I Just Wanted to Retire and Was Forced to Become a General

After reading the whole book, the character of the protagonist was completely ruined by the author himself. The feeling given to me by the protagonist is that he really wants to be stubborn, and he wants to be cautious in everything he does in order to survive. However, he can't control himself. The great swordsman joins the navy. After getting the fluttering fruit, he doesn't want to be stubborn anymore, so he becomes obsessed with the navy. Be careful, these similar characters require the author to carefully consider whether everything the character does is consistent with the character. The author of this book obviously did not do this well. There is nothing wrong with the beginning of the story about the strength of the great swordsman, but the protagonist has a dog-like attribute, which is because the author dug a hole for himself. It's a bit baffling for a great swordsman to join the navy in the East China Sea. You can find a remote island in the East China Sea and survive there until death. This kind of opening won't have a good start if it doesn't give the protagonist a motivation to move forward. As a new author and new book, I can tolerate this. The author gave the Piaopiao Fruit to the protagonist, which is another typical example of digging a hole for himself to jump into. Since the protagonist likes dogs, he just floats to an island rich in resources and lives in heaven until he dies. It's not good to give any kind of fruit. Give me a Piaopiao fruit. Except for fruits with long-distance displacement properties, it's easier to write any one for the protagonist than a Piaopiao fruit. I think the plot of the top part is pretty good. It may have something to do with me forgetting the plot of the original work. My mind is filled with memories of the second creation and the original work mixed together 😂. At least I think the last few chapters of the top part are passable. It's a little too watery, so I'll call it too much, but it's really a waste of the climax. The problem with this book is that the author likes to dig holes for himself, which leads to a slight collapse of the protagonist's personality (not just the two problems I wrote, these are just the two problems that I think are the most important). The original plots are also pretty good, but they are all plots of saving tragedy that can easily offend readers. Overall, this book is pretty good and can be read even if you are not a book reader. It is just a bit short. If you want to read it, I recommend you to subscribe and keep reading.

The style of the preceding and following text does not match, which is poisonous to death. Farewell

This book gave me a very contradictory feeling. I can suck Ace out in one second, but I can't finish sucking the protagonist (Ace can compete with Jinbe 50-50). After reading the book, I felt that the protagonist's abilities are not very good, and he has become very bloated and dares to fight Kizaru. After that, it is no longer interesting, and I can't find the feeling I had at the beginning. . .

If the score is 100, then I can only give him 50 points. What is our greatest pleasure in reading fan fiction is not the story, but changing the story and the tragic fate of the characters. Maybe add a little bit of self-pleasure as a man. But there is really no fun in this novel. The beginning is okay, after all, I don't meet many plot characters, and the protagonist's few jokes from time to time will make me feel immersed. However, in the middle period (I have only read the middle period), I feel that the charm of this protagonist is not as great as that of Cass. This is what fails. Let's talk about self-interest. As a social worker, the one who has the deepest impact on me in One Piece is not Luffy, but all the supporting characters, and their stories. However, this book is basically all original (including the magically modified theatrical version) and the one written by Golden Lion is okay. The rest is about female characters and emotional issues. Originality is okay, but I think those of my own are also very attractive. I kind of gave up from the moment I was slapped by a bear, but there is really a shortage of books, and there are too few people who can read them. Maybe the author doesn't know how to write thank you scenes, so I want to avoid these things (you can go and watch One Piece Black Flag, which is basically all original plots, and the emotional scenes are also comfortable to watch). ps: My biggest regret in chasing pirates in the past was Gu Yina. There were too few people who wrote about pirates who also rescued Gu Yina. The only ones I have read are generally harem ones, a genre that most people don't like. But fortunately, the protagonist of any book is not a bulldozer.

Why do so many people dislike the heroine? I think the heroine has not done anything evil. She has a good personality and is not unreasonable. She does not hold her back during fights and requires the protagonist to save her. She is good-looking and can be both big and small. What else do you want from her?

