Dragon Ball Romance

The great thing about this book is that, through a long-term layout, the author allows the protagonist to take a reasonable path in the Dragon Ball world that is completely different from other fans who wish for Saiyan blood from the beginning, but it can be justified. Especially the plot setting of forty thousand years is really great! But the protagonist in the early stage was really miserable. . . The author himself made complaints later when he looked back on his growth process. . . It may be quite depressing in the early stage, and finding Baozi Mountain is really difficult. Summary: Keep reading, the book is great! Also, please update soon.

Haha, it's been almost two years and this book hasn't become popular. As the original introduction said, perhaps only those who have truly yearned, feared, escaped, and been brave can empathize with Wang Chao. The span of two years can be said to be long or short. I am not a follower of updates. I like to start over again over and over again. The unknown journey, the unattainable dream, the longing for the person. While these things shed a little starlight of hope, they also lift up layers of dangerous cliff peaks and cut down stretches of endless ocean, which are daunting and prohibitive. I like this book very much. Wang Chao's confusion in Nandu is also the confusion I once had, the kind of hesitation when looking up to his dreams. Wang Chao's fear after leaving Hexianren Tao Baibai is also the fear I have experienced again and again, the kind of difficulty in moving after being knocked down by setbacks. Wang Chao's courage to walk to Baozi Mountain for the second time in Nandu is also my courage, that kind of youthful mentality that is unwilling to stop. Wang Chao's contradiction as Sun Wukong continues to advance is also my contradiction, the mixed feelings that are difficult to extricate. The scenery after Wang Chao entered the Bagua Furnace and reached the realm of God is something I have never experienced before. What is it like? Is it the warmth of winter and spring, or the cheerfulness of summer and autumn? This book always gives me the motivation to persevere again and again. I hope that one day, I can also see the world in my dreams. Finally, come on, foodies!

I have read a lot of Dragon Ball fan fiction, and the two books written by the author are very good. As for books, some people like them and some don't. Personally, I think the author is better at not swallowing the setting and trying his best to describe the rules of the world in the book, giving people a relatively strong sense of immersion and integration. While depicting the world, we use the rules of the world to find ways to make the protagonist stronger within the rules step by step. But there are also problems with this. The book sometimes thinks too much about rules and the world. Compared with Master Wutian, the protagonist of this Dragon Ball Romance thinks a little too much about settings, etc., Which makes people feel a little bored. Of course, it may be because the protagonist in Wutian Grandmaster generally has a smooth journey, so he may be able to break through more easily, while Wang Chao is an ordinary earthling, so it is more difficult, and his mental journey will be many and complicated. Also, in the middle period, Wang Chao came into contact with top-notch beings such as Dragon God and Arale. I once thought that the work would collapse, at least in those chapters, which made people feel like they needed to level up to make a wish with Dragon Ball. However, there are very few descriptions of the top power (Dragon God) later on, and the main plot involves the comparison between cultivation and using the dragon to block bugs. The previous discomfort has disappeared, and the previous chapters that were originally thought to be bad are even more profound. The character setting of the second character is stable, and the character's personality will not change drastically for no reason. Even if it does change, it must be promoted by the plot content. The third thing is that basically all the foreshadowing has been filled in. Some of the foreshadowings span a long time, but when you look back later, it doesn't feel inconsistent. From this point of view, the important plot author should have been conceived very early, and first conceived the entire plot framework. Next, design the corresponding story at each step. The story of each step depends on the main line of the design, rather than the main line of the design of the story of each step. So if you read the whole article, it is still okay, smooth and has a certain sense of hierarchy. The fourth point is that the connection between the characters is quite good, even Luo Cha and Elizabeth at the beginning still appear later. It's still very warm, but I personally feel that it's a little lacking in daily life. It's really brilliant to be able to improve the character's combat power step by step and advance the plot well. However, in addition to the continuous improvement of combat effectiveness, it may feel better if it is proportionally interspersed with daily life and things other than combat. I am just a novice reader. As far as I am concerned, it is already a very good book. I am willing to read it in one sitting. The plot in the middle will not make me give up the idea of ​​continuing to read. Most of the books I read are anticlimactic. In order to attract the audience, you have to have a good start, but these two Dragon Ball fanfics become even more exciting as they go on. The shortcoming is that the combat is a bit monotonous, but it is understandable: in the world of Dragon Ball, fists are supreme. Put aside the evaluation of the entire book, and finally add some personal feelings. I still think the author is unfair to An Ning. The character An Ning is much worse than Wu Fangfang and No. 18 In The Master of Wu Tian. Wu Fangfang, as Hathaway said, on the one hand, Wu Tian hurt Wu Fangfang's heart, but Wu Fangfang actually hurt Wu Tian very seriously. She didn't understand Wu Tian at all, and she didn't know how to love Wu Tian. But what about tranquility? She was chosen by Shirley because of her kindness and perseverance. She was kind, and 40,000 years later, she still missed her master. Fortunately, the World Tree fell down in the end, and angels should have a new life and a new order in the new world. She is perseverant and has gone through so many reincarnations but still moves forward bravely. However, she can only accept the reality that she continues to fail and her companions die one by one. When she was about to despair, she met Wang Chao, who brought her hope and saved her. Together they experienced hardships and solved the crisis of the earth. While I was reading the book, I unconsciously fell in love with such tranquility and felt that it was very beautiful. If this develops, as the first gods of the earth, all they have is a deep friendship. In fact, I can accept it, and there is nothing abnormal about it. But later it turned into love... And it was portrayed many times, and I couldn't stand it. After Wang Chao traveled to the earth, An Ning must have been watching him. She saw Wang Chao and Taisi meet and fall in love, and she even got jealous and went to the No. 1 Martial Arts Association in the world to possess Lan Fang. He is jealous of Taisi, but due to his feelings for Wang Chao and his own personality, he doesn't know how to treat Taisi. To me, it's a bit sadistic for the sake of sadistic writing. An Ning can be Wang Chao's partner, a friend, or drift away, even if she hates time and is reincarnated. Only this kind of waiting for 40,000 years is quite hurtful. Wang Chao has been waiting for Taisi for 40,000 years, and An Ning may have been waiting for Wang Chao for 40,000 years. Fortunately, the final ending is an open ending, but it cannot be said that the arrangement for An Ning is very good. So if possible, I hope the author will put An Ning in the character column.

