
Pai Lao's Bizarre Adventure in JOJO
牌佬在JOJO中的奇妙冒险
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The combination of JOJO and Yu-Gi-Oh!, But unfortunately, JOJO's writing is very good, and Yu-Gi-Oh's writing is ordinary. The protagonist has a bunch of junk cards in his hand. There is no chain, and the effects of the cards will be ineffective against high-level enemies. The most critical point of novels with Yu-Gi-Oh elements is that the soul, or Chuuni, has to shout out various effects when playing cards, and then after a long series of effects are activated, a big brother with a long and handsome name is summoned, and then the big brother reverses the situation. In this novel, the protagonist's deck of trash fish is similar to the character pre-group in Duel Link. It has more trash magic traps than the pre-group, but also has one less big brother than the pre-group. The protagonist is a pure support, summoning fish to resist damage, or use red potion as a nanny.
My favorite villain in JOJO is Kira Yoshikage, so author, can you make his death a little ugly?
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The first generation, the blond-haired poor people at the bottom, raised the stone ghost face that symbolized courage, resisting the unfair fate and the children of the rich families who blocked them. The second generation, a capable man with peerless wisdom, is clearly transcendent of everything, but still embedded in the red stone symbolizing the bond, seeking revenge on the earth for his comrades who killed their enemies. The third generation is a poor man who has become a king. Even if he becomes the strongest, he still wants to cut off the fate of the past and silently walks towards the invincible man The fourth generation is a mortal who pursues peace of mind and body. Even if the situation is only despair, he will never give up any possibility and risk everything to press the switch that symbolizes hope The fifth generation, a powerful company boss, faces the end of his own death and strengthens his belief. Challenging the final battle against the newcomers who undermined the organization's development The sixth generation, the last man, a sincere priest, devoted his life to the long-cherished wish of his best friend, insisted on his faith no matter what, and completely ended the destiny engraved on everyone The seventh generation, the president who was sincerely loyal to the country, in order to collect the remains of the saint to benefit the people, bravely declared war on the reactionaries with dark will, and still cared about the motherland before his death
Stand-in Yu-Gi-Oh - Killer Queen
Killer Queen Unknown race, unknown star level Attack: Unknown Defense: Unknown This card cannot be normally summoned, and can only be specially summoned by the effect of "Yoshikage Kira". The ④ effect of this card name can only be used once per duel. ①: Place an "explosion" counter on the monster fighting this card. ②: Once per turn, all monsters with "explosion" counters are destroyed. ③: Special summon a "Heart-piercing Blight Attack" monster from the deck or hand. ④: All cards in both sides' decks, hand cards, extra decks, field, graveyard, and excluded areas will be changed to the state at the end of the previous round.
This book is well written, but it's a pity that only Jojo fans will be satisfied, not Pai players and Qidian readers.
Travelers who don't know the plot and don't like this subject can avoid the lightning in advance.
Recruitment of substitute messengers
Dear stand-ins, bring your outstanding stand-ins to register here. The most outstanding person among them will get the opportunity to star in this book.
Although the writing style is a bit immature, it is surprisingly touching when I read it! It's been a long time since I could read a novel like this in one sitting.
Author, is it bad? Are all the protagonists except Yu Qiao and Jotaro dead? ? No matter how powerful Kaz is, he will be scalded to death by lava. Why is Huang Zhen's ability useless? ? ? What does it mean when a wave of Kaz suddenly comes back and destroys the protagonist group? ? ? ? ? ? ? Why are you reading this fanfic? ? Those who are not dead in the original work and those who are dead (except Kira) are all dead now!
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According to the author's description, Platinum Star as a card should have the following effects. Platinum Star Warrior type/Light attribute Star rating unknown Attack: 3500 Defense: 3500 This card cannot be normally summoned and can only be specially summoned by "Jotaro Kujo". ①: The attack power/defense power of this card will increase with the owner's anger. ②: The monster fighting this card only has the effect of that monster negated during the battle phase. ③: During this phase, the opponent cannot activate the card's effect, attack, change the monster's position, or cover the card. This effect can also be activated during the opponent's turn, and other effects cannot be activated corresponding to this effect. ③ This is because one round counts as ten minutes, and the stop for Platinum is only five seconds, so it can only be counted as one stage (card draw, preparation, main 1, battle, main 2, end)
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It's wrong to write a protagonist who doesn't know the plot. The sense of involvement is gone all at once. When I read novels, I introduce myself to the protagonist. When I read it later, it turns out that the protagonist in the novel has not been read. Then it must not be me. Is it you? It's me, I think that's not you, I also think, that's not me
Watch part of it. The author wants to combine Yu-Gi-Oh elements with Jojo elements. But it's not very good. First of all, the essence of Yu-Gi-Oh is the deck, which uses the abilities and effects of different cards to defeat the enemy unexpectedly. (Perhaps there is also a God-drawing card mouth mustache), but the author has only written about the Dark Magician, the Dark Magician Girl, and the Chestnut Ball over and over again, and there is nothing new. The Winged Dragon's divine thrusts that appeared were too abrupt and dry. Secondly, the charm of jojo lies in the battle of wits and the golden spirit. The same goes for the battle of wits throughout the story. There is nothing impressive about it, and it makes people look at it awkwardly. Golden Spirit even looked a little embarrassed. Finally, there are not many poisonous points in the book, but there is nothing eye-catching either.