I think this article is really well written. I started chasing One Piece when I was in junior high school, starting from the strange style of painting at that time. Because of my eyesight, I could only watch one episode slowly. At that time, I really loved One Piece. It can be said that Pleasant Goat could not appear on children's channels at that time, and it was my childhood. Then the War on Top story started, and one episode was updated every week. I was so worried that I couldn't attend class well. Ace's death really hit me hard, and I stopped watching it. It wasn't until the end of the high school entrance examination that I saw someone sending me a recommendation, and I once again had the idea of ​​pursuing it. I also thought about changing the ending of the War on the Top. I even tried hard to organize the timeline, check the information, and even wrote a fanfic. Before you talk about the author, please think about how painful it is to write an article. I hate what others say the most: "A pig can write this kind of article." I saw this article for the first time last summer, when it had just entered V, and the name at that time was "One Piece: The Admiral". When I read it for the first time, I thought, Ace is so good, why didn't he save Ace during the war? Isn't it better to just defect to the navy? What's so good about the navy, and why do you have to stay in it? The character of the protagonist is so strange, he looks like a salted fish. The name Kuro is the same as the leader? Mainly because I haven't read any articles, otherwise I wouldn't click on articles with the navy as the protagonist. Later, the author's writing style changed my mind (this was only part of the reason, and part of it was that I had an in-depth understanding of World Pirates at that time), and I felt that it was good for the navy to be the protagonist. However, there are generally only three directions for stories with the navy as the protagonist: 1. Fishing within the navy, making friends with the Straw Hat Pirates, and finally overthrowing the world government and achieving peace; 2. Thinking that all pirates deserve to die, crushing Luffy to ashes, punching the Yonko, stepping on Garp, and unifying the world; 3. Defecting halfway through the writing, and then continuing to cheat. And this article perfectly fits my interests. It neither kills the protagonist without thinking (I have watched Luffy so many episodes, and even if I am not a protagonist, I still like this character), nor does it trample my IQ (it is realistic and logical, not vulgar), nor is it written out of place (it would be too funny to write the outline out of control). I have been saving money before, and I almost have enough. The big and non-stop updates are really suffocating, and now I have finally ordered them all. (That being said, I still hope the update will be faster) Actually, all I have to say is the same thing: this article is very interesting! I especially like it! Without good writing style, I can't write anything nice.

I think this book is very well written! It would be good if you can achieve these three things: correct outlook on life, good logic, online IQ, stable character, and no harem. I personally just like naval literature. Apart from the secondary part, if I put myself in the world of pirates, the navy is still reliable. The military itself is a united and powerful group. It is powerful, official, and has a strong backing. In this place where personal strength is respected, as long as you are strong you can still rise smoothly. Other Celestial Dragons and the like are matters for a later stage. It depends on where the author wants to develop and then consider solving the problem. In a word, we must first survive, then develop and improve, and finally consider the spiritual aspect. So apart from some minor flaws, this book is pretty good. I support the author! It's best to update more often.

The author's original plot is good, but once I came into contact with the Straw Hats, I was so distracted that I skipped these chapters now.

First of all, I would like to apologize to the author here, because what I read was a pirated version, so I am very sorry. Now I am adding a little reward, I am really sorry. Also, the novel is really well written.

After reading it, it's hard to find such a large volume of pirate novels that amaze me with their content. In the early stage, there is no lack of passion, comedy, and touching of One Piece, and there are even scenes that are comparable to the scenes of One Piece. In the later stage, it does not fall into the vague but non-existent sense of fate and lineage theory in the original One Piece. The second battle on the top is also beyond my imagination in terms of the richness of the characters and scenes. Especially those who were impressive among the pirates did not end hastily, but when it was time to end, the Straw Hats came to an end cleanly and impressively enough. In the final battle, Luffy's unrepentance to death, Nami's emotional tenacity, Zoro's indomitability, Sanji's deep emotions, Robin's firm trust, Usopp's manly courage, Franky's faith and loyalty, Brook's soul-deep promise, Chopper's unquestioning belief in the flag, and the fish-man Jinbe who later joined the pirate group, his ocean-like mind and deep emotions, all made me feel like I first watched One Piece. The Straw Hat Pirates have not changed, and they have not changed until death. They have the same passion, the same touch, the same friendship, and Kuro's performance is also worthy of the death of the Straw Hat Pirates. It's a pity that Garp escaped for a lifetime, but in the end he couldn't escape. His two grandsons were executed by the navy for being pirates, but there was no way. Under such circumstances, if you want to create a better world, you must be prepared to completely bury the old world. Revolution itself is bloodshed, and it is a violent action of one class against another class. It is not a treat to a meal, and cannot be solved with laughter and curses.

