My Husband Is a Sickly Man

The new book has been released, Yun Qi first published "The Beloved of Heaven Takes the Adoption Manual of the Yandere Disciple"

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I peered through the flowers blooming in my palm as you walked by. It turned out that the dazzling thing was only the sunshine, never you

I'm going to pierce your ears ~ Be prepared ~ Hehe, just kidding ~ This is a serious book review by a senior reader! (Emphasis added) Dada has profound literary skills, beautiful writing style, excellent writing style, and the atmosphere is also created very well. The description is absolutely nothing to say, praise it👍 The female protagonist Xie Yunyao is very strong, and she is vividly portrayed as the ghost king of the underworld who cannot have emotions, while the male protagonist Shen Zhen is a sick man. The general is also super innocent 😂 (the kind who blushes even when touched) When these two people are put together... It's hard to create sparks 😂 So except for the occasional warm interactions, the emotional line seems to be far away, which is suitable for savoring ~ In addition, the main plot... Hey, what is the main plot? The overall feeling is probably like this, hahahahaha, this story has countless branch lines interspersed, it looks more like a Chinese fantasy novel, and it is also a brain-burning suspense version. 😂 I would like to give you some advice. It is okay to intersperse branch lines with the main line, but if there are too many, it will look loose, and too many characters will be confusing. The most important thing is that the personalities of many characters change a lot, which makes people a little confused. Sometimes it is difficult to understand after watching it only once🤔 In addition... The emotional drama! Ears, you can do whatever you want~ (╯' - ')╯ ┻━┻ However, the suspense is very good and the description of the atmosphere is in place. However, it is difficult to connect two chapters of the suspense story in one day, so think about it. 😏 Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Come on Ears, the main plot will be advanced a little faster, and don't forget the fantasy romance tag~🤓

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👏The pen in the author's hand must be called "Ma Liang"👏 The characters with distinctive personalities immediately became plump, vivid and three-dimensional with just a few strokes of the author's pen. It is written about a ruthless ghost land, but it is full of true feelings. If you read it carefully, you can't help but be moved by it. It can be seen that the author's writing skills are sophisticated and his techniques are delicate. The author must be a talented woman who can stand out among many outstanding authors and write such a masterpiece 🌹 The plot of this book is compact, ups and downs, and there is no lack of humanistic care in the bloody fight; in the conspiracy calculation, readers can inadvertently feel the warmth permeating it. ❤️  👍This is a rare masterpiece with high-end layout, grand scenes and majestic momentum.                                  👍 This book has the passion, intrigue, sinisterness, perseverance, and deep brotherhood of the male channel, as well as the tenderness, delicacy, tactfulness, and sensationalism of the female channel.       ， 🌹Collected, pinned, subscribed🌹 😆Finally, I would like to ask the author: Can you add a few more chapters? ? ? 😡

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A very novel theme, starting from the heroine's point of view to promote the plot, you can see that the setting structure is cumbersome, but there are flaws in it. I want to see more intense interactions between the male and female protagonists, and hope to stick to the route to complete the story.