The Roman Theory Emperor’s Crooked Path to the Top

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This day was a rare leisure weekend. Lin Ling started playing gongs and drums early in the morning with great interest. "You'd better give a suitable reason." An Yan said with her hands on her hips fiercely. "Yanyan, you haven't had sex with Yunliu for a long time!" Lin Ling said flatteringly. Looking at Lin Ling's fully armed appearance, Yunliu immediately struck and said: "We can cultivate relationships here, there is no need to go out specially." "This feeling is so different, I don't care, the four of us will go play together today!" Lin Ling said roguely. "Did you grab some group buying coupons?" Xiao Yi looked like he had seen through everything. "No!" Lin Ling said proudly that she was not so easily seen through. But then she added, "A new self-service restaurant has opened nearby. Let's exercise first, and then go there to kill everyone." Lin Ling looked like he was going to make the boss poor. "Oh, come on, you three." As he said that, Yunliu wanted to go back to his room. Originally it was nothing to eat at a buffet, but the exercise Lin Ling mentioned made him quite concerned. He always felt that it would be very frustrating. "Yunliu, I found a very good candied haws shop a few days ago, and there are many kinds." Lin Ling squinted her eyes and smiled evilly. "Silly girl, do you think you can get rid of me with a few bunches of candied haws on a stick?" Yunliu raised his eyebrows. "That shop also makes candy figures. The kind that spin in circles and draw prizes." Lin Ling said happily. "Who doesn't know this thing, but sometimes it's good to appreciate ordinary people doing some quality things." Yunliu said, looking like he was getting ready to go. Seeing this, what else do An Yan and Xiao Yi have to say? Of course I will sacrifice my life to accompany the gentleman. And it turns out that women are really talented in talking nonsense. Lin Ling said to exercise well and spend half a day just shopping. Fortunately, the work of carrying things is naturally done by Xiao Yi, and Yunliu is only responsible for concentrating on tasting his beloved candied haws. Originally, Xiao Yi naturally had no objection to the matter of taking things, but the question was, what did the huge single dog food in his hand mean? Looking at the joking glances coming from all directions, Xiao Yi's face turned expressionless. No matter what others say, he doesn't admit it. An Yan and Lin Ling, who were walking at the front, held hands affectionately, not knowing what they wanted to buy. The store changed from store to store, and the milk tea in their hands changed from cup to cup, but except for the extra large bag of single dog food, they didn't buy anything else. "Don't you want to buy something?" Finally, Xiao Yi couldn't help but ask. To be continued~~

I read the first dozens of chapters, and there were a lot of criticisms. I also read other people's book reviews. To be honest, I couldn't help it anymore, so I came out to post a complaint. This book has fully implemented the nonsensical style from the beginning. Everything happens suddenly and inexplicably. The writing is filled with a lot of useless psychological activities, which breaks the already incoherent plot into a mess. The author has a great imagination and a lot of ideas, but it may be that he lacks writing power, which makes the writing very fragmentary. I was a little tired reading every thought he came up with. In addition, there seems to be no embellishment in the dialogues between the characters, they are very straightforward and direct, which makes me look very pale and feel that each character is a little lacking in IQ. . . When I read it carefully, it really made me sleepy (I actually fell asleep while watching it intermittently). It was full of flaws. Now I am posting a complaint but I don't know where to start and where to end. However, I have written a lot and I won't go on. I can only say that I hope the author can improve his writing skills, at least to the average level of Liangcao. Com, so that he can show his ideas to our readers clearly and interestingly. That's all.

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Others have talked about a lot of advantages, so I won't follow the crowd and talk about some of the shortcomings I feel! First, the main line is not very clear and is a bit trivial. The first few dozen chapters have the most serious problems. After reading it, I felt a bit messy. The later chapters are slightly better and there is progress! Second, what can I say about the character description? The description is not profound, and there are not many supporting characters with online IQ. It is not very successful, and the emotional line is not very well created. Maybe the author is not very good at it. Third, there are too many descriptions of psychological activities, the language is relatively straightforward, and the article has poor coherence. It fails to capture the reader's psychology. It's a bit embarrassing to grasp it better! Generally speaking, the author's writing skills need to be strengthened. The story is a good story and the ideas are very novel, but it is a bit difficult to control. I hope the author can hone his writing skills and write better and better!

Lin Lin was defrauded of a huge amount of money, but on his way home, it was suddenly detected that his high-energy mental body had reached the standard and was bound to a strange thing. I thought that since I had passed through the book, I was going to have a scene where a domineering president fell in love with me, but I was told that when I absorbed the power of space, my body was damaged and I turned into a piao inexplicably. Good guy, the author's imagination is not yours. It's so strange, but so strange that you can't imagine, hahahaha... In order to survive, we, Lin Lin, relied on our own little tricks to successfully recognize a very lucky cousin. We thought that we would reach the top of life from then on Isn't it a dream? Do you believe it? I don't believe it... Lin Lin: "Don't believe it? I'll make you believe it by pressing my head!"

After reading this book, it is simply one of the best nonsensical books in Dian Niang. Watching Lin Ling change her music inexplicably every day. See if she comes up with new ideas every day, and she has some new ideas in her mind that she wants to put into practice. The author's creativity and unconstrained ideas brought me great surprise. The only drawback is that there are too many settings in the early stage, and I was a little confused for a while. I wish the author better and better as he writes.

The character I like is different, and that's "Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow If anyone knows this person's name, please raise your hand! 😜 At first I thought it was a crybaby, but the more I read it, the more I liked it. It likes to cling to the protagonist in all kinds of cute ways, and is an indispensable supporting character in this book. Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu... I'm not crying, I just like you! 😍

I came across this book on the recommendation of a friend. This is the first fast-traveling book I have read. I am new to it, so I am still a little used to it. I started reading it a few days ago. When I first saw the beginning, I had a different feeling. It felt like the process was a bit slow, and maybe the author was worried that the readers would not understand it well, so the writing was relatively detailed. However, maybe the control ability in the early stage was not too strong, and it also gave people a fragmented feeling. I haven't read the rest of it yet, but at first glance I thought the writing style was brisk and joyful. I have collected it and can follow it slowly. I hope the author can write better and better!