I feel that Crowley needs to fail As Cass and Lida said, "Crowley can't lose." This also means that Crowley may lose the opportunity to hone himself in failure. Crowley needs to fail once and get rid of the weaknesses Zefa mentioned. Crow's victory or tie with others is the support of Cass's justice. Clow's defeat may shake Cass's belief, and this may also be the opportunity for Cass to fully awaken his overlord color. Crowl's failure also made his partners determined to truly enhance their own strength and help Crowe. For example, Lida, she had talent, but she could not fully use this talent to strengthen herself around Crowe. ... Just some of my own opinions, please don't comment.

I have finished Sanhua, I have been chasing it for a year and a half, and now it is over, I am in tears 😭. This feeling of loss is like a frequent friend leaving to go somewhere else, which is so uncomfortable 😢. Besides! ! ! Salted fish! Come on! How long have I been talking about, where are Lida's candies? What about sugar?

Give it up, give it up, it's boring

Let me tell you how I feel now. The author's concept is very good, the plot is interesting, and the character setting and daily interactions are very pirate-like. What I appreciate most is the part that brings the end of the era to the golden lion. It well depicts the momentum of a pirate hero with a late hero, whether it is the heroism of guiding the protagonist in the battle or the domineeringness of shouting that I am a golden lion! It really fits the image in my mind. I have been following One Piece for so long. Of the three characters I like the most, two of them are remnants of the old era, with white beards on their backs that are harmless and heroic! The unparalleled domineering golden lion who cut off his legs! And then there's Zoro, who promises to be number one in the world! However, the author's great portrayal of the war on the top really left many readers confused. The war on the top is one of the few big scenes in One Piece. I was looking forward to the author's unique portrayal of this exciting part and the advancement of the plot. In the early stage of the war, I thought it was a foreshadowing, an explosion after brewing. In addition, several supporting characters in Impel Down Prison Break and Bucky's phone bug made me look forward to the follow-up. The moment when the Sky Sea fell, to be honest, I was shocked! However, the subsequent plot completely confused me. The protagonist may be a human being, but at the same time, he is also a marine! Since you can unleash your strength for civilians and for justice, why can't you show yourself for your colleagues who fought bloody battles and for the respectful Whitebeard when there is enough preparation for this war? The protagonist is Gou, but that's not the case, right? When the strength is exposed, why can't the direct participant really fight like the golden lion? Under unavoidable circumstances, only by eliminating the strength to suppress the pirates can we survive better, right? Just like Kizaru, but Kizaru's name is also a legitimate reputation! And Blackbeard, he is a real pirate, he will do whatever it takes, he is a man who can truly subvert the world. If Whitebeard is written as the final opponent, he can completely let him escape and make a comeback. Wouldn't it be better to use other plots to gain strength or something? When the entire war on top came to an end, the only real change was Ace's death, and the rest was almost the original plot mixed with the protagonist! I like this book very much. I like to read it. This is one of the few books that I can read one chapter at a time. However, I'd better put it aside for a while and read it. I hope the author will be better, and I wish you better and better results! Come on💪

I won't tell you whether the book is good or not. Just one update a day and I'm speechless

Every time something wonderful happens, you stop updating it and get so angry

I'll give it another week and see if it's still lukewarm. I'll give up on the book.

