The Que Tribulation

The once-a-day update is finally coming 😂

The author must have put a lot of thought into it, 😘

The author's writing style is getting better and better, the emotions revealed in the story are becoming more and more real, and the reading is becoming more and more relaxed and enjoyable. It is really recommended, but the only flaw is that the author does not have a title in the update now⊙ω⊙⊙ω⊙😂😂😂

The writing style of this new book is very fluent, the concept is tight, and the content is appropriate. Although the previous paragraphs are not well done, this is also a newcomer's mistake, and the author must have a lot of understanding of history and culture. There is a lot of historical and cultural knowledge in the article, which is still highly recommended 😜

I am coming! Awesome, come on

Ah... Will the single player last forever? This is

Attracted by the introduction. It's simple, but it catches people's attention immediately. If the author is a newbie, his writing skills can be really impressive😋. Many objects are described in detail, and the attitude is really good. But I discovered that the author has a problem in not being able to distinguish how to use "" and """. For example, in the second paragraph of the first chapter, "I carefully found a few pieces in the carbon pile", and in the third paragraph, "Yue Ren moved slowly again." "To find" and "to move" are both verbs, so "" should be used instead of "". This is actually a common problem among many online writers. Even among the top masters, many of them cannot tell the usage at all, but this is a very substandard thing. I hope the author can check the usage carefully and make corrections. Secondly, the author seems to have some problems with the scene transition. For example, in the first chapter, I wrote "I saw a lot of people outside, I guess the time is approaching Mao hour", and then wrote "Visiting Tao Jueqian...". The whole thing looks very abrupt, with Yiren in front and Fantao in the back. Scene change is a difficult point. Most authors will overdo it by using narration. Very few authors can use description to complete the scene change. The author can describe it in words first, otherwise it will be very strange to read and suddenly change. There are many characters in the first chapter. If the scene change is not stated, readers will not understand it. A final reminder: "Russing, rustling" appears three times in the first chapter, and also in the second chapter. Even if the author likes it, you can't use it back and forth, you can change the word. I saw someone in the book review warned that "Silver Bone Charcoal" appears too much, and the same goes for "Russing Rusty". Generally speaking, the author's ideas and writing skills are good among new authors. The future is promising, so keep up the good work.

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Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง is very literary and has a strong ancient style, and the aroma of books comes to your face. I feel like he will probably be a very powerful writer. The title looks very similar to Red Mansion, Zhang Hui Ti, 👍Come on