Stand-in Yu-Gi-Oh!—Golden Experience Requiem
Star rating: Unknown Attack: Unknown Defense: Unknown Race: Unknown Attribute: Unknown This card can only be specially summoned by the effect of "Insect Arrow". ①: Can invalidate the activated effect. (Not in the chain, you can invalidate the effects that cannot be chained, but you cannot invalidate the effects that cannot be invalidated, such as the sealed Exodia, the Creator God of Light, the Altergeist Protocol and other Altergeist cards on the field. What is invalid is that the effect is not activated, and the field/sustained magic/trap card will still be present instead of being sent to the graveyard) ②: Select a card other than this card on the field to invalidate the effect. This effect can also be activated in the opponent's turn. ③: This card is not affected by the effects of other cards.
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I'm a little confused when I see a protagonist who doesn't know the direction of the plot. First of all, the protagonist doesn't have the time-stop analysis of the Jojos in the original work, and all the inferences are correct, and Xiaoqiang lives. Secondly, the enemy's stand-in ability is unknown, which is simply too fatal for the protagonist. The most practical result of joining the group is that the protagonist is killed by some ability. In the end, the protagonist's ability will not be concealed at all. Everyone knows what the protagonist's ability is. It is really cool to be targeted at this point. Although it may not be much better than the protagonist to me, the protagonist's performance is really a bit silly and sweet In comparison, in Jojo fandom, I prefer to watch the protagonist who understands the general trend, let's say an ordinary person, not a non-human physique that was broken by hundreds of punches from Platinum Star Ora. 3. The avatar is considered to be the strongest among all avatars in history. Unlike the avatars that came after it, there are more or less restrictions. The platinum time limit also has a limit on the movement range. The gold experience is too buggy and the settings are too ugly, so it is simply wasted. For the protagonist of the original novel, there is indeed no sense of expectation for the transparent enemy, but the plot that only the reader knows is really frustrating 😒
It should be written like this dio: Hey Varudo! Time stops for me! ...... dio: Why?! This is impossible, your double should be stopped! ! You Qiao: Because this is not a substitute! Kamida!
Before I looked at it, I thought you would use Hui Liuli or Shen Xuan to attack the opponent's double dome, terminal access, Hades, and use Bubble Magic Canister to counterattack. I thought that even if I couldn't see Xiangjian Longhuiqiao, I could still see Hero Stardust... But I pulled down the directory, and it seemed that there was no fusion. In a low-martial world, there is no terminal, but heroes can have one, right? No matter how bad it is, you can use your mischief to burn people's blood and torture them. Does the so-called card guy mean Ax King vs. Chop?
Stand-in Yu-Gi-Oh!-Heart-piercing wither attack
Heart-piercing blight attack Unknown race, unknown star level Attack: Unknown Defense: Unknown This card cannot be normally summoned, and can only be specially summoned by the effect of "Killer Queen". ①: This card cannot be destroyed by battle or effects. ②: Activate when the damage calculation of the monster fighting this card ends, and that card is destroyed.
Finished reading. The front is nice. The back is a bit slippery.
I came to this book with the hope of having three phantom gods appear at a critical moment, but I ended up having to dio once, and was killed in the ending. In the end, there were three phantom gods with almost no dramatic foreshadowing, which was really disappointing.
I've finished reading it, and overall it's okay, but the ending left me stunned for a while. In fact, you don't need to write the next three chapters at all. You can even leave them blank. Is it necessary for Katz to write like this? If anyone likes this book, I suggest you stop after you see DIO is completely beaten to death. Okay, I'll stop complaining here. See you in the new book.
I don't understand the ending, is it to let the world transcend heaven and directly copy reality? , And doesn't the protagonist have the ability to resurrect other people?
It's September 22 and there's still no new book out
Well
It's hard to see these two themes, and the result is indeed like this. The first part is fine, but the second part has the protagonist becoming a little smarter.
How to put it, in fact, the creativity is quite good, but it is difficult to write. Things like Ax vs. Slash can only be done in the early stage. Otherwise, you might as well write a stand-in for Chang A in the early stage and later stage. Then there is the issue of effect. The two things are not in the same world view, which makes it difficult to integrate. For example, if a dead Su comes in the later stage, can you give other people's teammates to NTR? Exclusion is also a very difficult option. What will happen to the excluded people? The most important thing is that the substitutes in JOJO have not been destroyed yet. Resistance, even if you have it, can be "liberated". How should you understand the explosion site? If the opponent hits you and triggers Hanno Sublime, will it kill the opponent alone or explode them all? In fact, the writing of this is quite problematic. I can summon monsters to block your stand, and I You are unable to resist the effect of The animation in the animation does not strictly follow the form of the text or strictly follows the fusion of the text. If you pick two at random, it is too much. If you strictly follow the real cards and you cannot draw them, those supplementary cards will probably not appear. It is impossible to make a pot like the Baoza series, and what should you do if there are resources for the opponent. Reality is not a game. Teammates are given milk in advance. Anyway, it is impossible to lose before the cards are drawn. If you cannot give cards like golden goblins, it will have no side effects. There are too many bugs and the upper limit given at the beginning is too high. Who can start with an elf swordsman who torments the enemy? The opponent didn't even take advantage of the damage effect, and the writing style is actually okay. But if you use a substitute and use randomly drawn cards, it would be good. How he writes it is like tricking Yu-Gi-Oh fans into killing him 😥
Disappointed, there is no sense of immersion, the writing style is relatively average, the author will strive for the next book