I Drew a Planet

I picked up this book from the previous one, "The Psychic Scholar", and this book is a very good read. The title of this book really delays the content. If you haven't started reading yet, you can read this comprehensive introduction first. The general background is that there are two major civilization camps, the technological side (human beings in the original solar system) and the immortal side (distant planets). The immortal side invaded the earth, defeated first and then won. Humanity fled. After settling, it sent many exploration teams. The protagonist had been dormant for seven hundred years and unfortunately arrived at the base camp of the immortal civilization. In terms of settings, cultivating immortals is a mixture of paths (13 kinds of auras) and forward and reverse acting methods. The power system is not inflated. The physical body of many paths does not increase much. After the protective aura is exhausted, it is basically the strength of a human body. The technology on the technology side can compete with the immortal cultivators (but it is difficult to face weirder paths, such as gods with similar memetic pollution). The technological side and the immortal side are learning from each other (plagiarism) after meeting. There are many unknown things at present. For example, why did the immortal cultivators hunt down the Source Qi cultivators on the earth? How did the immortal civilization appear on Earth across such a long distance? The subsequent puzzle-solving process should be good In terms of characters, the protagonist is very smart, has excellent combat awareness, has empathy but is not a virgin. The author's heroine is very brilliant, smart, lively, and particularly meticulous. There is no excessive emotional drama. The two parties are companions in a strange world who trust each other. Beyond that, the other characters have brains and act in their own self-interest. As for the description of the battle, I have to single it out. The author's writing is very exciting and has many details. Take the example of the male protagonist fighting the Fairy of Heaven's Qi in the game. The male protagonist collects intelligence, analyzes the opponent's abilities and limitations, uses the terrain, and uses CO2 to influence the opponent to restore the protective energy. In terms of writing, it goes without saying that in the plot of the protagonist's journey away from Nanmen Er, the author made me experience the sadness of the lifespan theory. He slept for two hundred years twice, and the world has changed. That guy, who would have thought that the doggerel written by the protagonist in high spirits before setting off could actually turn into a knife. He was so full of ambition at that time, and how heartbroken he is now, screenshot above. In short, you won't lose money after reading this book.

Just read the latest chapter yesterday. The previous book "Psychologist" was very shocked by the new ghost story world setting with Cthulupi. It was the first time I saw such a large and self-consistent fantasy world in an online novel. This book has refreshed my understanding of science fiction online books. The last time I saw something like this was in "The Forgotten Southland" and "Breath". I really admire the author's creative ability. The following is a bit of personal selfishness. I very much hope that the follow-up will not follow the colonialist narrative like most fantasy and science fiction online articles. After all, advanced civilization has never been just about advanced productivity, but also a more noble morality. (Currently, we have seen the buds of this aspect, and we are looking forward to the follow-up development)

There is a reason why this book is well written but not popular. Readers who want to read science fiction are disappointed when they find that the latter part is all about cultivation. Readers who want to read fantasy (cultivating immortals) will immediately dismiss the early science fiction content that has little to do with cultivation. This book actually wants to write about Ma Zhe + fantasy (cultivation of immortality) + science fiction. In fact, Shan Na's practice system in this book is very innovative. Twelve types of spiritual energy practice are equivalent to twelve professions. Each type of spiritual energy is divided into two routes, forward and reverse (with completely different abilities, reverse cultivation is stronger than forward cultivation, and can be both forward and reverse). Occupations can also be converted according to the cycle of spiritual energy improvement.

A spark of civilization who wants to open up an alien planet has little training time. He does not learn to drive a spaceship, does not learn geological survey, does not engage in political economy, and does not engage in education and inheritance. Instead, he is playing werewolf, a detective, and a special soldier. It is a wonderful feeling for a spark of civilization to act like a lone hero. He does not want to be a general but a soldier. This feeling is really subtle.

