Spiritual Scholar

Why are so few people reading a book that can confer godhood? As an old bookworm, I read most of the book and didn't find anything wrong with it. I highly recommend it.

Finished with flowers, this should be the author's first truly completed work. Obviously the author is suitable for writing novels with complete settings and logic. The poor performance in the early and middle stages led to the author obviously making a crucial and fatal mistake, which is to follow routines. In the early stages, you can easily find some classic pretense and slap-in-the-face routines, but this problem disappeared in the middle and later stages, and the author's own style gradually took shape. For example, the first half of hope Ling and the second half of Yuan Tong have different starting points, and they are more inclined to tell the story well, which is worthy of praise. However, I almost couldn't resist the persuasion points in the early stage. If you are not strong enough and are persuaded to quit, it is normal. If you have resisted the early persuasion points, congratulations... Good days, come on.

A work with great potential and also a very novel one. Compared to still writing assembly-line articles in the old categories and routine articles that directly ride on the popularity of mystery, the author has written his own style in this Cthulhu text. It is not as desperate as the traditional Cthulhu worldview (at least humans still have the power to resist, which cannot be underestimated, which is more in line with Shuangwen's consistent style). I think he is a combination of traditional Cthulhu text (Cthulhu worldview, evil things) and human species It is a combination of ethnic resistance essays, and the combination is very good. The highlight of this book is the author's description of the powers of each curse star and the relationship between evil objects and civilization. This is a good innovation point So far, I feel that the score of this book is not worthy of its quality, and I can't explain why I can only hope that the author will work hard, and I will try my best to support it (I voted for it in the past few months)

It can be seen that the author has spent a lot of effort on the setting, such as the training system, the setting of the world view, and the foreshadowing left at the beginning. The ending should have been conceived from the beginning. The world view setting is actually somewhat similar to that of Lord of Mysteries, but it is more profound than Mysteries. There are many excavations and enrichments based on Mysteries, which can be regarded as a logical and self-consistent system. The early stage was too mindless and cool, and the plot of the protagonist pretending to be cool and slapped in the face was too deliberate. Maybe it was a plot added by the author to cater to the readers? Actually it's not necessary. It can be said that the ability to read it in the early stage is entirely due to the author's rich and detailed settings. It's much better in the later stages. It's getting better and better in the later stages. The author himself is probably making continuous progress. (I wonder if this is the first novel written by the author?) If the author can maintain this level, I will definitely follow the next book.

It has only written about the confrontation between humans and evil spirits. The confrontation between humans and humans has not yet surfaced. Personally, I recommend that the following types of characters can appear: 1. Extreme pacifists: Claiming to find a way for humans and evil things to coexist 2. Conservatives: believe that the status quo should be maintained and wait and see, and concessions should be made in exchange for time 3. Escape faction: believe that failure is certain and need to back up civilization and escape from the galaxy 4. Surrender faction: believe that demons are higher-level existences and are looking for solutions. Methods for all human beings to transform into demons 5. Extremely radical idea: Fight, fight, fight, and let him flood the world after I die 6. Other forces: the android protection organization, hoping to provoke a war and find opportunities to improve the social status of androids These people can be divided into purely selfish villains, heroes who have ideals but have chosen the wrong path, ordinary people who carry out justice like the bicycle riders in One Punch Man, or pure evil like the boss in Golden Wind. In this way, a book's facial features are basically enough, and the conflicts between people are enough. The occurrence of conflicts can be natural, and it depends on the author's ability to tell stories and make readers happy. ps: If you can, please don't design a pacifist in Evil Things. Every time I see this kind of character, it makes me feel like I've eaten a fly.

The setting is detailed, and the theory of the training system is relatively complete. It is estimated that the setting alone is tens of thousands of words... The atmosphere of Cthulhu is very strong, and the character creation is very intelligent, but it is also too calm. I can't be with the girl I like, and I worry about the BOSS coming. It is very real, unlike the current cool articles! This complete theory also makes the training system very real. The training system refers to a lot of psychological knowledge and philosophical knowledge, in many places It's too academic, and I didn't use my own words to lower the threshold! The early stage is relatively dull, and the setting is relatively new, so not many people will accept it... And the setting is complicated. I have basically forgotten what extraordinary classes are after not reading it for a month. It is more suitable to read it in one go, not suitable for following... Generally speaking, this is the work of a craftsman, but it is not an excellent commercial online novel!