To be honest, I was quite moved after watching it. It was good-looking. What I liked was the plot where the protagonist was chased by the Red Ribbon Legion. I felt a little unhappy later on. Even the Super Saiyans came out, but the protagonist still had hundreds of fighting capabilities.

It's really great, but it's a pity that most people now read online articles not to see the growth of a "person". The book really presents a real Dragon Ball world that belongs to people on earth.

I feel that the author has a very deep understanding of Dragon Ball, but the plot is too delayed, and there is no sense of immersion in reading Dragon Ball. It takes so long to find a Sun Wufan, which should make many book friends give up. . . The author wants to write about a world,,, but what we want to see is a person

I wait and wait🥺🥺🥺

The beginning is too slow, I basically don't have the patience to watch it, it just makes me bored.

It's okay. In fact, the author doesn't need to write Dragon Ball fan fiction all the time.

Regarding the inability to perceive the realm of God through Qi perception According to the author's description, everyone is actually there from the beginning, but some people are standing at a higher altitude, and some are in the basin; The improvement of Qi means that one's height is increased, but one cannot fly upward steadily and stop in mid-air. Although one can jump very high, one will eventually fall back to the original point. This kind of jump It is to explode and explode; So people have to go to high places. The common method is to build a building, one level at a time, but the height is limited after all, and since the height of the building can be known, the energy can also be known; some powerful people, such as Saiyans, choose to install trampolines on high-rise buildings after they can no longer simply increase the height, that is, Super Saiyans; while Super Saiyan Gods use five people to build human ladders on high-rise floors, so that they can reach higher levels. The high altitude stays longer and is more stable. After the body gets used to the new height, it will naturally be able to go up on its own Zi Zijiyi can fly to high altitudes on its own without relying on high buildings. How high it can fly depends on its mastery of flying; Wang Chao uses the underworld energy to build high buildings to force himself to high places, so that he can form a habit of flying to high places (he is on the 200th floor every day, even if he flies to the 200th floor from 0 You won't mess up your hands and feet) However, ordinary Qi perception has the number of floors of the building as a reference, and the combat power is the number of floors. However, for the realm of God, which has no reference object and is stagnant at a high place by itself, it is natural not to know where it is. It looks like it is only a little bit above the ground, maybe 100,000 meters in the air, so the Qi perception fails because it is not in the same coordinate system at all

This book is really poisonous to me. The author's description of the protagonist is too trashy. If you just drag anyone into the Dragon Ball world, it will not be like this. No one can resist the temptation of extraordinary power. Even if you know that you are an earthling, you will not have the character of the protagonist. People who are familiar with the plot will know how to use Dragon Ball to strengthen themselves. The premise is that you must have a certain degree of strength. The main way to increase strength in the Dragon Ball world is to exercise.

