I'm Not Interested in Devil Fruits

There are 9 points before the Island of Nine Snakes, 6 points after leaving the Island of Nine Snakes, the protagonist is imprisoned in prison for ten years, and there are 2 points in the later period when he plays house with the protagonist's group. The evaluation is that it is 💩 covered with cream. When you eat 💩, it is disgusting no matter how sweet the front is.

This book gave me a good feeling at the beginning. The two people who met in the garbage dump seemed to have been abandoned by the world, but they saw each other at a glance, and they helped each other through the danger in a tacit understanding. After that, the protagonist and Robin supported each other and took risks together. Living together, especially after having the Castle Fruit ability user Xiaolu, the phone bug, traveling with my home coincides with the life I want. To be honest, how happy and lucky it is to have someone who grew up together and understands each other, and who can do your favorite things together! While the protagonist is practicing hard, he is also working hard to lead Robin's life carefully, taking her to do whatever she wants to do, to eat the food she wants, to search for historical texts, and to experience the wonderful things she has never had before. She does not have to worry about daily necessities, let alone mortgage and car loans. Moreover, Robin takes care of the two people's lives in an orderly manner. This is really a day that many people dream of, including me. In ordinary daily life, the two of them fight and fight, and there is a touch of warmth in their lives. The two people who support each other and grow up together are more like family members than lovers. In fact, I am not surprised at all that such two people come together after they grow up. In other words, I am even a little jealous and envious, but I am still very happy and bless them. Although this article is very thoughtfully written, including the serialization at the beginning of each chapter, which is even more original, it still has many shortcomings. The first point is the character of the protagonist. As a person who has lived two lives, the protagonist should be more mature mentally and know his own special abilities. In the eyes of interested people, he is as attractive as a dazzling beacon, but he still shows off everywhere, like a fool. We can use his ability and he will be found out to fill the hole; the second point is to tease the world government and navy and put people in danger just for a fun reason. How selfish is this? To be honest, the One Piece World anime has not been serialized yet. As a person who has traveled to the Pirate World and doesn't know the ending, shouldn't you keep a low profile? I was not surprised at all that the protagonist was later captured by Im, because any ruler can't help but be curious about this unstable factor; the third point is that maybe the author wanted to connect with the original plot, so the plot has many unnecessary returns to the original work in my opinion. It seems that this article has a sense of suffocation that no matter how much you do, it will not change the reality, and it is getting stronger and stronger.

The early writing is very good and quite innovative. Although it follows the plot, the fun points are more concentrated. I think the top part of the novel is the best part. The later part of the novel is not well written with the boat flow. There are too many protagonists and they are not prioritized.

I've given you the monthly pass, do you dare to increase your concentration?

Momonosuke has good reviews, so I came here to vote monthly.

It turns out that it's almost 2 million words. It seems that after Pig's Foot comes out, it's not too far away from the end.

It's already considered a high-quality piece among Pirates fandoms, and it updates quickly. I recommend it.

Just for the Gravitation series, I gave away a monthly pass! It's full of One Piece manga flavor ✊, and it also has such a solid character design! It feels the same as reading a comic, and it won't make people skip the plot. The key lies in the characterization of the heroine. When I read it, I saw that this book is not about brother coming and going. It is really comfortable to read 😭 The development of the protagonist's abilities is also full of highlights. He is not a brainless dragon Aotian, but it is more difficult for the author's imagination. The author is very optimistic about it (ง •̀_•́)ง

I think the gas fruit is okay. After all, judging from the original performance, it can control oxygen

The protagonist is given the fruit of face, and he has more face wherever he goes.

Literary youth are like this. They only care about what they like. If they don't do well and get criticized, it's the readers' fault, the market's fault, and the world's fault. This author is an old literary youth, so he deserves to be criticized.

Robin-chan, it must be mine! (Gentle) (broken sound)!

Why I gave up the book in the first place? The reason is that after the protagonist beat the aunt, he was caught in the deep sea prison. He lasted for dozens of chapters and basically did not show up. In addition, the author updated it at that time. In real time, there was more than a month of plot development without the participation of the protagonist. And what happened in these dozens of chapters was basically what appeared in the anime. The plot did not make any major changes Let's talk about following the boat. In fact, I am not opposed to following the boat. What I object to is that the first few hundred chapters are obviously Lynch's adventure stories, but in order to return to the anime plot, the author made the protagonist be beaten half to death, spent ten years in jail, and disappeared for dozens of chapters. This made me feel like he was just forcibly following the ship. The protagonist can single-handedly challenge the Straw Hats and the entire pirate group without even taking a breath. This is not counting the double. Even if the double is included, he can single-handedly challenge the Yonko Group. What do you think you are doing with the ship?