I feel like I've seen a new world

Regarding the protagonist's choice of the Black Blade, the comments have become polarized. Both sides are justified, but the defenders have ignored one important thing, and that is the foreshadowing made by the author before! That is the general environment of the world! The author spent more than one hundred and seventy chapters describing a world where human beings are in precarious situation, in danger, and are hunted by evil creatures as food. There are no sages (royal level) among human beings! There is only a sage-level combat power, and above the sage there is a big demon, and above the big demon there is Leviathan! The author spent more than one hundred and seventy chapters paving the way for the uniqueness and talent of the protagonist, doing his best to belittle the black blade, elevate the world of illusion, and tell readers that the protagonist will inevitably become a powerful sage, or even a great demon, Leviathan! The protagonist can open up a new path for mankind! But now, in order to fight two monsters, the protagonist abandons his martial arts and chooses the black blade that he tried to disparage as much as possible. This is really like putting a piece of shit in the reader's mouth! Of course, you can say that it sublimated the protagonist's character, and that's true. With the author's description at the time, I was indeed moved to the point of tears. But the problem is that mankind has lost hope because of your impulse! The future is lost! This is seriously inconsistent with the image described above of being as rational as a machine and as intelligent as a demon! The conflict of images brings a strong sense of separation and dissonance! This sense of separation and dissonance pulled me out of my emotion, and I started to think about what I had overlooked! Is it really worth it for the protagonist to do this?

How can I put it this way? I feel that the setting is very interesting and the world view is also very exquisite. It has the feeling of a space opera where human civilization is threatened by various threats. I feel that the author has designed these things very carefully. The main thing that supported me to pursue the story was the worldview designed by the author. The character of the protagonist is also quite normal. He didn't act impulsively even after knowing that someone was coveting his friends. I feel that the author could have designed the villain better and dug deeper into his background motivations and so on. And another thing is that actually a spell (? It seems to be called this) can be used in many ways. You can explore it. The constant killing of monsters and drawings is a bit too hasty. I feel that it would be better to pay attention to the rhythm. In short, the creative setting is very powerful, but I feel that the writing rhythm needs to be more balanced, and I feel that the character of this protagonist is more intelligent and commanding, so I think it would be interesting to stick to the original character of the protagonist. Finally, thank you to the author for bringing us this very interesting work 🤭🤭🤭

I spent a lot of time in the early stages to pave the way for the fantasy world, but when I was fighting monsters and couldn't bear to see others sacrifice, I gave up planning and used a space black blade that I didn't like at all, wasn't good at, had low potential and had a single function, and then immediately pounced on it with enthusiasm. To be honest, the reversal was too fast, too sudden, and it felt so poisonous that I couldn't stand it. Even though I guessed that it might be reversed later or that the two-in-one would be stronger, I still couldn't stand it. It was too poisonous.

I spent several nights reading it The setting of the book is good, good luck to the author! I have two immature suggestions: 1: The whole book is not divided into volumes, and there is no staged transition. The rhythm feels chaotic. 2: The epidemic serves as the starting point for the setting of the book, but we should not rely too much on it. The latest part about the description of evil objects. The style of the control system is agnostic and invincible. It feels a bit head-on.

Very nice to watch for a day. After seeing the update, although there are some small flaws in the front, it is getting better in the back. The setting is also good, and the world background is relatively close to reality.

When I saw Rosalie's confession and the male protagonist's rejection, I thought it was a piece of rubbish. I abandoned the book and either didn't write about the relationship, or I chose a female protagonist and engaged in this kind of emotional sadomasochism. It's really fucking disgusting.

When you see a junk book, you have to criticize it and leave directly, otherwise the author will never make progress, and there will be more and more junk books at the starting point.

Good book, but too tiring to read. The settings are quite cumbersome and I really can't stand it anymore. In addition, I can accept that the protagonist is involved in a conspiracy, but from the beginning, he is on the opposite side of a character with ceiling strength, which still cannot be well accepted.

The most annoying thing is this kind of plot that forcibly arranges the distance between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Or there is no female protagonist at all. The male and female protagonists obviously love each other deeply, but the male protagonist has to reject the female protagonist for xx reasons. Did you learn from Qiong Yao decades ago? Is this plot outline really based on your brain? Literary youth disease needs to be cured

Why do we always talk about the protagonist, Our Lady? Is it wrong to be patriotic? So strange(´-ω-`)

The most amazing thing is that the title of the book is "Psychic Scholar", but the protagonist's ability has nothing to do with the mind at all. The main ability of Puppet is the ability to control oneself and plunder dead monsters. The secondary ability of Black Blade is offensive... Is it even remotely related to the Psychic Scholar? As I said before, I built a virtual earth in my mind, with strong illusion ability, but I have rarely used it. The biggest use is to predict the enemy's actions... I was shocked. Instead of using illusion to confuse the enemy, I created a game-like SL ability to simulate the enemy's attack. What kind of spiritual scholar are you?

