The Sorrow of Li Meng

Read it carefully, the evaluation is as follows: Content: 3.9⭐(There are many reasons for the low score, the character description is not rigorous enough, the inner expression is not full enough, there are no other problems) Theme: 4⭐(Love style, routine is a bit Old-fashioned, but very popular, and the novelty of the author's writing style and subject matter are bonus points) Writing style: 5⭐ Summary: After it is put on the shelves, carefully describe the characters, add some inner expressions, and if possible, add some "human factors". ps: Characterization refers to a character's behavior, demeanor description, personality, etc. Inner expression refers to the protagonist and passers-by as well as the supporting characters and "villains" as well as the people around them. This book's rating: 4.3⭐ Because I have very high expectations for this book, I am more rigorous in my evaluation. Don't get me wrong.

1. The introduction is well received and very attractive to me, Coke Coke. 2. It is recommended to change the order of chapters 1, 2, and 3... But it doesn't matter now, after all, Da Da Da has released so many chapters🤨 3. Good review~ The characters are vividly and distinctively depicted. The two people Qingli and Li Shang are well described (I wonder if the master has changed his vest🧐). The first three chapters are very attractive, especially the first chapter, and the second and third chapters are relatively slow. (However, this is normal) 4. The details are not in place and are a bit abrupt, such as Qingyun's divorce (I don't know if this is a foreshadowing and whether there is a good explanation later. I am looking forward to the follow-up for now) 5. The plot has become cliché, and the princess wants to escape from the palace quietly (with all due respect, this kind of plot can be seen in many TV series and many novels. This is what I want to complain about...) 6. How to say it! The characters are well drawn (verbal and psychological). But as I slowly read it, it became clearer. How can I put it, it gave me a somewhat "unpleasant" feeling. (But it doesn't matter much, after all, they are princesses of the kingdom, and most of them have this common problem.) 7. Summary The writing is smooth, but the dialogue is a bit too much, and it feels like there is endless things to say. I have some complaints about the heroine┐('~`;)┌. There won't be any changes in her character in the future, right? (What to look forward to) The overall plot is cliche. You can probably guess the next chapter after reading one chapter... It is recommended that you try more anti-routines and increase your imagination to present a different story and deepen the processing of details and plot clues, which can increase your interest in reading. That's probably all ٩( 'ω' )و Write something novel (I don't know if it's to write the author's inner story, if so, then just like this; if not, let's change it again!) For example, since it is an ancient style, you can add some of these elements. For the description of the scene, you can have some descriptions of clothing, food, housing, transportation, actions, etc. It is recommended to refer to classical anthologies. Maybe it will be helpful to you. Remarks: I really like your description of the characters' language expressions... It's very interesting. I guess you must be more lively and cheerful in reality (haha, I hope I guessed it right (●°u°●)​") Finally, let's encourage each other, come on ٩( 'ω' )و Pen refill (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ (I accepted the book without mercy)

Although it is a fantasy, the opening chapter looks very much like a fairy couple. From the introduction, the plot is in the same style as my book, fake (hahaha). The writing style is okay, the plot direction is well prepared, and the character's personality is also clear. It can be seen that the author is trying to dig holes to create suspense, but it seems to be a bit shallow. Because the label is fantasy, it doesn't have that much emphasis on fairy spirit. The recently updated plot is about solving crimes. Friends who are more interested in plot may wish to give it a try.

After reading it now, I found that the writing style is not only delicate, but also the plot rhythm and other aspects are well handled. It made me read smoothly and comfortably, and I liked it very much. 😍👍👍👍 And some scenes, environments, character appearances, etc. Are described very clearly and nuancedly, and the writing is very good (I even need to learn, But I can't learn it, it's too awesome 😢😭)👍👍👍 At the same time, the cover of the book is also very attractive, and the title is very literary and ancient. The feeling of wind, the introduction is very attractive (I personally prefer the one that is slightly sweet in the beginning and super sadistic in the later stage.) (But I also like the big one, hehe) But I think there are too many dialogues, and some dialogues are a bit inconsistent with the characters (for example, some modest words are a bit inappropriate for the status of the characters) (and there are too many language descriptions in some places, it is recommended to simplify them) Some details are not in place, and some places are not explained clearly. My personal suggestion is that you can come up with some imaginative and anti-routine plots to present different content to attract readers. (Well, maybe that's why I've only read a dozen chapters) —————— In short, Da Da's writing skills are good, the writing is very delicate, and the characters are also very interesting. I like it very much, and I am looking forward to the following content. 😍👍👍👍❤️ Come on! ✊✊✊ (Not a professional, the above is just for reference, I also hope Haihan 🙏😃)

