Jianghu Jinyi

At first I was attracted by Gu Xiaonian's decisiveness in killing. The martial arts world view and writing style are also very good, but I couldn't watch it after nearly 200 chapters. The main reasons are the following poisonous points: 1. The emotional line of the protagonist. I think this book may be written by a female author. Gu Xiaonian's feelings for the heroine in the book seem very artificial and complicated (it's not that female authors can't handle emotional lines well, but I think male authors generally don't write like this). Gu Xiaonian is inexplicably persistent and desperate for the heroine, which is in sharp contrast to the heroine's indifference and indifference to him. However, the author portrays Gu Xiaonian as a decisive, ruthless, selfish, rational and calm person. Of course, it is understandable that the hero is deeply in love. But after the heroine said that she did have a plot against him and approached him and was indifferent to Gu Xiaonian's emotional expression afterwards, Gu Xiaonian still took risks like a fool, regardless of the consequences, which really felt very poisonous. I didn't read the rest of the book so I don't know how the two of them ended up, but I saw a book review that said the heroine was bisexual, and the hero had a tragic ending, but because of the heroine's words, he turned into a saint and went back to work as a royal guard. I'm glad I didn't continue reading. 2. The relationship between the protagonist and his brother Gu Yun. To be honest, I think Gu Yun is the real protagonist. He has the treatment of a normal protagonist: his situation, appearance, wisdom and strength are all on the line. In contrast to this character, Gu Xiaonian seems dwarfed and at a loss. He seems selfish, ruthless and unjust. At the same time, Gu Xiaonian would become extremely embarrassed when he saw his brother, and later he would hate him. Really, if the author really wants to write Gu Yun as an enemy, there is no need to be so pretentious, it would be more comfortable to be honest. 3. The collapse of Gu Xiaonian's own personality. Gu Xiaonian was a calm, calm, ruthless, selfish, and decisive person, but later he fell apart. In his obsession with the heroine, he constantly "enlightened" and wanted to become a saint. I have only read nearly 200 chapters. These are the poisonous points that I have summarized for abandoning the book. Of course, everyone has different preferences. I can't say, but others will like it. I wrote these just to share my thoughts as a reader, not to blackmail the book or the author. I read the 200 chapters of this book for about a day and a half. I read it very carefully, and it also brought me a lot of spiritual pleasure. Anyone who is interested can read it. The poisonous points that I personally think may not be the same for others. After all, I think the writing is good, although I don't know how to write it later. (If you want to say "Come on, come on, I'll give you a pen and you can write", don't do it. This sentence is funny but also logically untenable. It's just a book review, not a black book.)

I think the previous part is okay. I'm used to skipping and watching. The only thing I feel uncomfortable is that I have been underground for ten years and had such a big hatred. In the end, because the woman I loved belonged to the imperial court, I let the woman's foster father go. Then the foster father asked him to help the imperial court. He took the common people as his righteousness and agreed. It made me sick. 🤢

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Those who were bombed came here to report.

I came in for free and read it in one go. I subscribed for two chapters today and made up one monthly pass for two recommendations. I feel good. My humble opinion: be more careful when dividing chapters. I updated two chapters but I didn't see anything. It's like seeing two pieces of nonsense. Even if it is a transitional chapter, you either don't explain something or you don't want to make a Suspense at the end of the Broken Hand Dog. It's better to read it when you are mature, but the guaranteed monthly pass and recommendations are still available. Come on, author.

Recommend a book,

How old is the author and does he have any life experience? It feels like the writing is a mess! The writing is okay.

I was bombarded by silver. The book is very good and I have ordered all of it. Come on!

It starts off very well, with characters, plot, and suspense. The background of the story is also large enough! The protagonist has a distinct personality and is decisive in killing, which is great! ! In the middle period, above the temple, the protagonist gradually began to decline, his personality became blurred, his character became less and less full, he swayed left and right, and he felt like a different person. The situation in the temple is written in a very suspenseful way, or in other words, it is pretentious and mysterious, making people confused. It seems like all the characters are schizophrenic! ! Then the martial arts is between the high martial arts plane, similar to the concept of "Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty". . . In the early stage of the competition, life and death were eliminated with a sword, and there were more and more mysterious and mysterious spiritual battles. It felt like "Debut Chapter", "Temple Chapter" and "Re-Enter the Jianghu Chapter"! It is difficult to define the content of this book. If I continue writing it, I will have to break through the void and become a celestial being, and become a cultivator.

How can I put it, few people have read martial arts novels now, and they were slow to gain popularity in the early stage, which discouraged most readers. However, the author's writing method, which is similar to the movie "Xiu Chun Dao", is still very refreshing.

What the hell, I just finished the order and it was free of charge the next day, you girl! !

