The Radiant Rainbow Phoenix Shakes the World

First of all, I would like to apologize to everyone. I originally planned to release the new book in mid-June, but due to work reasons and other factors, it was not ready yet, so the release of the new book was delayed. The next new book is a light novel in Japanese manga style. The outline and characters have been initially formed. However, internal investment has been frustrated many times and the beginning has been changed many times. I originally wanted to save the manuscript and publish it directly. Yesterday, I suddenly received a big message from an editor, giving guidance and asking me to revise it before coming back, so I will probably continue to work hard. Of course, no matter whether the internal investment is passed or not, the book will definitely be published before July 5th. I wrote the book to write my own story, not to follow the crowd, otherwise it would not be the original intention of writing, so everyone can rest assured that there will be a new book. See you in July~ξ( ✿＞◡❛)

I came across this book a long time ago. I thought it was pretty good at the time, so I kept reading it until now. What I see now is a map of the second dimension. Let me talk about my feeling at the beginning. The author of this book is a new beauty writer. Overall, the writing is quite remarkable. It starts with time travel, directly naming the heroine's identity, quickly entering the subsequent plot, and then cheating and getting a golden finger. Then it begins to enter a slight flashback, naming the original protagonist's identity, and merging the two together. In my opinion, this section is a very natural transition. The protagonist is a little girl who started out at the age of ten. It may be that the main idea is to slowly grow up. The heroine has many plug-ins, each with its own strengths and weaknesses. I personally think the setting is very reasonable, and there is no feeling of indiscriminate firing across the map. In the subsequent series of plot developments, the heroine encountered difficulties and gradually solved them, and then gained new functions. In this early stage, maybe because of the new writer, I personally feel that the plot is a bit thin, that is, it is too smooth. There are some interesting points, but it is not fully explored. But later on, it can be seen that the author's level has obviously changed in quality. Some of the transitions are very well-structured, and it no longer describes a process through multiple visuals as it was originally. Of course, it may also have something to do with the increase in the number of characters. It is also worthy of recognition that this book is said to be a heroine, but in fact, the author shows a kind of cooperation in team fighting. This point is eye-catching in the sea of ​​stories about one man against the gods. I don't really like the kind of invincibility where the heroine is absolutely invincible, although it looks quite cool. In addition, the overall logic of the story is online, and the IQs of the supporting characters and enemies are also online. Some descriptions of villains and characters who are both good and evil also have their own highlights, and there is no such justice concept of right and wrong, which I like very much.       ，，，，，，， The most commendable thing is that reading this book is very relaxing and enjoyable. I can read it without realizing it without too much embarrassment. I recommend you to read it and I will continue to read it.

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It's been one year since Caihuang published the book ~ 1.5 Million words have been reached! HappyＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

Come and praise our lovely heroine and little beauty author. I'll go first, the kitten is such a cutie🤗🤗

This is a black kitten~

By the way, one day our little friend Feng Xiyue finally reached adulthood, so she thought about whether it was time to fall in love. Little classmate Bai Sheng on the side heard Feng Xiyue's shocking remarks, and suddenly felt a sense of crisis. Shouldn't it be first-come-first-serve near the water and the building? So he blinked his eyes and hinted wildly, Xiao Yueyue, I can, Kangkang me, choose me in online dating, I am super sweet, choose me in real life, I am even sweeter. When Feng Xiyue saw Bai Sheng's cramped eyes, she asked with concern: "Are you... Flooded in your brain?" Bai Sheng's enthusiasm was extinguished, and after thinking for a while, he said: "My brain is flooded with Yuan Hua."

