Dawn of Pirates

Come on, come on, but the setting of the red sand fruit feels a bit abrupt.

Itachi: The human fruit of the animal type fantasy beast mutates into the form of Amaterasu, and has immortal fire Amaterasu, Tsukuyomi, and Susana. Hidan: The superman type cut the fruit into eight pieces, has the ability to be immortal, the superior fruit of the split fruit, has the weapon accidentally given to the devil fruit, the bloody March sickle, and has the ability to curse the fruit. Angle: Animal-type fantasy beasts grow the Fruit of Resentment. They can steal other people's hearts, gain five-attribute power, and split them apart. Red Sand Scorpion: A person with superhuman puppet fruit ability, and an unexpected product, a puppet with superhuman sand iron fruit. Deidara: Superman type clay bomb fruit ability user. Orochimaru: The animal type phantom beast, the snake fruit, has the form of Yamata no Orochi. It has the ability to seize other people's bodies, plant a curse seal, summon the snake clan, and reincarnate in the dirty earth. Konan: A superhuman paper fruit user. I have an ability similar to natural elementalization, and I can inject a substance into him to explode. Loquat Juuzang: The great swordsman.

Deliberate, too deliberate. Judging from the current content, it is like a rag doll that is deliberately put together. For example, the protagonist has abilities similar to Nagato Payne. , It can also be seen as a coincidental encounter, but other well-known figures from Naruto, such as Kisame, Konan, Orochimaru, Itachi... Have inexplicably had pirated clones in the pirate world. The key is that these pirated clones seem to have nothing to do with the original characters. It always makes people feel like Master Luo of time management accidentally has an accident, but Nanning Fenxiang takes the blame. In fact, it can be written that the protagonist is influenced by Payne's dream that has been possessed for ten years. In the process of becoming stronger, he finds some like-minded partners and gradually creates a powerful pirate group named "Akatsuki", leaving many legendary stories in the adventure and struggle of the Grand Line. Isn't it delicious? It is necessary to painstakingly and painstakingly restore every member of the Akatsuki Naruto. Such pirated characters are really not worth the gain. You must know that each member of the Akatsuki Naruto has a very distinct personality. If the author's writing is strong enough, it will be enough to make everyone stand out. If the author's writing is not strong enough and cannot control a certain person, readers will unconsciously compare it with the original work and imitate others...

Author, I'm wondering how to deal with that "absolute" thing? Everyone else has Devil Fruits, so why do you feel that Zetsu is the same as an alien? Author, you can give a rough estimate. Deidara was the last one to enter the Akatsuki. Now the timeline is almost ready for "Konan" to enter. It was supposed to be a three-person team in the early stage composed of Fei, Pain and Konan. Fei was replaced by Kisame, and then Scorpion joined, and then met "White and Black Zetsu". Because communication on the sea must be good, it is necessary to write Shiro Zetsu as an important communication figure who can cross the sea, get information about Akatsuki's later intelligence issues, and then Zetsu and Scorpion? Konan and Pain searched for and invited them separately. After the two joined, Zetsu discovered and invited Itachi, followed by the immortal duo Hidan and Kakuzu, and finally Deidara. Remember that Ra was the last one to join Akatsuki, but if the author wants to change it, he can add some more. This is a list of character appearances that I roughly sorted out for the author. (I hope the author will not interfere with the main plot of the protagonist. Of course, it can still be interfered with in the later stage. I don't want to see Luffy kneeling in the budding stage. Who do you want to add later? You can add it. Anyway, there is still a vacancy for A Fei. Let me tell you, that A Fei's vacancy is in the Akatsuki group. We need ten people in total. Ah Fei, I think you don't want to join them, right? You can only join them as a naval spy. What do you want to do in the end? You write it yourself. I usually write more, but they are all excellent. I hope you can still read them patiently. , I benefited a lot after reading it.)

Author, can you get all the Akatsuki members in? Konan, Hidan, Kakuzu, Scorpion, Deidara, Itachi, and Zetsu are all capable Devil Fruits; without Fei, Deidara's Devil Fruit Burst Fruit must be obtained after Luffy goes to sea, because before Luffy goes to sea, there is a person with the ability to Burst Fruit, Luffy knocked him down, so the Devil Fruit refreshed, and was later eaten by Deidara.

Oops, I feel like Payne is so weak and doesn't feel good at all! It's so uncomfortable. I keep releasing two skills: Vientiane Tianyin Shenluo Tianzheng. When will I strengthen it?

Can you turn into Six Paths Pain after falling?

When to go to Holy Land Marie Gioia?

Deidara was caught in the laboratory when he was a child. After eating the Clay Fruit, he could control the clay and pinch out what he wanted. Later, his left arm was amputated and transformed into an artificial Explosive Fruit. During the experiment, he met the clay artist Ainz. Later, the two became masters and apprentices, and Ainz taught him Clay, in the end, the laboratory exploded. In order to save Deidara, Ainz exploded together. After seeing it, Deidara painfully discovered the true meaning of art, which is explosion. Then he drifted around and came to a small island. He had a fierce battle with Orochimaru and Uchiha Itachi, and then escaped.

Nagato's first psychic technique was the Heretic Golem. You see, the author, that this psychic technique has come out, so the Heretic Golem should also come out for some air.

I'll give you a ticket to speed up the coming of the Heretic Golem.

I just started watching it. Is Shinra Tenzheng on the same CD as Naruto? Will it become shorter in the future?

I want to ask again, when will the author of the Heretic Golem be awakened?

Author, let me sort it out first. First of all, people in this world cannot use ninjutsu. At most, they are inferior or basic wall-climbing. Orochimaru can be regarded as a devil fruit first, because they only have chakra and cannot form seals. Only Payne can pass on ninjutsu through dreams, right? If it is wrong, then I will not understand the world view of this world. (Request author's reply)

Who are you the author? What does "you are" mean?

When will the heretic demon be awakened? Author

Now that the necromancy has come out, heretic demons should hurry up, right?

The writing was pretty good, why did it stop?

Author, you said it was early, is it only a matter of time?

It's quite beautiful. Why are there so few people? I'm a little worried. Come on, author💪

I feel like it's very well written. I hope I can keep writing. It's best to add a few more pictures every day.