It really feels like eating shit. I will never read this Sun Tzu book again.

It was okay in the early stage, but I stopped watching it after following the ship in the later stage. I felt that there was no need to follow, and the bond was very stiff.

I was so miserable. I waited until midnight every day to wait for updates. I gave all 5 recommendation votes to , invested in new books, and went crazy with my friends. But this unscrupulous author just doesn't update it. One picture a day is enough for anyone to read. My life is miserable! ! ! ! ! ! !

Σ(ﾟдﾟ;)No sir

Literary youth is a disease. Because of the lack of sufficient writing power, it promotes the development of the plot through so-called sensibility and abandons the rational logic of the characters. Maybe when I wrote it, the author was still complacent and moved.

First of all, this book is very well written, and the author has definitely worked hard. Animation and novels are two different ways of telling stories. The author can perfectly write the feeling of the original animation in the form of a novel, and also have his own uncompromising plot, patched settings, and eye-catching in-depth exploration of the original plot background and rigorous and interesting analysis and predictions, such as Lily's story and the ending of Vitality Fruit. The conflict between Ranger Lily and step sister Xianglian is simple and very One Piece. It is just a misunderstanding caused by the lack of a bridge for communication between the two parties. There is also the excitement of the protagonist after returning home and the extra protagonist realizing the popularity of Ranger. They all have the sense of accomplishment that dreams come true after returning home from the final battle in anime. It can be regarded as a good thing in general anime. The beautification of End and the Vitality Fruit at the end are even more reasonable and well-founded. They bring out Luffy's greatest strengths and pay homage to the crowd fighting the boss (The Wave of the Times and the Vitality Fruit and there are many more are the things that stood out to me). In terms of plot, especially the wealthy country of Real Money Island and Alabasta, it feels even more familiar. Secondly, but (but everyone understands both words!) As we all know, Titan only has three seasons, and this book only has 652 chapters (serious face. Jpg, the original plot of the protagonist who has been silent for ten years is okay), the latter may be to adapt to the setting of the vitality fruit in the ending, or to take into account the prophecy that Roger and the others know about the plot. When Luffy goes to sea, Luffy must have Nico Robin to fight against Stone in order to become the Pirate King. The ability to interpret the monument, and the relationship between the protagonist and Robin Hood, can be said to be the two people who follow the boat at once. Robin Hood's following the boat can be said to be very unreasonable. The reason at the beginning was to see Tulip's son, but he followed the boat after seeing an invitation. Not to mention that he had been wandering for eight years and had to wait until the plot began to think of seeing Tulip's son. He only said that he was bored and wanted to follow the boat and take care of his friend's son. Reasons like that, but these are not reasons to follow the ship. They can only be said to be accompanying or taking care of them in secret. But at this time, Robin should understand that when the protagonist goes offline, the JoJo Pirates, which originally had only two people, can be said to be the only one left with Robin Hood. If Robin Hood joins the Straw Hat, the JoJo Pirates can be said to be gone (especially when Robin is emphasized again and again. It feels more like ntr,). The protagonist because It may be possible to join the Straw Hat Pirates for these reasons. After all, the Jojo Pirates are just a game, but Robin's situation is different. The author of her state has always emphasized that it is survivor guilt. If it is the kind of Baroque Studio who joined the Baroque Studio who have been evading capture in the original anime, maybe Crocodile has fallen, and it is okay for Robin to join the Straw Hats, but in the Jojo Pirates, does Robin have no feelings? Or is it the persistence of the JoJo Pirates under emotions such as guilt? I've seen some people argue that the author originally planned to join the ship, and there are only two people in the Jojo Pirates, but isn't a pirate team with two people a pirate team? How many of the shipmates from the original anime left the pirate group they had feelings for to join the Straw Hat Pirates? Then, there are the protagonist and the boat. If Robin insists on following the ship, the protagonist will definitely follow, but the reason is a bit ridiculous. Just like Rayleigh in the original anime was only training Luffy, their strength, level and the opponents they face are different at this time. The protagonist has a bounty of 5 billion to follow a pirate group with only 2 to 3 billion. Just like there is an ordinary member of the Straw Hat Pirates, it is not impossible, but it is not good for others and himself. Do we have to leave someone to take care of this ordinary person every time we conflict with other pirate groups? Or do ordinary people like to take all kinds of huge risks and follow a group of big guys? (It turned out to be the case later. With the protagonist as a nanny, Straw Hat's adventure became a trip.) And it is even more ridiculous to convince oneself that companions with the same ambitions do not have the level of command. It is very respectable to strive for the same ambitions, but not having a priority is a lie. Otherwise, do you have to do your own thing, or do you always wrong yourself for the sake of your companions? It is good to discuss and discuss problems, but there must always be a definite conclusion when there is a dispute, and as expected, the protagonist plays a major role in shipping goods in the pirate group. Not everything is unanimously supported, and there is also the most acute issue of who will be the captain after joining. The reason given by the author is that the members of the Straw Hat Pirates support Luffy, but Hancock and others who support their teammates ignore it? Just as this second chapter begins, this book is finished when the plot of the Kingdom of Flowers is over! Putting aside the shortcomings of getting on the ship, the plot and patches written by the author are very good! And it is completely unnecessary to write the part of getting on the ship, and it will not have any impact on the plot.

