Xuanxiao Immortal Lord

After reading it for a while, I felt that this book was not as bad as the comment section. Above average level. The writing is good and the concept is okay. There is no plot like Thirty Years in Hedong and Thirty Years in Hexi. It doesn't look that exciting, but the plot is indeed advancing smoothly. Moreover, the structure of the world view is not bad. It is not a world like matryoshka dolls in some novels, with endless pretense and slap-in-the-face plots. The character creation is more realistic. The shortcoming is that the plot is a bit bland and there are no outstanding contradictions (that is, it is not exciting enough). After all, the reality is mostly bland. There are no people who humiliate you at every turn, so there are many opportunities to show off and slap you in the face. Although the plot structure is relatively realistic, the shortcomings are also there. The author does not want to attract readers by describing a mindless plot, but the plot described is a bit bland. After reading it, I don't want to read it. After all, reading books nowadays is mainly for relaxation. This kind of words is more suitable for patient readers.

I don't know if the author can see it. I remember that around 2011, Misguided Man wrote "Dao Zheng Feng". The results were not good at the beginning, and the author was slow to update, once a day. However, Misguided Man rarely updated, and the quality was always guaranteed. When it was almost a million words (I can't remember exactly), the score improved greatly. Today's Misguided Man is also quite good! Reading the author's book reminds me of those who have misguided the path, they are all the same masterpieces of fairy tales. I hope the author perseveres and will come out ahead! After so many years, there is a fairy tale book "Lian Dao Immortality" that makes people feel worried because of poor grades. At that time, more than 200 chapters had been written. What a pity. I hope the author will work hard, ensure quality, and support you!

You have a quota to join the party, which your parents paid for with their lives. As a result, a distant relative took it away with just one word, and would kill you if you didn't give it back. Then you happily became that relative's son's servant, and you even sincerely felt that this was really embarrassing! He even smiled sincerely with his son. Such a protagonist, such a mind! 🙂 I am so ashamed... Send the keyword again: "sincerely"

There are also novels about cultivating immortals that you can read, which is great 🤭. I like this kind of novel with the name of the practice method, which makes me look superior at first glance. Every time I see the fireball and ice cone techniques in mortal novels, I want to spit out blood. So I have basically never read any mortal novels.

Ever since the senior sister became a couple, I couldn't stand it anymore. It doesn't matter that the couple is a monk in Cultivation, but if you apply a modern love story and add modern emotions into it, it feels like it's not the same thing. What does the senior sister do to cultivate immortality for the junior brother, and what does the junior brother do for the senior sister? Is this a relationship or a love affair? In Xiuxian, we have only heard of Taoist couples, we asked together, but never heard of couples. First of all, the first question is, are you a cultivator or a lover? I have only heard of love that involves one heart and one mind, but I have never heard of love and career being balanced. Love and career will always be biased. And love always becomes family affection in the end. Then what the hell is this couple practicing Taoism about? If they were a Taoist couple, it would be fine if they talked about Taoism with each other frequently, but the two of them were in love. I can't stand it anymore. Moreover, it was originally a text about cultivating immortals, but now it is a text about calamities. This is also a calamity, and that is also a calamity. It is boring, or it may turn all living beings into chess pieces and kill a group of them one by one. How many people in this world can die like this? Even if people die on a large scale, they die once in a while. After a period of time, people have cultivated and regenerated, and then they die again.

The plot and writing are pretty good, but the part with Taihua, the Taoist double cultivator, really pissed me off. I had such a good relationship with my senior sister before, but suddenly I became a dual practitioner with a Taoist from another sect who I didn't have much contact with? To be honest, I can accept it more with the goddess than with this Taoist. Highly toxic.

What will happen to the protagonist's family in the future? After all, the patriarch had murderous intentions towards the protagonist before, but now the family has benefited a lot because of the protagonist... This actually looks quite bad.

After reading some people's thoughts, I find that some words always stick in my throat, but I can't express them anymore. Whether you think the protagonist Pi Liyangqiu is hypocritical or hesitant about not planning to kill his cousin and uncle. Don't forget that he is a young man, a young man who grew up in a clan whose parents both died. He has an incomplete personality and has been poisoned by the so-called "Houhei Xue" for more than ten years. But people will always grow up, and I hope to see him grow up and become a true gentleman. I also don't want to see a delusional person who claims to be decisive in killing but actually has a set of bandit logic. After all, cultivating immortals is cultivating immortals, not cultivating bandits. The so-called seizing opportunities has been happening in endlessly since ancient times. It will be obvious if you look through the history books and see how the sages dealt with them. On a continent, two or three countries have a population of tens of billions, one tael of gold, ten taels of silver, one tael of silver and one hundred copper plates. If they disagree, they will draw their swords at each other. If they do not speculate, they will be killed directly. How many years have you seen this kind of thing? Don't you get tired of it? Of course, if you really like this kind of thing, you can go and see it. There is also the issue of the so-called sense of substitution. In my humble opinion, reading is reading and not acting on stage. If you can't just be an audience, why bother with substitution? I know life is boring, but taking the role of the protagonist and killing everyone is not a kind of spiritual opium self-narcosis. Even in the illusory world of Datong, there are people who are working hard to move forward, not to mention the hardships before us. Furthermore, people like Bai Juyi are rare after all. It is not easy to wander around in one place while studying. It is also good to listen to Yangchun Baixue more.