This book has the biggest flaw: an only-child family. This kind of parasitic product can only cause the population to shrink and the society to age significantly. For a society that often fights monsters, often dies, and has experienced the catastrophe of the Wind Mother, and the death of the entire human race, it is almost extinct. There are still a large number of only-child families. How can this society continue without extinction?

[Contains spoilers, please be careful] I am almost at the end of this writing, so I would like to write some thoughts as a reader who has been following the book all the way. The author seems to be well prepared for the construction of the world structure, background settings, skill logic, extraordinary routes, etc., So the description is easy to follow. Many places are described very dryly, so there is enough text to describe skills, background, system and other things. However, the problem is that it is too dry, basically all descriptions of skills and explanations of spells. The author wrote about the growth process of the protagonist earlier. Since Lin Chen is the boss, the overall description can make readers nervous and ignore this relatively dry fact. After telling the readers that the God of Creation is covering the protagonist, the description of the battle is still the same, which does not seem to be oppressive enough. The author's writing has always lacked the description of the picture, and the readers lack a sense of picture when reading the book. What we read more is that we remember the skills and several key characters, but we failed to store these battles and the places we visited as pictures in our minds. In my opinion, the originally exciting battle was described as a running account. I don't know whether it is because there are too many third-person descriptions that lead to a lack of empathy for the protagonist, or the author himself wants to write a group drama. But even for group portraits, the author has less descriptions, descriptions, profiles, and growth of other characters. The backgrounds of Zhang Fan and Prophet may be impressive, but there is no further description of them. If I were to evaluate it as a whole, when it was released, it was a story that uncovered the mystery and killed Lin Chen. It was a story with tension and relaxation, pressure and motivation. It was an above-average level, and I recommended it several times. After that, the shortcomings were exposed, the description unfolded too quickly, and it was considered average. I couldn't even recommend the book. The author's writing style is above the average level among online articles. If he can make use of his strengths and avoid his weaknesses, he should be able to make greater use of it.

It's so rubbish. I actually chose the most rubbish grade as my natal curse and discarded it.

To be honest, it was quite annoying to watch. The big boss, Xiaoyao Sword Immortal Lin Xian (that's what his name seems to be?), Appeared too early. He is one of the strongest combat powers in mankind. The protagonist was crushed in all directions, and it is foreseeable that he will be crushed for at least two or three volumes. That's all, he actually wrote out all of his character, greedy for life and fear of death, traitorous to the country and seeking glory, cowardly, and the biggest mistake in the novel is of course coveting the heroine. And such a person actually appeared in the first volume. I looked at the back of the catalog and it seemed that there was no plot about him at all. In other words, I had to endure this frustration... I couldn't bear it, so I gave up.

The further back it gets, the more chaotic it gets, and it's a bit hard to see through. The front is a work of conferring gods, the back...

The structure and background of this book are okay, but the power system is extremely confusing. I saw that the author constantly competes with the number of words, and somehow he can win a few chapters in a question-answering competition. The good background is wasted! ! !

After reading the comments in the circle, I would like to say that this book is not for beginners. The author has his own ideas. There are many interesting articles in Qidian. Don't curse here.

Although it incorporates many routines, such as cyberpunk, Cthulhu, and even memes about swallowing the stars and wandering the earth, as well as various senses of immediacy, we have to deny that this is a qualified online book. I personally like books with diverse and harmonious settings. I can see that the author's settings in this book are very rich and deep (or complex). I hope this book can reach 1 million. Of course, the shortcomings are also obvious. You can basically guess the routines, and even the main plot. If you don't plan to expand the map in the mid-term, the ending will be very easy to guess; and except for the practice setting and the framework of some near-future theories, the rest is a bit empty (or not shown?). That's it for now

What the author wrote is quite good. But it's really slow. . . The pace is too slow. Always trying to arrange a lot of events in a very short time, which leads to the protagonist's failure to improve. In addition, the protagonist's strength is so low, but he can be the savior every time, which makes other people very useless. . . According to this rhythm, it will take 50 chapters for the protagonist to reach the first level.

Luo Feixue

The text is foggy The settings are very complicated to begin with, and there are often sentences that seem to be incomprehensible due to grammatical problems. For example The probability of awakening the first-grade natal curse is one in 100 million, or even lower than this. Currently, most practitioners who master the first-grade natal curse have most of the first-grade natal curses evolved from other supreme chapters and analyzed from the corpses of prince-level evil creatures. However, no one has successfully cultivated it, and some have sublimated it from the second-grade natal curse. Who can understand what this is talking about? No one can master it for a while and succeed in practicing it. Paragraphs like this that do not speak human language appear not once or twice.

Luo Feixue