Secrets of the Avenue

Limited exemption, see now in one breath. Please rate it, it starts very well and has a sense of tension. But after forty chapters, it gradually became cliche, such as rankings, genius battles, pretending to slap people in the face, etc. To be honest, the writing was rather stiff. However, later on (probably starting from being chased), the twists and turns have returned and the level has returned. The recent breakthrough context is very well written, and the previous foreshadowing is all connected (but it also brings a problem, that is, after all the foreshadowing is finished, how will the author maintain a sense of rhythm later? Will it be unfinished?). Overall, this is a pretty good novel. In the middle, it can be seen that the author wants to write some conventional pretentious and slap-in-the-face routines, but unfortunately the conflicts are unnatural and a bit toxic. The author still needs to practice more on this point. But the creativity is very good, and the design of most realms is very innovative. It is not a simple flow of killing monsters and upgrading. It needs to be read with a brain.

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is brilliant. It's not a casual plot. It's cleverly conceived. I can feel the author's design and ideas, which is very pleasant.

The writing in this book is okay at the beginning, but it starts to fall into the clichés later on. The key point is only a hundred thousand words. You can just put it on the shelf and trick the pigs into killing it. Originally, I thought it might be weird and mysterious, but it turned out that what happened after contacting the official organization was really upsetting. Also, could the character of the protagonist be tougher? We don't want to see a weak protagonist grow up in that way. You can just be complete and then write your story well. If you don't know how to create a character, just take your time. If you sit there for a long time, what kind of bullshit do you create? He is just a licking dog. If you don't seize the opportunity to change your destiny, the protagonist still licks girls and plays games. It's all her novel. Can you have some imagination?

The previous twenty and thirty-three issues were very well written. But in the end, it's just an ordinary urban superpower routine. This kind of routine is badly written, with no intention at all. It can be said that the first 20 chapters have the rhythm of becoming a god, but in the later chapters, it can be completely felt that the author is simply making money to make money. The writing is a commercial and enjoyable article, which can even be said to be a studio article.

A logical closed loop cannot be formed. If I ask you to translate something important, won't I be on guard against you?

Made me laugh

Mainly used to facilitate checking the abilities of each realm. Most of the description comes from the original text, and a small part is filled in based on performance. The seven levels of teaching are sorted from low to high. There is no clear order for pseudo realms (actually it is adjusted according to the length of the description text). The letters of the stars are in ascending order. The deadline is 2023.09.29. The flesh-colored area clearly contains missing information.

This book is at least a good book. Some of the inexplicable comments in the comment area are really puzzling. I hope everyone will take their time to appreciate it.

Is someone messing with the author? It seems like someone is trying to hack him. These negative reviews all have the same theme. I haven't read the book yet, which makes me very hesitant. If I don't want to read this book, I'll add it to my bookshelf first.

After meeting the official, there is no need to read it. It feels like there has been a substitution, the difference is too big.

The writing before I met the official was really good. After meeting me, I felt like I was a completely different person, especially when I entered some training base, where it was just a blank slate and the plot started. I was really blind to the subject matter.

Was this book written by a different person? Why is there such a big gap between before and after? What is the difference between what is written later and the upgrading flow of those cool articles? Don't have too many like this. I can make it up for you in the later stage. Even girls who play games are also practitioners. Then the protagonist goes everywhere to leapfrog monsters, hide his identity everywhere, save the world, and then contribute some cultivation techniques in exchange for resources. Then write some heroic sacrifices to sensationalize.

The author talks about the immortals as being lofty, but the actual immortals they describe are just like fools.

I was almost misled by the trolls below. The writing and the story are both good. I think it's a good book so far.

For the first 20 chapters, I looked at it from the author's perspective again. Top grade ambrosia level. Then it changes directly after entering the official website. However, if the protagonist does not say that he killed the traitor, it can be seen that the author wrote it himself. Let's talk about the studio a little bit. To put it bluntly, it feels too strong, and it feels like a second-hand Japanese comic from ten years ago. Let's wait and see later

Have you really never seen a woman? Are there still such disgusting things out there now?

Finally a new book is out! I just finished reading the first few chapters, they are very exciting. Just not enough quantity. The author will update soon!

I can't stand the bunch of ghosts and monsters in the comment section, so I'll say a few words for the author Micro spoilers The book has a good pace from the beginning to the present, from the initial feeling of being weird when an ordinary person encounters a mysterious event, to the joy of becoming a mystic and understanding the mystery as an ordinary person, and then the understanding of the fate of oneself, human beings, and stars through mystery, etc., Which improves the pattern of the whole book. . .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              . The style of the story written by the author originally changes with the protagonist's understanding and encounters of the world and changes in the social environment. I don't understand why current readers have to look at the grown-up ultimate protagonist at the beginning, and what style of opening should be continued to the end. It seems that nothing has grown. You can guess the ending after reading the beginning of this kind of book. If you want to read it, there are many books with hundreds of chapters about fighting, so why bother to come here to complain. By the way, if you like watching protagonists who have not grown up, I recommend you to watch Lu Ming of the Dragon Clan.

1. It's a bit cruel, the boss can play the leading role casually. He wouldn't be happy if I didn't mess with him... 2. Big poison, how many times has the protagonist met the second-level person behind the scenes? It was actually measured into a dream. . Wouldn't it be easy for any second-level person to kill a first-level person without anyone noticing? ? The kind that is hard to guard against Which first-order dares to jump out of reality? I was killed and I don't know how I died.

This book is actually a new book by a spiritual scholar? ? ? Have you sold your account? ? ?

To be honest, what I wrote above is really good, but when I write about the heroine, I become so smart. Brother, is your girlfriend watching you write a book next to you? Why don't you just write about eunuchs, and don't write about a heroine?

Let's make some complaints. I've read a little over a hundred chapters. To be honest, I think the writing was pretty good. Quite serious too. The design plot is also online. Personally, I think the biggest problem is the pig's feet. It feels too young. No knowledge, no thoughts, no complete three views. It seems superficial and ignorant, vulgar and second-rate. The point is, there is no possibility of growth in sight. By the way, this is a spiritual practice book. In a world where great power belongs to oneself, how can people believe that pig's feet can become powerful if they look like this? Most of the supporting characters have a chuunibyou manga style. There are too many portrayals of difficulties in understanding and they are too discouraging.

When will the new book be released? I've been waiting for a long time.

What about the author's new book? ? 🤔🤔

When will I publish a new book? The last few books feel a bit worse than The Psychic Scholar.

The Psychic Scholar is really good to read, and the author's first eunuch book, The Enlightened Ones, is also very good. The current one is really uncomfortable to read, and I look forward to the author's next book.

Regarding the author's protagonist, I really don't understand why he has so many ideas that are completely different from normal people. He can't even think of things that normal people should think of, and he can even think wrongly. There is always a poisonous point that suddenly pops up for you in some inexplicable place. It is said that all these poisonous points are due to the author's protagonist's intermittent mental retardation when encountering things. I want to know what the author is thinking?

I feel that this book is far inferior to "Psychic Scholar". Apart from anything else, someone is checking the protagonist's family information and saying that they can't be arrested without evidence. This is wartime, and espionage, treason and crimes against humanity can all be charged directly! It's a well-written book among spiritual scholars, but in this book, the external enemies are all fighting within themselves!

Isn't the author selling his account? Why?

And I really don't like this idea of ​​the restraint system overriding the Immortal and Buddha system.