The foreshadowing is too long-winded! Training is bullshit! When humans encounter a supernatural civilization, they will never go all out to develop the supernatural! Unless it is confirmed that the supernatural is definitely better than technology, and there is a supernatural promotion route! Otherwise, at most it will be researched and developed on a small scale, and the main purpose of research and development is how to restrain it! That game is even more nonsense, allowing a human with a rudimentary interstellar civilization to block his memory and kill the warriors of a supernatural civilization! Nonsense? This is equivalent to blocking the memory of a scientist and letting him kill the Tyrannosaurus rex!

This is a really weird start. If it was to explore the planet, shouldn't it launch the drone first? They didn't even know what was on the planet, so people just ran over there carelessly.

Using early science fiction chapters to screen out readers who like fantasy, and later writing fantasy to screen out science fiction readers, I was curious about what kind of readers the author was writing for. No wonder my grades are bad

Let me first make a guess here. Most people read the introduction and come here for the big ships and big guns, but I think the author may want to write fantasy, so these people can start to lower their expectations.

Readers are here to see the collision between high-tech civilization and cultivation civilization, not to watch a suspense drama, let alone to watch the protagonist Kai Wushuang. I hope the author will not stray from the topic.

A novel about cultivating immortality in the guise of science fiction. We just want to see the collision between the technological civilization and the civilization that cultivates immortality as you mentioned, not the technological civilization running to cultivate immortality.

This book is essentially a practical exploration of Ma Zhe + science fiction + fantasy. The creative idea is very unique and it is a very fresh article.

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head, you overestimate the author, just write fantasy novels honestly

This is a novel about cultivating immortality under the guise of technology. If you want to see battleships and cannons, you can leave.

I think the author's writing is quite good It suits my reading taste Just keep it up Don't listen to some people's nonsense😁

The chapters before the payment were very good, but the content changed until the payment started. What we want to see is technology riding on the face, and we want to see what kind of swordsman you are.

I came to see the sci-fi future and the reconstruction of civilization, not to see urban supernatural powers 😅

I'm sorry, the previous part is very exciting. I think the dream is also a foreshadowing. The key is to be intelligent and exciting. But the planet that cultivates immortals at the back is really disgusting🤢. There are too many such cultivators in the starting point and even in online articles. All kinds of pretending to be pigs and eating tigers make me sick. I am tired of watching the various competition arenas for cultivating immortals. It is okay to combine technology like the previous one. The Buddhist village in the previous book is also quite exciting. The problem is that there are a lot of immortal cultivators from the beginning of this book🤢. The author's advantage is still his philosophical thinking about human beings. There are too many white articles about cultivating immortals, and a wave of them can kill a lot of people. 😅

So does this have anything to do with science fiction? ? ? ? ? Stop cultivating immortality, don't make it a trap, it's science fiction

After the Dandelion crashed, it was completely unreadable. I digressed. Shouldn't we be building a new civilization? Why did we go to practice and integrate with the indigenous people? Outrageous

An author's knowledge determines how flawed his book is.

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What are you writing about? Forcibly giving dandelions for free, killing monsters and upgrading after landing, sleeping for 700 years to travel, right?