I don't think the author needs to write three or four chapters with all the bells and whistles. It's too short. Just condense them into two chapters.

It's all booked. Come on, don't let it crash.

Isn't the author updating? If it is not updated, the popularity of this book will really be wasted.

Salted Fish General reading time

Let's draw something normal. The name of the general is unknown, so leave it blank. After all, I'm not an art student and my level is limited. Let's just take a look at 😒. I just finished it all night.

One Piece World - On the night of February 26, 15xx year of the Hainan calendar, a steady drizzle was falling in the sky. At a certain naval base in the New World. Lieutenant General Cass was speaking to the soldiers in the audience. He glanced at the calm team, and from the young or mature faces, all he felt was unprecedented determination and expectations for a new era. He nodded, and then shouted in a calm but high tone: "Gentlemen, the people are miserable. Are your families the same?! You can't eat the food grown by the farmers. The people have no jobs, are oppressed, and end up living on the streets. The families of the soldiers fighting on the front line are being oppressed by the Tianlong people, but the government is indifferent. The people are so poor, but the nobles, the government, and corrupt officials are still making money crazily! Everyone! Listen to me! General Kuro，！？，，，！！！！！！！！！！！！"，，："！，！！"    "Tianchu! Tianchu! Tianchu!!!!" "Onboard!!! Onboard!!!!" Neat and high-spirited. The sound was thunderous, resounding for dozens of miles, and it took a long time to gradually calm down "Thank you for your support, history will definitely affirm our actions. Finally, here, I have a small request. I hope that you can sing the song of reform while marching with your chest and head raised before departure. Major General Wilbur!" "Yes!" A strong man with an excited face walked out from in front of the crowd and stood on the high platform where Lieutenant General Cass used to be. He pulled out his saber, and then his voice, hoarse due to excessive excitement, spread to the audience: "Gentlemen! No one knows our existence, and our deeds will last forever!!!! Now, the whole army listens to the order and turn back!" Boom, boom, boom, boom, the queue stretched to the sky. The neat marching footsteps of the soldiers were mixed with the high-pitched songs of the restoration. There is no fear or uneasiness in the song, only excitement and enthusiasm for the arrival of a new era. The soldiers sang: The four seas are now turbulent, and the red earth continent is full of chaotic clouds; In this dim world, I am independent, and my indignation is burning and my blood is flowing. The wealthy family only knows their proud family status, but there are really few people who care about the people; The powerful only know how to boast about accumulating wealth, but they don't care about the country! Culuo saw signs of decline in the world, and the five stars were still in chaos. The rise and fall of governing chaos is like a dream, and the world is really like a game of chess! Under the spring sky of youth reform, men unite for justice! There are millions of soldiers in my chest, and I will turn into thousands of cherry blossoms when I die! The rotten corpses passed by, and this body was swaying in the clouds.     ，!     ， The corrupt establishment cannot sleep, the dawn of the world is about to dawn in the long night! Let's look at the clouds in the sky and listen to the roar of the waves. The time of innovation has arrived, and a storm rises at night to sweep away the demons! A downcast person between heaven and earth, confused and not knowing where to go. In this earthly world of great splendor and splendor, who can stand on a high building to win this game?  Fame is just a trace in a dream, only sincerity will never fade away. Life is full of emotions, no one can comment on success or failure! Let's sing out the song of Li Sao. The tragic song of generosity ends today. I have a three-foot sword in my hand, waiting to cleanse the traitor and fool with blood!

