Alien Snack Vendor

It's so damn vicious. Pig's trotters work really hard to kill the people who are kind to him. He also tries to deal with people who want to kill him and his friends to keep him warm.

1. Non-toxic, safe to eat 2. The writing is so-so 3. The content is as interesting as high school mathematics compulsory course 2 4. The protagonist is like a salted fish without a goal, muddle along, reading this book is like reading this book

The novel doesn't have any big poisonous points, but there are quite a few small ones. I feel that this is also the reason for such poor results. I hope the author will stick to it. I will also point out some of the problems I feel. 1. I feel that the author wants to write more about daily life and some intellectual battles. The intellectual battles are quite qualified, but the descriptions in key places are always very sloppy (although the details are not very good), such as when the ice dragon surrenders. Thinking about writing a few more sentences, it wouldn't be so abrupt, and sometimes a character who is clearly well-created suddenly appears with very childish behavior. Many details are not good. After the protagonist surrenders the frost dragon, wherever he goes, "Your name is Allen? You are the Allen who surrendered the frost dragon." "That's right." 3. The description of the battle is really bad, and it even gave me a feeling that I can do whatever I want, which makes the thrilling scenes feel like playing house. I suggest you watch other western fantasy battle scenes (I recommend Moxiang). In addition, the combat power is also somewhat broken. There is a strength meter at the beginning, but it seems that it has not been mentioned since. 4. The two-dimensional flavor is indeed a bit strong. . . Whether it's the yandere girl Sanmu Loli or the assassin rabbit, since it's not placed in the light novel section, you should try to avoid it. 5. The focus has shifted. In the early stage, it was still a daily story between father and daughter. Later, Ellie appeared less and less, and the focus became more focused on fighting. However, you cannot write this aspect well at all, and you will also discourage readers who want to read daily stories. 6. Please read it again after you finish writing it. From time to time, a plot to reduce intelligence will pop up. A priceless gem + a powerful drop of blood = a gem that is not only beautiful but also has powerful magic defense and will never be damaged, but is only worth 50,000? ? ?

9Read 48 chapters! It feels a little bit toxic and awkward, you can watch it or not! Maybe it's because I'm a bookworm of more than ten years and I'm too picky!

Isn't writing the protagonist seeking death in this way? Isn't there anyone who doesn't understand the truth that a common man is not guilty but he is guilty of carrying a jade? If the system does not protect you, and you set the protagonist to be a scumbag, your setting has already collapsed, and there is no protection period for novices. You are going to die. If your background is in modern society, at least you have legal protection. In your world of swords and magic, killing seems to be nothing, right? Written like a joke

The protagonist is actually not invincible in the store? Is there another way to write it? !

Isn't it going to be another article about financial collapse where snacks are added with some effects and a melon seed is sold for one gold coin?

When I saw the three words "Snack Seller" and the introduction of "Doing Business with a Dragon", I initially thought he was the kind of traveling businessman who travels around in other worlds. The result is still a store type

Give it a try first and see if it turns out well in the future. (It's best not to have a female protagonist)

Insipid, this is the only feeling I had while reading the book. I felt there was no climax or excitement, everything was just mediocre. Many people complained that the protagonist's shop does not have invincibility. In fact, I also complained at the beginning. Is it all based on the quality of people from other worlds? Later, I understood the author's idea. The author hid the amplification function of each item, so no one would peep for a short time, and then when others discovered it, he would become stronger. So this is why I said the plot of this book is as bland as water. The biggest poisonous point may be that the store does not carry Invincible, but if you look at the author's thinking, this is not actually a poisonous point. But the plot is dull, there is no serious plot conflict, not to mention pretending to be slap in the face, Thirty Years of Hedong or some other things. It's hard to attract readers. When I saw La Tiao was released, I gave up. It's not that it's not good, it's just that it was too bland. If there were no giant goblins, I would believe you if you told me it was a modern novel. .

This is the first time I heard that you can still lose money if you use the original price of the product as salary... Is the selling price equal to the original price?

It's a mess, and the more you read it, the less interesting it becomes. The systematic writing also makes the protagonist weak or strong, which feels like a second chair.

😰 This is the first time I see a book with so many words and so few recommendation votes. The author is so perseverant.

You blew Coke at the beginning because you didn't pounce fast enough, right?

This book should be the author's account of Dad's Restaurant in Another World, or a copy of it

Just one signing made me earn 118. I will still have 116 😊 when you update for 30 days in a row. Come on, Ollie.

If you just want to read something lighter or exciting, I think you can quit it. I've read 200 chapters. The protagonist doesn't want to become strong, he's not invincible, and he doesn't believe in making powerful friends. Earlier I said that Frost Dragon was just there and did nothing, but later I put all the fault on Frost Dragon. If you persist for another 30 chapters, give up if it doesn't work.

Don't watch it with your brain. When I saw Chapter 42, I thought about it. This should be classified in the second dimension, light novel. Personal points: It has a strong home-like feel, the writing is dry, and some parts are very inconsistent. Highlights: The subject matter is very interesting, and the conflicting reactions between aliens and modern snacks are quite interesting. But the author's writing skills are not strong enough. He clearly has feelings, but he can't hit the g-spot. 1 million words is very fat.

In fact, the biggest problem with this book is that many people read it with the mentality of reading a cool article, but the protagonist is very weak, and the protagonist is not invincible in his own store. Even an important clerk can be kidnapped by the other party. Reading a cool article makes it uncomfortable. Those who don't read cool articles don't want to read this type of book.

I can buy a bottle of black water for tens of yuan, but your Coke, a drink I've never seen before, only costs 30 yuan. Is it expensive?

The persona is like a daddy, the content is like overload

Have you finished raising your book? ? ? I'm shocked

The character looks a bit like Dad's alien restaurant, exactly the same