This book is definitely a eunuch. One is that the author will forget as he writes, and the other is that he will feel pressure in his heart, fearing that he may not be able to write well despite being very careful. Then the longer and longer I procrastinate, the less confident I become, and then I keep lowering my bottom line and telling myself that I can definitely do it. Even if I update it once a month, I am more attentive than others! I write out the character's unique transformation process! Not really. There are also those written by others, and the updates are very stable. Therefore, I think the author either has perfectionistic procrastination or has other books open. But no matter what, the end result is that it ends badly. Those who double-open will not end well, and those who delay will be even more so. I read it when there was no charge, and now I found it again when I searched for books. When I saw the catalog update time, I felt a few words.

Sign in and wait for a reply from the author~

This introduction is a bit discouraging. I am thinking about whether to practice martial arts while traveling through the Dragon Ball world. I am afraid it will affect Sun Wukong. I am afraid that I am out of my mind.

How should I put it? After the first three chapters, it was a bit too watery, the protagonist was a bit too clever, and the author wanted to sell the bag too much. In fact, these are not big problems, but no matter how you play with the plot, you can't lose the main line! Dragon Ball is not like Pleasant Goat, a chapter-like daily script with each episode basically irrelevant. Only by detailing the training and adventure can the main line be highlighted. Expanding on unnecessary places will make people tired and distracted, which is over-feeding. In addition, the training curve of the original work is extremely uneven, so the more you follow the rhythm of the original work and pursue realism, the harder it will be for the protagonist to improve his strength, and the more he will need to be deceived by deus ex machina. Originally, the cheating was written and it was a big online article. The emotions of how miserable it was when fighting the first mini-boss were all laid out, and the cheating was just about to break out in the small universe. As a result, a passing Bulma intercepted the Hu people and showed himself to the saint. This was a bit forceful and deliberately suppressed the protagonist. It was a good thing The fun is gone, and the protagonist will always be reduced to a joke. Although the writing is interesting, no matter how high his cultivation level is, the protagonist's strong character will never be established. This is fatal in a book about training to become stronger. How many people have been persuaded to quit this time. When fighting the first mini-boss, the core character of the protagonist must be established, and he must stand in the C position. Other supporting characters who steal the limelight must be eliminated. If the character is not strong enough, then continue. The reader must be allowed to do whatever they want, and the character must be established at once to successfully complete the protagonist's early character sketch. A book without a main line is a big problem, but the lack of interesting points is the most fatal. No matter how good the plot is, it will not help.

I wrote so much nonsense and didn't even open the main plot. I'll give you a cool song.

Personally, I think this is the best Dragon Ball fanfic I have ever read. You can say that the author is forcing an explanation for everything that is unreasonable in the original work, but this explanation is reasonable and consistent. It is not like other novels where you get a Saiyan body, make a wish with a dragon, and then become invincible. I used to read the martial arts in "Heroes", including body, energy, technique and momentum. In my opinion, the Saiyans in Dragon Ball are born with strong bodies and strong energy. The reason why Vegeta and Broly are not as good as Sun Wukong is that they have the body that Sun has, but Sun has the heart that they do not have. Vegeta grew up as a Saiyan, and the way for him to become stronger is to train to death as long as he can't train to death. And Sun is the combination of work and rest of Kamesen-ryu. In the section of the Spiritual Time Room, Sun's training method is to transform into Sun Saiyi and then adapt. Bay's training method is not described, but according to Trunks's description, he is still pursuing a stronger explosion. As an earthling, the protagonist Wang Chao's body is not as good as Sun's, and his energy is even pitiful, but he has a brain. On the road of controlling power with the heart, from the demonic energy at the beginning to the ultimate freedom now, he has blazed a path that is possible for earthlings.

The author did not compromise. With a book as a basis, the author wrote what he wanted to write. Being weak and upward is the most exciting. Just like the most exciting chapter of Eternal Life is the chapter on the secret realm of supernatural powers and the Supreme Being, the most exciting chapter is also the chapter on Jianghu. To be wonderful is not to be exciting, but to be deeply ingrained in the hearts of readers. I have been feeling a bit sentimental recently. I saw the protagonist just escaped after being caught, and I was moved by the words "I must, must go to Baozi Mountain". Although this book is not as good as the previous one, Dragon Ball, it really got into my heart.