I don't have much else to do in the morning, so let's talk about my views and expectations about this book. From the beginning to now, I think the only thing that is not very good is that the strength improved too quickly at the beginning. It makes people feel unbalanced. What can I say? If you practice for a few days, you will be stronger than others for decades. This is not good. . . There is no sense of immersion, just like the unsatisfying feeling of those system streams and invincible streams... But I have to say that this book is well written. I think it is no worse than Feng Qiyue's. I have read his villains and demon sects, and I always feel that the calculations and strategies he writes are very blunt, not smooth and reasonable. How can I say that it is too deliberate to calculate for the sake of calculation... I feel that the author's book is more reasonable, but too few people have read it. As a senior member, after reading it, my fan value ranked 52nd. How many people want to subscribe to it all. . . No wonder the author feels frustrated, but I think what the author needs is persistence. Your word count is too few. In today's era of online writing, basically more than 2 million words are needed, and you only have a few hundred thousand words now Keep your standards high and don't be toxic. The more words you have, the more you will have a chance to become an instant hit. At least the first few martial arts channels have this level There are many novels nowadays that are unreasonable and cannot be justified even if you read them without thinking. . . Probably because the entry barrier is too low, many comrades who can't even write essays are now writing novels! There are really few good novels!

I rather agree with being too lazy to use my brain - laziness is a state, and people usually stop being lazy under the premise of "living" that they can accept. In other words, in order to survive, we are forced to move fast. Living is something that is sometimes very simple, but when it comes to the male protagonist, he is no longer allowed to be lazy. Lazyness is the surname, and laziness does not mean stupidity. Only the laziness of the male protagonist, as well as IQ and EQ, can help him get out of the sea of ​​misery [Note in parentheses, dual quotient is very important, and if you work hard to improve it, you can make some progress, so keeping dual quotient online is the first priority - the male protagonist is not lacking] There is another interesting point in this article, dry humor. It's interesting to think about it carefully. For example, a martial arts secret book with a long number of words will make people obsessed with it—— But at the time, they just didn't know the hidden meaning. When this phenomenon occurs, one is a problem of writing power and the other is a problem of rhythm control The rhythm of the opening chapter is undoubtedly fast. However. The price of the rhythm is the lack of details and the lack of necessary foreshadowing and description. As a result, when conflicts broke out, the intensity was insufficient. Personally, I think the author can focus on this aspect. This is the author's second book. It is much better than the first one, so it is worth reading. I also hope that the author's third book will be better!

There are still twenty-nine chapters left, and I'm ready to kill. Considering that the administrator's book is not updated very quickly, it will probably take more than ten days. 🤫

The protagonist said he wanted to be a wolf, but ended up living as a dog, but he could obviously become a human.

I am also one of the people who was bombed by the Silver Alliance, but as an author, my perspective on reading books is somewhat different from that of readers. I originally just read it and left, but after reading the comments in the comment area and the author's single chapter, I always felt the need to write something. The first impression this book gave me was like what Master Abbot said about Lin Zhennan: It was like a three-year-old baby walking in a busy city with gold in his hand, and everyone would try to rob it. Is this book well written? I have to say, it's not bad, but there is definitely a question mark as to whether this book is worth a Silver Alliance. Therefore, the many criticisms the author has received for this are actually a matter of course, so don't worry about it. After all, if the reader thinks you are worth it, then it must be worth it. Then, let me give my opinion a little bit. This book is certainly not bad. Although it is a martial arts novel, it does not fall into the mold of traditional martial arts. There is not much style of the ancient times. The combination of the court and the rivers and lakes, the angle is quite novel, and the writing is handsome and clear. It is definitely more than enough to support a good martial arts novel. Even the character creation is remarkable, and the clues are handled very clearly. It is worthy of being a reader who has signed up to complete this work in the urban category. Some people say that this novel is so confusing that one cannot distinguish between east, west, north and south. This is a bit ridiculous. It can only be attributed to the fast-paced reading that makes him ignore too many information points, resulting in confusion. In fact, the clues buried in this novel echo back and forth, not to say subtle, but a rigorous and measured evaluation is still possible. Of course, after boasting, opinions must be raised. First of all, since I don't have much time, the temporary reading progress is thirty chapters, but this has exceeded the length of twenty chapters I originally expected. Therefore, the following opinions are based on the length I have seen. For this novel, in addition to praising the author's experience, I feel a little sorry for the author's immaturity. Because of his immaturity, the author did not refine his novel to be exciting enough and present it to the readers. Although every clue is very clear, he does not have enough awareness to actively outline these clues for the readers, but allows the readers to discover them themselves. You have to know that today's readers are very lazy. First of all, the first five chapters provide very detailed clues and information. Using Jianghu Morning Post as an introduction, they lay out Fengmanlou, the death case of the county guard, Fang Xian and the realm of martial arts. I will not count the large and small foreshadowing and hidden clues buried in the middle. In short, the author is very active in digging holes. But it wasn't until Chapter 7, when Zhao Xinian appeared, that it was like a rope, stringing these scattered beads into a bead chain. The protagonist's adventures, dangers, and crushing feelings followed. The next twenty chapters are all based on this. It can even be said that in a sense, this is a loose and useless start.

