because Shisui's eyes are in Itachi's hands, the protagonist has to pretend that he cares about Konoha, and finally get the eyes back. After all, Itachi will not give the eyes to someone who has a grudge against Konoha, and then find a way to escape. Otherwise, I would feel that there is a bit of a disagreement. This is really what is written in your book. After the genocide, all of Gen's friends are dead, and the others who were acquainted with him are not so familiar. Now Danzo, the remaining advisor of Konoha, has a grudge, and none of them are kind to you. I really don't know what is left in this broken place. What's even more nonsense is to return Konoha's Uchiha. Damn it, you Konoha yourself destroyed Uchiha. If the author really wants the protagonist to stay in Konoha, then test Konoha's attitude! For example, if you ask for forbidden magic, fairy magic, or Uchiha inheritance, see if it is given to you! Or look at the possibility of becoming Hokage and make a decision based on the other person's attitude! Of course you can say that the protagonist has no kindness to Konoha, so there is no reason to ask for so much. Haha, does letting the Sharingan stay in Konoha count, and the mission completed by the root does not count. Konoha's training? Damn, I'm greedy for my eyes. It's a shitty training. Now it's Konoha's turn. Otherwise, I really don't feel worthy if I want the protagonist to stay. And Danzo will definitely be killed later, and Konoha's top brass will definitely object. After killing Danzo and then becoming enemies, it is really difficult to stay in Konoha. You are not Sasuke, the second son of the original author, so there is no reason to stay in Konoha. The rebel ninja will definitely be announced at that time. It depends on the author's writing method. Not every Uchiha is Sasuke.

Uchiha travels through the city plot. . What a waste of money. The main character has no clear purpose throughout the book.

Friends! ! ! Poisonous! ! ! ! The protagonist is a waste! ! ! ! The hair is useless! ! ! Obito's licking dog! ! ! ! Too rubbish! ! ! Looking at it makes me want to vomit! ! !

To be honest, I felt disgusted when I called Danzo-sensei, and I was really persuaded to quit.

Change your name, Uchiha, the best dog licker in Konoha

Uchiha Obito and Danzo must die... Also, the protagonist doesn't want revenge after the clan is exterminated, and he only wants revenge after Sai is dead. There is something wrong with his brain I hang around Fei every day, and an enemy goes on missions and does things together every day, and he actually gets it

It's no longer interesting. You can abandon the book. Goodbye.

Shisui died, and the Uchiha clan was exterminated. Then he should be an Avenger, and in his heart he wants to kill the Third Generation, Danzo, the Advisor, Fei and Itachi. Then in order to gain strength and take revenge, hide the hatred in your heart instead of being an indifferent person.

I, the Uchiha Poison King, have tasted hundreds of poisons, but I can still persist in this book, and it is still well written.

It's better to call a kind-hearted Uchiha a coward Uchiha... It looks disgusting...

I feel that the author is poisonous. Danzo kills the main character's brother, destroys his clan, kills his friend Sakai, and also kills his eyes. The protagonist actually thinks that Danzo is good, that's right 🤫. Should I say he deserves to be the protagonist? Sure enough, you can't think about it with normal people's thinking.

Did the protagonist leak information about Hidan to save Asuma? It's ridiculous. The Uchiha clan and the Sarutobi clan have a sworn hatred.

Isn't that the kind Uchiha? . What you wrote is even more disgusting than Obito and Madara. . . He suddenly turned dark. Obito Madara and his friends' goal is at least Infinite Tsukuyomi. You can't accept this sudden darkening. . . .

This book can be rated 10 points, The author's portrayal of Naruto's characters, environment, and thoughts will be given an 8 points. Especially when traveling with A Fei in the ninja world This part is portrayed quite well. It can also be seen as a supplement to the foreshadowing of Obito's conversation with Kakashi after being separated from the tailed beast during the Fourth Ninja War. It is relatively relaxed and cheerful.

Haha, it's the protagonist of the camera again, pretty rubbish

Personally I think it's better than other Naruto stories

So screwed. Depression

Konoha equals kindness. It was the first time I saw the kindness of a murderous ninja.

The problem is the plot. . . He had been Danzo's subordinate, and when Danzo wanted to put a curse on him, he started a fight with the opponent, forcing Danzo to use several Izanagi. After that, Kaleidoscope opened because of Sai's death, and then left Konoha all the way. . . When he met Tsunade on the road, he said that he was always from Konoha. . . This plot seems quite problematic.

The part about Otsutsukiura style is completely redundant. . .

The showdown with Konan... And the blood escape girl... Sigh (´-ωก`) But blood escape is a good setting. Plot. I need to keep using the Crimson King (╬◣ω◢)