After reading a little bit, I went to the back and took a look. The protagonist has been arrested for 10 years. After Robin ran away to follow the boat, the protagonist disappeared for 50 chapters. It was too self-satisfied. It was too painful for the brothers who followed the update back then, and they lost the motivation to continue reading.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, let me tell you my feelings. First, I was about to die, threatened, and hunted. There was no tense atmosphere at all, and the pig's feet seemed to be on an outing. Second, if you don't think about how to save your life or how to become stronger, you are just taking your girl on an outing to cultivate a relationship.

I just want to say that you can stop reading this book after seeing the Island of Nine Snakes. You can say how much I loved this book in the beginning. After two hundred chapters, I slowly started to hate this book. The author wrote it very, very well. So good that I am even willing to regard it as a real world that actually exists. I loved the time I spent with Robin in the beginning. I hate what the author wrote in the back. After writing like this, I really felt the pain of being betrayed and stabbed in the back by the author. I didn't even have time to read what other book friends in the book circle said about the protagonist being caught offline for ten years and Robin running away to follow the boat. I was already feeling so uncomfortable. It is true that there is hell before it stops. I advise you not to read the letter when you see Nine Snakes. Writing this is very hypocritical and I know it myself. But I really feel suffocated if I don't say something. I'm sorry.

After seeing the death of Whitebeard, I thought I would take it easy for a while. I thought about it today and came to the comment section to read it. Oh my god, there was a lot of scolding I read a few comments and they were all criticizing the follower And the assistant also said before that the author decided to follow the boat from the beginning of the outline How can I put it that follow the boat has a small audience, but has the author ever thought about how many of the readers who stayed to read after screening the original plot of more than 600 chapters like follow the boat? To give an inappropriate example, I am writing a romance novel in which the male and female protagonists are together. In the second half, I tell the readers that one man and two men are a couple. What do you think the score of this book will be 😁 But it seems that the author is determined to be with the boat, and he probably doesn't read the comment section, so just take it as my rant.

The last time Lynch was arrested, he didn't come out for many days, and the updates were still slow. At that time, he got emotional and scolded the author in the comment area. The comment was later deleted, but he still followed it and read it. But now I can't stand these chapters anymore. This book will end when Lynch is captured. This is not a question of whether to follow the ship or not. People who love One Piece know what the situation is like on the Luffy spaceship and what dreams Luffy and the others have. It is obvious that Lynch is incompatible with them. The current plot gives me the idea that this is following the ship for the sake of following the ship. Delete the book and never see him again.

