Military Commissioner of Southern Tang

The writing is excellent, and I hope the author continues to improve. I also hope the author won't include too many female characters; the quality of a book doesn't depend on a momentary whim, but on consistent effort!

It's such a pity! Most parts are well-written, but after he sets out to unify the world, there's too much focus on the protagonist's solo adventures. It's hard to tell if it's a historical military novel or a travelogue; the focus is terrible. Furthermore, the protagonist is portrayed as an ambitious person, yet there are so many love stories involving several female characters. If Tang Sanzang had fallen in love in the Women's Kingdom, would he have been able to obtain the scriptures?

Historical fantasy novels that focus on power struggles without developing one's own forces, featuring so many female characters who are practically mesmerizing to behold. I've already tested it myself; fellow readers, feel free to do as you please.

The last few chapters have been really confusing. It's understandable that he reluctantly joined the rebellion to train his troops, but once the leader was exposed, he just surrendered and followed the envoy back to the capital for questioning…

The writing is alright, but you can't scrutinize it too closely. Imagine someone who's about to become a county magistrate goes to his county, only to become a servant to a wealthy landowner because he's poor. Who could imagine that? You may not have money, but your advisor does! He's about to become an official; asking him for a loan would be a piece of cake, wouldn't it?

In the name of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms, Chapter Thirty-nine also played the case of family learning and Bao Gong Duan. Crazy, he also brought out martial arts masters to fly over the walls. Speechless

I've read over twenty chapters, and it's really well-written. Although it uses a lot of modern vocabulary and descriptive terms, lacking a certain classical charm, which is a minor flaw, the characters' emotions are very well portrayed. If the later chapters can more realistically depict that period of history, it will definitely be a masterpiece. Unfortunately, I'm really short on funds, so all I can say is keep up the good work!

I watched it all night... *Sigh* Ahhhh, not enough!

This book is so good, why was it released so late? Author, hang in there, I'll definitely subscribe to the whole thing!

Some scenes are too far-fetched. For example, he's about to take office, but he goes off to work as a servant... His reasons being lack of money and wanting to gather inside information... How should I put it? Are you trying to follow in Stephen Chow's footsteps? These kinds of scenes only work in nonsensical comedies.