Really, the author coincides with my previous thoughts about the collapse of combat power in Dragon Ball Super. I really liked it after watching it and was very moved. The author is careful. Wang Chao really lives up to his name. It's better than Dragon and Snake. Really, I enjoyed watching the martial arts genius in Dragon and Snake. Shenji added a lot of nouns and I thought it was cool, but they couldn't cover up the hollowness of his routines. Even a Dragon Ball fan work couldn't cover up the sparkle of philosophical thoughts in Dragon Ball King. Maybe it's a bit over-hyped, but we can all see the author's struggle and transformation from Wutian Grandmaster to Dragon Ball Romance. Let's encourage you!

It is the most moving, interesting and best-written Dragon Ball fanfic I have ever read. This is my personal opinion and I will not accept any refutation. I feel like I have grown up with Wang Chao. At first, the name of the protagonist was criticized for a long time, but now that I think about it, it is really very appropriate.

Taishang Laojun: Stupid Earth woman, you can only accompany him for a limited life in the world. If you are not the supreme kind, you cannot obtain a physical body even in heaven. But I am different. The rest of his life belongs to me, and you are just a short-lived and cheap flower in his eternal life. Hum! ! (Eat noodles, eat noodles

I think the most awesome thing about the author is that he wrote his own Dragon Ball, with his own unique insights into the characters and worldview, and there is no conflict with the original work, and the protagonist continues to grow. For this book, I just want to say: awesome

Let us warmly welcome the song sung by Lord An Ning: Onion I am like an onion Always a supporting role I wish I could have a exclusive family with you If you are willing to peel off my heart layer by layer You will find that you will be surprised You are my most exciting My deepest love

Oh ~ I updated it without realizing it ~

Come on, author, I have to say that the settings such as increased combat power and race in the Dragon Ball world are really difficult to explain. There is no official setting for the power system, but the author's description is very powerful. Compared with other fan fiction, it is very reasonable for the protagonist of this novel to have achievements that exceed those of Sun Wukong. To be honest, in a story about letting oneself go, even if the protagonist becomes a Saiyan and has the advantage of being a time traveler, he still cannot surpass Son Goku or Vegeta 100% of the time. There is too little description of the spiritual realm. Maybe this is... The writing style?

After reading Chapter 40, there are too many psychological descriptions, accounting for half of the content. Although everyone has a lot of thoughts, you can't write everything down. There is nothing useful, just water. In Chapter 40, the brave man received the first mission and reached the mission destination. I am very curious, with this kind of water method, how come the 500th chapter is over? Is it because the combat power has collapsed, or it has entered the factory.

In memory of Mr. Akira Toriyama in what I think is the best fanfic I have ever read, the teacher has left this world, but I believe he is traveling in another fantasy world.

Recently, Shuhuang took another look at Grandmaster Wu Tian, ​​and when he saw Klin becoming a disciple, he seemed to see the shadow of Wang Chao (compared with those geniuses, ordinary people like us who are full of distracting thoughts are nothing). Then I thought about the scene when Wang Chao yelled somersault clouds into the sky before he died because of the Red Ribbon Army. I was really moved, and suddenly felt tears filling my eyes.

Please add peace to your character list! ! !

Different Dragon Ball fans have different world views of the second set (sweat). The realm of the characters in this book is not divided by combat power, but by the realm of gods, that's about it. Beyond the universe: Wu Laoxian and his disciples and grandsons from the previous book, chickens and dogs ascended to heaven, transcended the Dragon Ball universe, transcended all universe time and space dimensions, and broke the dimensional wall. Parallel Universe: The invincible existence at the top of the Dragon Ball universe can modify and interfere with history at will, create things out of thin air, open up multiverses, be omniscient and omnipotent, transcend the long river of Dragon Ball time, predict the future, and turn back time. He is the only one in all worlds. There are three, the Supreme Three Gods, the All-World Gods, the Dragon World Dragon God Salama, and the World Tree Heaven World God Bartender Multiverse: The multiverse in the Dragon Ball universe is represented by the whole world. The highest authority is currently the King of All Worlds, which can eliminate the universe, but parallel worlds and parallel characters will still be produced. Representing the whole king, the great priest. I don't know if the author will write about the universe seeds of Demon Kaioshin, Time Kaioshin, and Dragon Ball Heroes. If some of them are probably of this class, they can create a single universe. Single Universe: God of Destruction, Kaiojin, Angel Galaxy: Kaio Planet: Taishang Laojun An Ning, Earth God, Bobo Special: King of Hell, S-Cell Super Saiyan God, Fairy Cell Protagonist