Holding a wisp of breeze is not like the moon in the world; Holding a ray of starlight is not like the snow in the world; Holding a wisp of mountains and rivers is not like a palace in the world. The best taste in the world is happiness. Three lines of words, I just thought of them, hehe, I give them to you. (The writing is a bit bad, just take a look ฅ(*°ω°*ฅ)*) The topic is clear and you can understand it at a glance. The following is the Happy Theater: Young man, do you want it sweet or salty? I curled my lips: I don't want any, I just want Xiaoli. As a human being, no, as a cat, you should not be too greedy. Be careful that the big flying wolf 🐺 will come to catch you at night. Me: Not afraid, I have Xiaoli to protect me. Uh! Xiaoli is still busy finishing classes... I don't have time to protect you, so choose another one! Me: I don't care, I don't care, I just want Xiaoli, I just want Xiaoli! The following picture shows a deer playing and rolling around, please make up your own mind. ...... Young meow~ Do you want a golden little Li, a silver little Li or a copper little Li? My little head, big hello. Me: So you are the river god? Don't even think about lying to me, I want it all, all of it. No matter if it's gold, silver or copper, it's all necessary. ... The river god fell to the ground and vomited blood... The story is both sweet and salty, but... It was so sweet that I had a mouth full of sugar. Don't go too far with Li Shang! Qingli is not yours alone. Okay! I'm scared for a second, you have to treat her well, haha. I'm going to find the river god. Just ask the river god if he will give it to you? In the summer of Fox, would you like a glass of iced Coke?

First, regarding the map, it is recommended that at the beginning of the game, the map where the protagonist is located should be described in a few words. At least the name and basic outline of the map should be pointed out, and it should not be included in the conversation. Second, for character description, it is recommended to describe the character's demeanor, appearance, clothing, exclusive actions, and personality. The protagonist has already appeared as Qingli and Lanxian, and you have not explained the age after reincarnation. Environmental description assistance, character description assistance, and mood description assistance all need to be in place as much as possible. Of course, there is also emotional foreshadowing. Third, for the expression, tone and movement, it is recommended that during the dialogue, match the body movements or facial movements of the protagonist or character when speaking, try to be as clear and specific as possible, and try to match some lines that require multiple adjectives to match the movements. Fourth, IQ, well, try to raise the IQ of each character as much as possible, don't be too ignorant. In addition to being beautiful, the romance may also need some intrigue and fighting. Use the character's personality to set up some natural conflict plots. Remember, be natural, don't be deliberate, don't go against the character's character and deliberately create conflicts. Overall evaluation, the writing is online and the plot is smooth. It is recommended to have more narration and less dialogue. Details can determine a lot of things, and it will also make it easier for you to dig holes and bury them. _(:з∠)_Come on!

Interesting Book Review Writing a book review for the first time, I rubbed my hands and felt a little excited. Ten generations of entanglements, the love between immortals, heroes and monsters. A Li's works depict a colorful and disgusting world. Looking at the entire book, we can see that the author's writing becomes better as he writes later. Compared with the first few chapters, the story framework and rhythm in the latter part have become better and better. I believe that millions will definitely become gods. Let's talk about the characters. The male protagonist is deeply affectionate and the details are true. The heroine is cute and kind, and she is also very three-dimensional and attractive. Good characters make the article successful. Finally, the author would like to give it a try and update it. Pump up Ali and run away happily

Brief comment: The entanglement between Qingli and Lishang for several lifetimes has finally come to fruition. Book title: "The Sorrow of Li Meng" Author: Huan Lianshou Keywords: fantasy romance, oriental fantasy Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: Name: "The Sorrow of Li Meng" From the title, the first impression is that it is a tragic novel, because So, I added it to my bookshelf and haven't read it for a long time, but the dark red design on the cover is very eye-catching. I always see her in many bookshelves. I finally couldn't resist the temptation and read the last chapter first. It turned out to be a happy ending of love. It turns out that Shang is the name of the male protagonist - Li Shang, and the female protagonist is Qingli. After understanding it, I found that this is really a good title. Introduction: The introduction is very poetic and picturesque, with a clear dream and ten generations of entanglements. There are sweet and slightly sadistic stories, three generations of love, three stories, very interesting. In particular, the author notes that novices should practice pen writing with caution. It's very cute, and the little girl's works are even more endearing. Even picky readers can't bear to be venomous. Opening: Chapter One: The Banquet, the first sentence explains the general environment. Since the birth of heaven and earth, the fairy world, the demon world, and the human world have stood side by side. The male protagonist Li Shang is the only god among the gods. He is higher than the three realms and possesses the power to subvert everything. The heroine is an immortal and the daughter of an emperor. The heroine believes that in order to survive the tribulation, they had ten reincarnations. This chapter is a wedge, explaining the reasons for the three stories. Is it really what the heroine thinks? That's up to the readers to find out for themselves. Character setting: The heroine: Qingli, the daughter of an immortal and an emperor. The first volume is a princess in the mortal world, while the second and third volumes are kept secret for the time being. Male protagonist: Li Shang, the only god in the three realms, a being above all else. Supporting role: Li Shang, another soul in Li Shang's body, the only god in the three realms, has cultivated to a demi-god, and like Li Shang, he also falls in love with Qingli. What will be the outcome, will he become a god through cultivation, or will he be annihilated by ashes. Plot: The first mortal chapter, a palace drama, the love between children. The second life of love between a human and a demon, Li Shang is a red tiger, it was in a very weak period at the beginning, and it is very lovable. The third life... Writing style: The writing style of this article is very good. Some scene descriptions and character descriptions are very beautiful, and the psychological descriptions are also very accurate. It is a pleasure to read slowly. The only drawback is that readers tend to confuse the names of Qingli, Lishang, and Lishang. It is okay when reading them consecutively. However, when you stop and read again, you sometimes have to think about it before you can connect with the plot. It is difficult to distinguish when listening to the reading. Summary: Beautiful article, you can taste it in your leisure time, just like tea, fresh and elegant.