An exquisite fantasy legend. Alas, is the rumor that "the great fantasy gods are all cross-dressers" true? Although I have only read chapters 111 to 114 back and forth (which should be the climax of a stage), I have already been conquered by the delicate writing style of this book, so what? Envy, jealousy and hatred. But I also know that this kind of meticulous pixelated writing style takes time to refine, and it cannot be the same throughout the entire article, because the update system of online articles is a disguised destruction of literariness. To give a simple example, choose a paragraph below: "As Feng Xiyue held her breath, black and white collided suddenly! There was no terrifying explosion as expected, the picture of West Lake remained still for a few seconds, and then completely distorted! Feng Xiyue heard a series of There was a sound like glass breaking, that was when the space was broken again, and the blazing white light filled the whole picture, and Feng Xiyue had to temporarily close her eyes. " This is a picture-in-picture seen through the perspective of the protagonist. First of all, this kind of description can be brought in very well. Then the color represents "black and white", the sound represents "no explosion", and the side highlights the "distortion of the lake surface". Then switch back to the protagonist's hearing, and use the voice to write the picture "glass broken-hot white". I dare say that this paragraph is directly directed to a certain CG director, and the director will cry. It seems that it would be difficult to visualize it with just a few lines of words. So this is the so-called literary nature. The author conveys impossible pictures by tapping the reader's imagination. I just said that this was just a random selection. Yes, these three chapters describe a continuous battle description that can "fill holes" and "dig holes". Both in terms of structure and description details, they are textbook-like masterpieces. If the Qidian editor sees this and doesn't sign the contract... In short, although this book has changed my previous habit of ranking, what happened to female channels? Female channels can write hard-core fantasy that most male channels cannot see. Its rare and valuable outline and rendering of the characters' psychology are the strengths of female videos. At this moment, I was imagining a cross-dressing guy looking at my comments, feeling chilled in my heart. Story: The battle between the good and the villain of the nine generations, the blood feud and the long-lasting love between children. Justice never dies, making people remember how a woman's choice between the Holy Spirit and evil spirits, good and evil, makes the world more absurd, and the protagonist can prove the meaning of his existence. Structure: A complete explosive structure, with rigorous transitions from top to bottom, and description, narrative, and exposition complement each other. There is just a slight mistake. In the dialogue between the Eighth Generation Holy Spirit and his brother after the war, several characters were redundantly reflected. If it is not necessary (the possibility of the characters appearing later), it may be better to go through it faster (maybe the author is just for the sake of word count, haha). Creativity: Hard-core fantasy does not need to be imaginative in the setting. Just writing the original world setting is of a very high standard. The simple confrontation between good and evil lasts for eight worlds. There are too many stories that can be innovated. To be honest, given the author's writing skills, if she had her write about the protagonist practicing swordplay 10,000 times every day, she would probably be able to come up with new ideas every time she writes a chapter. Writing style: Suitable for moderate Internet readers, old bookworms, both men and women. Because I haven't seen too many "emotional dramas", and human love doesn't count, I just want to say, hardcore fantasy + real heroine, both of them can be good after becoming gods. Rhythm: You can't see much rhythm from just the big explosion and climax. The place I looked at happened to be the link between the previous and the following. Reading the whole text requires careful reading, and I can't skip paragraphs, and I can't bear to do so. It is still recommended that the author break the long description into short sentences, which will be more friendly to new bookworms on mobile phones. Update: This book has been put on the shelves, and updates are absolutely guaranteed. The author also said that she is here to realize her dream, so please support me. Even if you read online articles with this style of writing one chapter a day, it is more comfortable than following other famous celebrities in chapters. Perception: When writing this type of thing, I silently lit up a cigarette. Male compatriots should understand that feeling. General comments: Judging from the out of context, there is no doubt that fairy grass is. This book is like a newly launched French dish, using exquisite techniques and embellishments, as well as delicate taste differences to challenge discerning diners. The woman who made the reservation, but the male companion who came with her was attracted by this dish, and the temptation exceeded the charm of his female companion. That's it, haha, the Chinese name of this French dish is "Xi Shi Tofu", and the Chinese name of the French name means "Run, beautiful oriental girl, water tofu sauce and foie gras".

The second issue of the column has been reviewed, and your work has been selected. Unfortunately, the column has not been refined. I will keep up the good work in the small column. At the same time, I also wish Dada's works prosperous, and I hope Dada will keep improving and continue to create 🌹🌹🌹

I've read dozens of chapters and come here to review. Don't be nervous, little cat. It's very well written (I saw a little cat in the middle and said I was nervous) 😁 It's time travel and rebirth, and the little cat can still attract many readers. It's excellent. The story is exciting, the description is okay, and there are many words. If you like it, you can read it as much as you like, 🤭 Like it, it's great.