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It can only be said that from the ending point of view, removing the part about the boat will not affect the development of the ending. Then it can only be said that that part is purely the author's bad taste, and he had to bite the bullet and write it against the market. But simply speaking, the ending of Ravrud really feels like One Piece. Of course, the structure of the whole book is also very pirate-like. The front part is extremely beautiful, full and has a dreamy atmosphere. As soon as she reached the top and started to pull her hips, especially from the beginning of the aunt, Wano couldn't stand it anymore, but the ending was okay. Like, so similar. The ups and downs of this book are not exactly the same as the ups and downs of the comics. They are almost the same. I can only say that I respect them so much. But overall, the ending of this book still brings back a lot of points. Before prison, it should have been around 9 to 9.7. It's like reading a fanfic written by Oda himself. The beginning of prison and Wano Country directly turned this book into a book that hovers between 5.5 And 6. This aspect is too Oda-like. Even if you say this is not a personal piece written by Oda himself, I won't believe it. Adding it directly with private goods will break the atmosphere created by all the previous stories. At the end, I stopped adding things and brushed horizontally and it returned to normal, bringing the total score back to 7 to 8. In general, the explanations and conjectures about the ending are very piratey. This can be considered a self-justification, although the final battle can be said to be dispensable and without any atmosphere. But the whole Pirates was almost nailed down like this in the end, and it's not a big flaw. It's just a sigh that it would be better if it could be better. After reading the whole book, except for some fragments in the middle and late stages, the overall quality is quite high among pirate novels. It's great to be able to write such a pirate-flavored book when 90% of pirate novels can't even reach the passing mark. Of course, I have to admit that it is really rare for me to use 4 or 50 chapters, which is less than 10/1 of the overall weight, to drop a book that was originally rated as a 9.5 Directly down to the passing line. Other than that, this year is a giant. Of course, the Giants are even better. It is really magical to turn a stable 9-point score into a stable 2 or 3-point score. Overall, this book is still very interesting. However, once you accept the previous dream of freedom, it is best to just jump to the end after the protagonist finishes playing the top and watch the ending. The one in the middle is the extra one that follows the boat flow. It is completely different from the previous adventure flow in the direction written by One Piece. Something that makes me angrier the more I look at it. Of course, it doesn't matter if you jump to watch it and kill it as a memory, but if you follow it and see it, don't be angry with me. When I didn't say it. That's it. Looking forward to the postscript and the next book. But I won't pursue it as much as I did next time. I was really scared. Who knows if there will be some private goods that don't fit the tone of the story. Once you are disgusted, you won't think about it again.

Thoughts on Fruit Awakening After watching a video of a dreamer talking about One Piece, it makes sense and I will quote it here. The fruits of the three series all have three small branches, but now the two examples are of the Superman series, so the other two series will be skipped first. The three sub-branches of the Superman system are the body-changing type (Luffy), the substance-releasing type (Ming Ge, Robin), and the environment-changing type (Luo). From the examples of Ka Er and Ming Ge, we can see that fruit awakening is to gain the ability of one or both of the other two small branches in addition to one's own small branch. First of all, let me explain that I was originally a material release type. After awakening, I can turn other things into threads (changing the environment) and myself into threads to achieve a natural-like effect under conscious control (body changing type). The Kaji Glutinous Rice Fruit should be like Luffy in the beginning and can only transform himself into glutinous rice (body-changing type). Later, after awakening (actually, I think this can be cultivated and developed, it is not that the fruit itself is a so-called special superhuman fruit), it can acquire the ability of material releasing type. It can release glutinous rice outside itself (material releasing type), and turn the surroundings into glutinous rice (environment changing type). If Robin wants to develop a fruit to awaken himself, I think it can be like this. First of all, Robin is a substance releasing type. What if he gets the ability to change the body? Maybe there are already shadows. Countless hands turn into wings and there are no gaps between them. At least in the animation, all the hands become one. Or the environment-changing type, which can turn into a body made of other materials, or even be reborn with blood or water. Or maybe it doesn't have to be restricted to only releasing the body. Maybe the flower can be transformed into other objects, like a creation out of thin air. {"NickName":"Bazinga","UserId":139012269}

The adventure story of the protagonist and Robin in the early part of this book is very warm and nice, but later on it turns out to be a drifting story. It's like a mouse dropping in a pot of good soup! ! ! So disgusting! But this book is still worth reading. I have read many Pirates fanfics from Qidian. This is the only one I often come back to.

I can only say that as beautiful as it looks in front, it will be disappointing in the back.

This book is okay, but Im appeared a little early in the later stage, and his combat power collapsed. He fast-forwarded directly from fighting the four emperors and being in embarrassment to maybe the protagonist beating three generals and the marshal was not at full strength. The original characters were restored well, and many of the second settings were also okay, but the problem was that his combat power collapsed in the later stage.