The author's novel about cultivating immortals is very good. I have read many novels about cultivating immortals. Now many of them don't write about this kind of subject. The character of the protagonist is not bad. It just makes the characters of the people around him more vivid, so that our readers can see more clearly. There are many famous supporting characters and enemies in the novel. These are the basis for better writing. , The enemy is not necessarily a brainless enemy. Many books say that they are stupid because the enemy is too stupid and the protagonist Tai Er is not interesting at all, so you mainly insist on writing and it is not stupid. The writing is great. Come on👍 If you want to be popular, you must first write well and then update more in the early stage. If you write well in the early stage and update quickly, then make a recommendation. Nowadays, many books are recommended. You come in and read them. The writing is good, and then they become popular. Of course, if you want to write slowly, you can basically guarantee the quality, but we don't know whether they are popular or not. Many books are only pursued after they become popular in the early stage, so try not to interrupt the update of your new book in the early stage, and then update it two or three times a day. Many novels I read are like this in the early stage, so the content of the fuel book should be written according to your ideas ✊

The Liu family has a grudge against the protagonist. They almost killed him in order to steal the opportunity that the protagonist's parents had bought with their lives... But it was easily revealed later. This is too speechless.

The protagonist who is in the foundation-building stage can participate in the layout of various great powers and can see through situations that other great powers cannot see through. He can think of places that other great powers cannot think of. A person who has cultivated in the foundation-building stage laughs at the immortals who are in the realm of earthly immortals. Is this reasonable? Did the author write a little too hastily? Wait until the protagonist's cultivation level is improved before we discuss the layout?

... Brother, judging from your plot, the book is almost finished, why did it end? Wouldn't it be better to finish writing it quickly? The same was true for the previous book

The previous writing is really sloppy. How dare a young man, who has only studied thick black studies for a few years and not had much experience, dare to show off his intentions in front of all kinds of people in society? In reality, many young people are the same. They feel that they are a social person after watching some dark science and Machiavellian dramas. However, after being exposed to society for a few years, they know what it means to be an armchair strategist. On the contrary, those who can really get along in society are temperament and experience. Going back to the novel, the book mentions a female nun who "smiles so well that she doesn't leak", but her tightness is still noticed by the protagonist. So according to this logic, no one can see the protagonist's performance in every chapter and every sentence? Thinking back again, we are more or less aware of those people who are gloomy and pretentious at work.

Someone talked about having a double break with Taihua Daozi. I think this is totally cool. Where is the poison? When you look at the overall picture, you will know that this is a fairy tale with a very good writing and plot, and it is not a romantic novel. Love is life-or-death, and feelings are certainly there, but reading the novel requires the protagonist to have a certain degree of release of his human nature, otherwise there will be no pleasure. In my opinion, compared to an article like a sword that cuts through the nine heavens, the storyline and writing of this article are quite worth reading.

I want to say something, if a disciple of a large sect suddenly changes his mind and becomes powerful, shouldn't he be the first to suspect that he has been taken away from him in the world of immortals and demons? Are you able to let him preside over a large formation with peace of mind? The author's description of Buddhism gave me a feeling of scheming, compared to Taoism, people are like idiots 🤫

Conjectures about the plot This side of the world is incomplete, or incompletely developed. There is "life" that can prove the Taoist Immortal Lord, but there is no "death" where the ghosts return. The "death" side is that the netherworld is in the process of taking shape, and the world is in the process of forming. The Waixian Dao wanted to take the opportunity to establish the underworld. It may be because of this decision and some reasons that led to the collapse. It may be lack of luck, it may be the wrong path, it may be that the vision they intend to control is too huge, or their Tao and Dharma may be flawed. The final result may have caused changes in the natural formation process of the Netherworld, causing Xuanmen to trap Qianshan with Dragon Locking Bureau. It may also be because Xuanmen's law and Tao are closely connected with heaven and earth. Facing the changes in heaven and earth, especially the occurrence of "death", they will inevitably lose the chance of immortality. They don't want to let Hades stand, but they know that this is impossible, so they use Dragon Locking Bureau to delay time, hoping to find a better method, or make a big gamble with the essence retained by Dragon Locking Bureau. Then there is escape Zen. The Buddha wanted to continue to learn from the demon gods and return the power to himself. To achieve this goal, he had to break the dragon lock. At that time, Xuanmen had not yet been able to escape from heaven and earth. To break it would be to oppose the entire Xuanmen, so he attacked Xuanmen first.

No heroine and only one heroine are fine for me, but if there are multiple heroines, I hope I can let you know as soon as possible so that I can leave as soon as possible. It will be good for everyone. The writing is still very good, it is my favorite type! Come on, author, there are too few updates.

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