I saw this book last night, read two chapters and found it very interesting. Then I read it in one go, and ended up updating one chapter today! ! ! It's so uncomfortable. It's rare to see such a high-quality novel. It's very attractive. I hope I can continue to maintain the standard! Finally, do you have any good books to recommend? Book shortage

By the way, the protagonist's wife was being played by someone else even though she was trying to resist her, and the protagonist was still outside guarding the door for them, even though the other person was also a woman. Is this considered a cuckold?

The disease of literary youth is that they like to torture their masters as art.

Today's martial arts only has martial arts and no chivalry, only intrigues and intrigues. No wonder the martial arts channel is half-dead.

The more I write, the worse it gets. The person who killed my brother is in front of me. It's really because of a woman that it's over.

You can read this book. But it still lacked some flavor. The first is the character of the protagonist. A person who was reborn and worked in the government for a year. Hey, especially the part about the factory owner. It's really awkward to watch. The long-term worker said he wanted to eat fish and jumped into the lake to catch fish for him. As a result, when he got to the back, he refused to kneel down. Why is there such a big difference between before and after? If it were the elders who were doing it for him. If she doesn't kneel down later, won't it hurt his elders? A modern person still doesn't know the importance of not taking immediate losses. And the part about the beggar. Someone just saved your life and gave you some kind advice. The result is still there. To be honest, I don't know what to say. Everything else about this book was fine, except for the character of the main character, which I really didn't like.

It's a waste of money. If you are in a good mood and like to abuse yourself, read more. This book can be finished, so finish it as soon as possible. Everything is written. You force yourself to torture yourself and make readers uncomfortable. Why should I spend money on you to buy the pain?

I like this martial arts system [Acquired Innate Master Tianren] It reminds me of the joy of watching "The Legend of the Half-Xia of the Martial Arts".

Martial arts is not easy, please support me. . . .

​​ ​​Feiyu suit, embroidered spring knife. The dull blade has a carved handle, and the hem of the clothes flutters against the sunlight, covering half of the waist badge.                                                                                                                                                                                                                         Not being in the court yet fallen into the system, being freed from darkness yet fallen into the world.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     .

I watched more than half of it, and I didn't even know what I was watching. There were so many characters, I couldn't remember some of their names, and the plot was confusing. I mainly felt that the background was in line with my idea of martial arts, and the suspense of the main plot protagonist's father, brother, and old beggar made me insist on watching. But the support The storyline is a little too sloppy. The secret realm is not interesting at all. The thunder in the fairy mansion is heavy but the raindrops are small. I don't know what kind of ghosts and snakes are written in the secret realm. Furthermore, it is unreasonable. The protagonist does not know anything about attracting stars, but he only used it once. There were so many battles in the middle. In terms of inheritance, a great person will not find a good successor during his lifetime. He has to find a suitable successor after death. Even if he does not find a suitable successor during his lifetime, he should leave the inheritance in the sect and wait for the disciples of the sect who have the opportunity to inherit it. There is no possibility of outsiders interfering. What are the benefits?

To be honest, this is a very good martial arts book. It is not a traditional martial arts book, but it thoroughly writes about the martial arts atmosphere. The intersection of official circles and rivers and lakes is stitched together very well. Although I feel that there are loopholes in the setting of Gu Xiaonian, there are still some small details that need to be paid attention to. In terms of style, this should be the real martial arts in online writing. The style of speech is elegant and not as tacky as most online writing. I would say it is much better than other novels on the martial arts channel. I feel that most of the novels on the martial arts channel are fantasy novels dressed in martial arts clothes. It becomes boring after seeing too many novels. I think the most graphic scene should be the scene where Xiao Gu shouts "Jinyiwei is taking someone." My favorite character is actually Yan Cenha. It's hard to say why, haha. The hutongkou of online novels should be developing towards the end of fantasy in the later stages of most books, such as being invincible forever and ever. Jiang Jin may develop like this or not. This is the reason why I am now fattening up for slaughter That's it, I think this book is very suitable for my appetite Old bookworms can try it, it is very good Friends who are interested in martial arts can also try it I am not a sailor, and the vast number of book friends

It's so long-winded. The protagonist keeps beeping in his heart, but doesn't take any action. He keeps saying what he wants to do, saying he is a hot chick, wants to kill people, and wants to become stronger. It's not good to talk too much about these things

It's an inexplicable thing, the more I write about it, the worse it gets. I can't read the reviews later... The more powerful the protagonist's martial arts, the higher his consciousness seems to be. I guess he became a saint in the end, and he was also drunk.