Look at the author! When I read this book, there are three timelines. One is the original space timeline. My original purpose was to watch this line. The second game timeline. To be honest, I am not willing to watch this one because the levels in it, such as pistol-level rocket-level helicopters, are about cultivating immortals and are weird. The characters are too complex and seem to be getting old and uncomfortable. This kind of game has been described. There will not be too much story in the future, so I usually skip it and don't read it. The third timeline, I prefer to call it a scene or a dream. The first time is the ability to inherit. I want to complain about the ability. If you take an ordinary telekinesis and the ability to control objects, wouldn't it be better if you just write the ability to control things? Unless I write about a sword fairy, why can't I see how it has anything to do with the sword fairy? Let's not talk about the ordinary novels about cultivating immortals, ah, they are a man and a sword, etc., A series, it is obvious that you have written this kind of, ah, it is a bit similar, the strange abilities are inherited, but they are not cultivated by oneself. Doesn't it make people want to complain? It obviously feels like a weird ability, so I have to name it after Sword Immortal. It feels very awkward. It's not that I won't let you use it. In the Internet literary world, ah, when I hear that Sword Immortal is not from Shushan, Jiu Sword Immortal is from Sword and Fairy, Xu Changqing and the like, it makes people confused about why you chose this name. It's the three timelines you wrote. I originally thought of looking at space and the like, interstellar and the like, interspersed and sewn the three lines together. Well, it's very confusing Well, there are also levels and improvements. Well, maybe I didn't read your game commentary too carefully. Well, that's what I wanted to say, game commentary, so I don't know how you improved your level? Ah, let's just leave it like this, feel free, then I don't really want to complain Okay, looking at these 60 or so pictures of yours, especially the last two, I'm special and I don't understand, why are you in this kind of dream again? The first time he appeared clearly, there was a source of pollution, and then he wrote one after another, ah, the protagonist of the dream came to the dream as soon as he went to sleep. Anyway, I was so big-headed that I couldn't understand it There are still people's consciousness that can only live for more than 160 years. I feel that for a star-rated aviation civilization, don't you feel that it is too little? A casual flight can last hundreds of years, a casual migration can last hundreds of years, and the weird cultivators inside, it can be said that most of them feel like they are spiritual. Ah, anyway, it feels that human consciousness can only live for 160 years. Well, it feels very unsatisfactory. For a star aviation civilization, this is a huge fatal point. Human beings are not a spiritual race. I feel that they are huge anyway. I don't like it Anyway, the title of the book doesn't fit the description. I originally wanted to read an aeronautical or interstellar book, but in the end, is this book of yours fantasy? It's not fantasy, just a few fantasy names, interstellar aviation technology, it's not too unreal, I just wrote seven or eight of them in total, do you think it's good? It's not close combat, ah, it's mental combat. I didn't ask you where you can see high technology? Ah, except for spaceships, ah, except for artificial intelligence, weapons, nothing can be seen. It's weird, but it's not weird at all. Ah, it's so secretive now that I can't understand anything                                                                                                                                                         Anyway, I am now seeing the difference between one person and two people.

I really like the author's books, and I wanted to read more, but I have to say it's a pity that it ended so hastily. The author pursues a grand, detailed and complex narrative, characterized by the grandeur and sophistication of the world view. He often strengthens contrast and conflict through the reproduction and dislocation of various characters and plots, and maximizes the expansion of readers' imagination space. This brings an excellent reading experience to those who read it (the kind of refreshing and scalp-tingling feeling), but this book is not friendly to another group of people. First of all, the author is not good at writing (he has an extraordinary imagination). Secondly, the author's narrative arrangement sacrifices a lot of reading experience in the early stage. Although the later stage is very interesting, readers often cannot hold on to the later stage. I hope the author can find a writing method that suits him and develop his own strengths. I really think you can write a great book! (It's too long to write, and I'll put some more at the back)

It's a novel about cultivating immortality under the guise of science fiction, but unfortunately the part about cultivating immortality is nonsense and unfinished. After reading it in a hurry, the old bookworm entered the trap cautiously.

You can see what I wrote inexplicably. . . . . . ?

Is this book so much more expensive than The Psychic Scholar?

Selling dog meat with sheep's heads

The foreshadowing of this game is so great. I have never seen anything related to the game until now. It says "God Realm Sky Cultivation" at the back, "Song Cultivation" is called the player, and "Reverse Cultivation" is the time traveler. This shows that there must be a big problem with this game.

This book is actually quite good to read. The main reason is that the middle period of the book is more fantasy-like. I only read the early period and skipped the middle period to the middle and later period when the protagonist starts to use technology. There are indeed a lot of bad points, but in fact, the writing is getting better and better.