First of all, as a 10-year-old Haimi, I found it difficult to read the plot of this book about the contact between the protagonist and the Straw Hats. As for the plot of preventing the Straw Hats from taking the ship, the protagonist didn't want to cause trouble, and also disabled one of Rayleigh's arms and legs, almost destroying the Straw Hats. In the end, Garp showed up and let the Straw Hats go, which was full of poison. Furthermore, in terms of character creation, although I don't hate the appearance of the character Lida, the author please be kind to the character you create and don't write it so annoyingly. It's just like a child who has never grown up. There is no growth in the character at all, just like a coquettish girl who can only be pampered. Then the protagonist is a very aggressive guy, which can be seen from his behavior towards Crowe and the Straw Hats. The protagonist doesn't care about pirates, as long as he sees it, he will do it to death. It is truly the darkest world government, and it is so cowardly that it is really uncomfortable to watch. Although it is a fanfic, the author's description of some of the original pirates is somewhat one-sided, which makes non-Pirates fans think that even pirates deserve to die. The comment section is very violent. Some popular characters such as Rayleigh, Hancock and the Straw Hats have directly become the characters criticized in the comment section. I really feel uncomfortable and feel unfair for them.

It feels like the protagonist is very arrogant, he explodes when he is provoked, and he seems to behave as if he should provoke others. Moreover, he did not intend to save the world or change the world at the beginning. He was there to laugh at other people's efforts to change the world and kill Straw Hat. If he did not intend to save the world and kill Straw Hat, who would kill Im. It is to rely on the author's hard recommendation to inexplicably fight against the world government. Moreover, the conflict with the Straw Hats was inexplicable. No matter how many people the Shichibukai killed, they could tolerate it, but the Straw Hats couldn't tolerate it. A pirate group that didn't kill civilians but did things as adventurers while doing the things of the navy. How could it be an eyesore? He wanted to find a big secret treasure and let him go there. The world government was afraid of the navy but not the navy. I just watch from my own side, just watch the Straw Hats and the World Government go dog-eat-dog. The overall plot is far-fetched and pushed forward by the author.

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Crowley - from saving the world to living a salty life To be reasonable, there are more than 900 chapters. I didn't expect that everyone has such a big difference in the character of Crowley. Let me start with my opinion: Kuro is a good guy.               From the first chapter to now, Kuro has treated pirates as follows: he will only kill those who do evil things but not arrest them, and let go those who have dreams and do not do evil. He will protect civilians within his sight and ability and try his best to integrate them with the navy, but stick to the bottom line. There are many incidents that will be fine as long as Kuro doesn't take action, and doing so will affect him. For example, when Mengka took action against the little girl blocking the road at the beginning, if Kuro didn't take action, he could still live a peaceful life as a leader, but he couldn't stand it. He couldn't stand by and watch the misfortune of others. Then some people may ask, since Kuro is so kind, why doesn't he be more active and save the world? Let's take a look at the recent information about Kuro's childhood 3 years old - Investigation into civilian life in Shields Town - I don't like it very much 5 years old - Investigation report into the Kingdom of Gezi - I hate it very much 10 years old - Revolutionary Army - I look down on it 14 years old - On the specific feasibility of rebellion - Join the Navy 24 years old - Captain of the Navy - Live this life safely.         ，，， If the 24-year-old Kuro is still like this, then the controversy about Kuro in the comments should disappear. But Kuro has changed. We don't know exactly what happened in the ten years from 14 to 24 that turned this boy who tried to change the world into a salty fish who gave up on his dreams.                             Actually there is another problem. Everyone knows that Kuro knows the plot of One Piece, but we don't know how much Kuro knows. Maybe One Piece has already finished when Kuro traveled through time. It is obvious that Clow is not satisfied with the world in the established plot. If the original plot develops, there will still be so many civilians suffering. And if you want to change the original plot, you can only rely on the only variable - Kuro himself.          ，，，，！ So many things have more reasonable explanations: Why does Kuro always feel that he is weak? Because Kuro's goal is to change the entire world, his strength will not be enough until he surpasses the strongest in the world. If he can't even defeat the Four Emperors, how can he save the world? Do all the Tianlong people who put their hope in the Four Emperors suddenly raise a red flag to resist themselves? Therefore, Kuro's goal from the beginning was to have strength above the Four Emperors. If he did not reach that level, his strength would not be able to fulfill his dream, that is, he would be weak. Why is Kuro always so cautious (delusion of persecution)? Because Kuro is the only variable. If something happens to him, then the pirate world will follow the plot and it will always be the pirate world. The dream of changing the world will never have a chance to be realized. Just like when Clow saw the theory of rebellion he once wrote, he didn't say it was wrong, but that it couldn't be done. If it could be done, then I think he would still continue to do it. How can Clow, who aims at cautious survival, be so murderous? Crow himself has a very murderous intention towards pirates, even violent. He has zero tolerance for pirates who do evil. This becomes more and more obvious as his strength and position becomes stronger, because his disgust towards these scum remains the same as before. But Kuro is the only variable. If he dies, he will have no chance, so he must be cautious. If Kuro is not the only time traveler, then I don't think Kuro will restrain his murderous intention at all. So Kuro is as cowardly as a tortoise, but also extremely murderous. At least it was like this at the beginning, but when Kuro felt that he was unable to realize his dream, he became a fool, and ten years of caution has formed a habit. He just said that he was young and ignorant for the dream that could not be realized, and his evaluation of himself may be more self-deprecating. After ten years of extreme passion and self-discipline, after his dream was shattered, he fell into another extreme - just want to live safely! It was just fun to watch at first, but it was sad to know the reason behind it.         ，，，         ，！