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My favorite is of course the heroine Qingli! Who doesn't like the arrogant little princess and the cute little lazy fox who combine wisdom and beauty? Come out, come out, let's go through two moves, we sent a representative: Huan Lian Shou... I hope our baby Qingli and Li Shang can live a happy life without shame or impatience soon, and stop being remembered. She is really not a Shiquan Dabu Pill, she can't eat it, she can't eat it, she can't eat it! Say important things three times. If you are not afraid of being turned into hot pot ingredients by Li Shang, the most evil boss in the demon world, feel free to give it a try. You can send a representative: Huan Lian Shou... Finally, please send our beautiful, strong and sassy Demon King Qingli to the road of flowers! ! ! By the way, the male supporting actor Meng Shang is given to everyone. You are welcome to take him home, rub him into a ball, and give him a bear hug to warm the bed. This time, we will not send a representative...

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My favorite is the cute foxQingli. Do you need a reason to like foxes? Unnecessary! If you must give one, then take it away and make it Hu San's wife!

As the leader of the Wolf King who only has a soul but no body, he lives in Li Shang's body. He has very strong martial arts skills and a handsome appearance that fascinates beautiful girls like me. In my mind, many images of OS are about him. He is one with Li Shang, feeling and experiencing the same experiences as Li Shang. What Li Shang loves is also what Mengshang loves, and what Li Shang cherishes is also what Mengshang cherishes. The love that Li Shang can't let go of is also what Mengshang suddenly looks back on when he has been searching for him for thousands of times! Although there are duplicities and different appearances, the love and affection for Qingli in my heart is no less than that of Li Shang. It's a pity that you are the male partner. It's okay, the little fairy loves you! Well, my favorite is Meng Shang.

My little Ali seems like the moon covered by light clouds, and flutters like the snow covered by the flowing wind. Rub your hands and take them away quietly, especially after seeing the pictures.

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My favorite is the heroine Qingli. As for the reason, there is no reason. She is a little tsundere and cute. How can she not be liked by others? She is so cute and cute (⑉°з°)-♡ The clear color and warm sunshine enter the heart, and the flowers bloom in pinellia and accompany the heart. Lim dreams turn into snow once they pass, so why bother clinging to that touch. It is difficult to merge into one after leaving the country, and it is half empty and lonely. I will follow you in sorrow, and everything will become sweet. ✪ω✪The last sentence is the key point, clear, sad, and sweet. Heehee (♡˙˙♡), support the event.

Hahaha~ I like water posts the most. Come on, come on, I'll write a thousand words about it first~ Hei Hun Sha, come out and get beaten! Oh, I'm sorry, you seem to have been taken in by Li Shang. Although Da Da said that this was just the beginning, he sacrificed you from the beginning. You, you are quite pitiful, I sympathize with you for a second. I thought you were good at fighting, but I didn't expect you were really just a greedy brainless evil spirit. If you don't want to eat anything bad, just go and eat Li Shang's demon pill! ! ! It's not unfair at all to give you my head! ! ! I heard that my Qingli has recently turned into a cute little Muzhu, oh, I'm sorry, it's a little cute fox. Li Shang, what should you do now? You know (￣∀￣)! There are all kinds of kneading, and the soft little cute fox is the best to knead. Who knows who kneads it, I guarantee you will be addicted~ Q: In addition to eating, drinking, sleeping, and getting out of Shang's arms, what else does Qingli's little fox do? Soft little pillow! Warm warm baby! Li Shang's eyes are like ice, and the ice has been tempered with fire (I can't tell what kind of look it is, but Li Shang said it's cool anyway): "The one who talked about the mouse pad, come out!" Ahem ~ Sorry Si, pretend I didn't say anything~ Qingli's little fox poked its little head out of Li Shang's arms: "That, that, I can also warm the bed (｡･ω･｡)!" Li Shang's eyes of ice and fire instantly transformed into A pool of spring water rubbed the little fox's head, "Why did it get dark so quickly today? Let's go for a walk and go to bed~" The little fox pouted: "I haven't had dinner yet?" Heihunsha struggled. He puffed out the last mouthful of black mist: "Eat, eat, eat, eat whatever you want, go back and warm Li Shang's bed (＠￣ー￣＠)!" Meow (´-ω-`)~ Woo (｡･ω･｡)~

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