Nether Immortal Lord

I feel that the author's writing is not very rigorous. Although it is said to be fantasy, it should not be too exaggerated. I suggest you read the book Gu Zhenren carefully. This book is not bad. I hope the author can improve it. I hope the next book will be the author's masterpiece.

I gave up after reading the first chapter. The three of them were searching for souls too slowly. Since they were able to defeat him, could it be that the other party was an idiot and didn't know how to seal the soul. Then the soul flew away without stopping. Then I knew the three supporting characters were dead. 🙂🙂🙂

Other people's book reviews are that the author is great, but when it comes to me, they are all different eunuchs... 2333, Lao Meng once again made a solemn promise not to be eunuchs... ORZ

I've seen dozens of them, but I haven't subscribed yet, but I don't want to read them, they don't look good. The author has a problem with his writing. The description of the protagonist is all derogatory terms used by various supporting characters. He is sometimes frightened, sometimes trembling, and sometimes despairing. Every time he fails in a fight, he says to himself, am I going to die? Once or twice is okay. In the first 50 chapters, at least 4 times, I am bored to read, and then the halo kills me. If a person with high cultivation level looks at you, he will be frightened in his heart. If a master appears with great momentum and shows off the protagonist, he will be frightened in his heart. It's so stupid. He is a ruthless old devil in writing, but in fact he is a coward at heart, not calm and not firm in his heart towards the Tao. When Liu Bang looked at Qin Shihuang, he was not frightened because of the huge gap. Instead, he felt proud that he could replace him. Where is the protagonist? All kinds of fears, too weak inside, not good-looking, incomparable to Old Demon Fang Yuan, not attractive, not worthy of being the protagonist.

Tell me, with your update speed, do you want to lift high or saw the testicles?

Lao Meng's writing level is very high, but it is a pity that there are too few emotional scenes. However, it is indeed unimaginable for a peak power to fall in love. Now I see Wushan Yunyu again. I specially reward and upgrade it. The elders think it is like it👍🤭😄😄😄

The divine book that I haven't seen the ending of after waiting for 10,000 years

Is there anything similar to this novel? Shu Huang, the boss can recommend it. I prefer this type of novel

16,000 Coins are offered, come on Lao Meng💪. Except for the slow update, this book can definitely be regarded as a work of the highest starting point. I hope there will be more and more fans 🌹

The biggest failure of this book is that the more advanced players win the battle at the beginning, a failure is a failure and no further explanation is needed! ! !

One level of qi training, one level of qi training, and foundation building are completed. What other levels are there? 🌿 Farewell

The writing is really embarrassing. I only saw the author's harsh words and hesitant actions.

After reading more than 300 chapters, I realized that Zhang Daohong, the time traveler, is the real protagonist! He is simply a child of destiny. Even someone as hard-hearted as Su Laomo can't help but feel good after seeing him. Hongjun, Pangu Banner, Xuanhuang Pagoda, and the Four Swords of Zhuxian. Maybe in the future, there will be a Qi that transforms into the Three Pure Ones, and a proper traveler can recreate the prehistoric flow in another world!

The first level of Qi training is to kill and Qi training is perfect. The fourth level of Qi training is to kill and build the foundation. Why are you dividing the levels?

Author, I feel that you have made the ancient method too powerful. You can fight at the fourth or fifth level before you have even practiced one level of Qi. This will definitely lead to higher-level confrontations in the future, and then the training level you set will be of little use.

It's amazing, Zhang Yi was persuaded to quit, and he lived for a long time Is killing people and seizing treasures to risk the disapproval of the world? Do you think God can't stand it? In the first chapter, there were several attempts to persuade him to quit. After finishing one chapter, the protagonist dies.

Lao Meng, don't be an eunuch, grit your teeth and work hard to finish writing ✊

How old is this protagonist? Has he never been in society, seen the evil people, or what? If you practice so slowly in the early stage, what else is it than waste? Such a big man doesn't even have any self-awareness, so he can't stand being said anything? I wipe it,

After the new book came out, all the recommendation votes for this book were taken away by the new book 😡

In the new month, I will give you two monthly passes I just want to finish writing, it doesn't matter how slow it is

The biggest shortcoming is the confusion of the power system

I'm offering a reward of 15,000 coins, come on Lao Meng💪! I don't even have any background in conception and writing, but it is a hundred times better than a novice writer like Tomato Potato👍. But it would be better if the storyline had more fireworks. After all, this is a secular world!

I originally read this novel because profit comes first.

I feel that once I have a foundation in the New Territory, there is no need to fight for the Ancient World anymore, and the ancient powers have always used the protagonist. The most important protagonist is Mo Xiu 😄😄😄

The power of the years? This sentence is so familiar, there seems to be a sentence called "I forgot something in the years"

Am I dazzled? Why did I see that two chapters were updated today?

Looking back, I found that the beginning of this book is quite novel, not as high-profile and pretentious as other rebirth memes. 🤭

48 Recommendation votes in two days, which is much better than the previous few weeks. To keep it up, it takes time and rhythm.

I feel like the author has been a lot more diligent recently. . .

I just want to know if Chu Han can be resurrected