Surprisingly beautiful. . . I read very few books in , and I clicked on this one by chance. It wasn't very attractive at first. On the contrary, I felt that the protagonist was a little too "cowardly" and "too stubborn". He obviously has the strength of a quasi-general, but he just wants to be "bad". This is not very logical, at least not in line with the logic of most people. It feels a bit like "good" for the sake of "good", which seems too deliberate. Maybe it's because the counter-routine is relatively new. After that, I persisted for three more chapters, and no more poisonous points appeared. The protagonist's character design "from the heart" became more and more comfortable. From the beginning of the main story, I personally felt that it was getting better. The highlight is that the yellow ape in this book really has the inner flavor of a yellow ape. He behaves in a wretched and vulgar way. He purses his lips, crosses his legs, and says "Wow!" When he opens his mouth. The picture is overwhelming. From here I was hooked. The first thirty chapters are also very surprising. The humor that occasionally appears is not only not outrageous, but also a pirate. I can feel that the author is getting better and better at writing, and the pirate world that has been created has basically become OOC-free at this point. The only drawback is that it is too short. Subscription is definitely a must, and I will save another two hundred chapters. I haven't read the chapters after they are released, so I am saving them. When I read novels, I don't like to catch up on them a little bit. It's like squeezing out toothpaste, which makes me feel uncomfortable. Come on, author

Sakaski, codenamed "Akainu". He is the only one in One Piece to defeat a general of the same generation in a one-on-one duel. The Devil Fruit he possesses is the Magma Devil Fruit with the highest attack power among the three series of Devil Fruits officially recognized. The justice that is carried is "complete justice." The prototype of his character is Bunta Sugawara, whom Oda calls "a real man" and "the only one with the best bones in the world." Every young reader must have hated Akainu. They hate Akainu's ruthlessness and the sense of oppression he brings, because in their eyes, the friendship between people is the most precious thing in the world. As they grew older, these readers gradually began to learn to look at problems from the perspective of others, and began to understand that as a navy, there is nothing wrong with severely punishing pirates and deserters. They began to see the merits of the once-hated Akainu's plan to frame Whitebeard. Their evaluation of Akainu has improved. They can only say that he is a controversial figure, not a heinous person. Later, the former young readers gradually entered the society, and their evaluation of comics has gone beyond their own likes and dislikes. Start to realize which things in the OP are for children, and which things adults can learn from. So at this time, more and more people discovered that the red dog that they once hated the most had so many shining points. A man who is strong, confident, decisive, stubborn to the point of being crazy about his career, and whose willpower is so strong that he is so handsome! Those who say that Akainu must die, even if Akainu dies, he will die in a manly way. ​ (Excerpted from relevant comments)

Or. . Just let this unfortunate thing of Kuro die or find a reason to live in a hole, and then write the passionate story of the future Admiral Cass.