Dragon Clan: I Am Writing Your Destiny

I just don't want to write the next 1/3... It's a pity. The first part is great.

It's not bad. It's considered to be an above-average level among fandoms. The writing is pretty good and the plot is okay. However, it's a bit annoying to read several chapters in a row with almost no changes to the original work. And it is unacceptable that the heroine disappears directly in the middle of the plot, and she is separated from the main plot for half a book, respectively, for the sake of a better reunion. This has been putting off the reunion, which is really holding my breath and refusing to let go. It would be better if we could have some extras

There is no need to force a wife for Fingel.

It's well written, but with all due respect, the Riddler should get out of Gotham.

I watched it for a long time, but I didn't understand who the protagonist was

The entire chapter is copied from the original work, changing the fate of some characters and rewinding the plot forcefully and illogically. It is no different from the original work.

... To be honest, in this book, apart from saving the couple Masaki Shutoku and Ye Sheng, and the commissioner of Ryuji, it seems that the protagonist has done nothing. If the protagonist does not appear, compared to the original plot, there will be only three more deaths, including Lu Mingfei. Apart from having one more friend to rely on, nothing has changed. And there are large sections of the original words in this book... I have also tried to write a fanfic about the Dragon Clan. I wanted to change the tragedy of the original work and just follow the plot and appear at key moments... But this is meaningless. This is simply a novel written for myself. It is not a novel that can be sold for money.

The front part is okay, but the back part is copied directly from the original work.

There is no reason why this book is not popular. Come on, the author, so I want to say: The Riddler gets out of Gotham City! ! ! !

Now that it's confirmed that it's a single heroine, don't let the ambiguity fall on both sides, and just take advantage of both sides' money.

There is no one where the senior brother is the protagonist. The senior brother is responsible, strong, perseverant and has a high IQ. If the senior brother knows about the Dragon Clan plot, he can probably penetrate the Dragon Clan world without any problem.

99% Of it is the original work, so what's the point of writing about it?

Obviously, she finally raised Eri as a daughter, and she already has Natsuya, and there were some ambiguous scenes. The little devil kept giving Eri a sense of presence, saying that she wanted her to fall in love with the male protagonist. Isn't this just a good thing for stock trading?

Are there any novels in which Nono is the heroine?

Well written, but I still want to say, get the Riddler out of Gotham

I don't know how many days the red-haired witch has been idle, I miss her 😌; But I know that the author's book currently doesn't have much plot about Nono in Dragon 3, so I can only think about it; But it should be Eri's home court now, and the little monster has already appeared. , I hope to see more of the cute Eri in the next plot; And my Xia Mi, when Xia Mi's plot came to an end, many people said that the sword confused me. I thought, isn't this a relatively good way based on the rationality of the plot? Xia Mi will definitely meet the protagonist in the near future. Looking forward to their reunion! In short, "wait and hope"🤓

I found that in most Dragon Clan fics, the protagonist likes to be a loser, so he must be weak, say a few bad words that are sometimes dull and boring, and add a few embarrassing emotional scenes.

I have also read your first two books. Let's correct the shortcomings of the literary youth, okay? Literary youth has long ceased to be popular.

It's a pretty good fanfic of Dragon Clan. There's no insult to the brain like Long Aotian. There's no male creature that can't walk without thinking about a female creature. There's no self-righteous "internet elementary school student". The most important thing is that it's someone who has read Dragon Clan seriously. There's nothing wrong with following the existing main line. After all, it's already been marked as a fanfic. I sincerely give the author a suggestion. I hope the author can take a look. Regarding Xia Mi's death, it is entirely the protagonist's unilateral statement. Neither Odin nor those greedy people who long for immortality have low IQs. They will not (certainly) really die the king of the earth and the mountain. Especially Odin, who is also a dragon king and knows the dragon king best, let alone a chess player? So when they set their sights on the protagonist, they will definitely be more vigilant. So when Xia Mi later appeared next to the protagonist, there was already a problem, and they stayed together in public for a few days. They were bound to conduct a strict investigation, and problems arose during this investigation. After all, Xia Mi's new identity formed by the new embryo appeared for too short a time, so Xia Mi's so-called hiding in the dark no longer made much sense. There is also the character of Lu Mingfei. After discovering that the three protagonists are living together, according to their relationship, how could he not tease the relationship between the protagonist and Xia Mi, but the speaker has no intention, and the listener has the intention. Chu Zihang's gossip must be curious, and curiosity will be taken to heart. Combined with the character of the protagonist who is generally not close to women, he will have some ideas. Author, isn't this a mistake? Then didn't Xia Mi's plan fail?

It's completely different from the original work. It's copied from the original text starting from the fourth chapter, marginalizing the protagonist, and the character collapse. It is recommended to watch the end of the three powers to save a lot of history behind it.

How about this book? Is it good? ? ?

Is this book written by a certain youth literature guru? The language and details are so accurate.

Anticlimactic butt, has the last 1/3 of the protagonist become a vegetative person? What I look forward to is the perfection of details, just like in the previous article, the same story is told by different people, rather than the original text being translated for me.

In the later period, there was no trace of the protagonist at all, and it was all plagiarism from the original work.

Save money: It's okay in the front, but I'll defend it later.

The entire book is copied from the original Dragon Clan novel. I don't know what your purpose is in writing a fan fiction that doesn't change the plot at all? If you want to copy the book, you can just use some white paper and copy it yourself. Why don't you post some fan fiction instead?

The single heroine Xia Mi died once but was resurrected. The identity of the male protagonist is World Tree. This book is well written, and the plot and writing are excellent. I have only read a little bit of the original version of Dragon Clan, but I personally think this is the ceiling for Dragon Clan fandom. The characters are well-written and the details are very good. Moreover, Chen Motong wrote this book very well, which may be one of the motivations for me to read this book. I once thought she could be the heroine. But Xia Mi is still irreplaceable and I like her very much. The plot is very full, a little bit delayed. The only thing I don't like is that after the White King part ended, the cause and effect of the world was changed, the traces of the protagonist and Chu Zihang's lives were erased, and no one except Lu Mingfei Xia Mi remembered them. Although it is hard to accept that it is a bit regretful, this part is also well written. The plot writing is always online. There may be similarities with the original version of Dragon Clan in the later stage, but it doesn't matter. Worth reading

It was a bad ending, and it ended without filling in many holes. The beginning of Long Si was all original text, and there was nothing to do without the main character. I still wanted to watch the plot with Xia Mi, but there wasn't much in the end.

The author's writing style is really good, and the plot development is not arrogant or impetuous, letting it take its own course. It's a rare good book.

Dear book friends, do you have any other good-looking Dragon Clan fics to recommend? The word count is a little too long, otherwise it would be difficult to develop the plot 😭 There is a shortage of books now 🥺