Start with Tokyo Earth Explosion Sky Star

The early plot is very interesting, such as the popular supernatural novels, Japan, virgins, powerful protagonists, etc. Then the first female protagonist is introduced, who can see the eyes of Cthulhu in the depths. She is waiting for the protagonist to slowly engage in daily life with the heroine, and then slowly introduces supporting characters. However, the plot suddenly turned into Long Ao Tianwen more than ten years ago like a convulsion. It only took three days to know the heroine. The heroine's house was burned by the Yakuza, the heroine's grandmother died, and the hero lost his wits and ran to the Yakuza headquarters on the spot ( Probably the headquarters) went on a killing spree. A boy was drilling holes with an electric drill, and he directly used the electric drill to nail the boy into a statue of Jesus. There was also a seven-kill poem in the novel, but it didn't fit the scene at all. To put it simply, it was a mysterious plot, and it exploded on the spot. , I can't stand it anymore. The decisiveness in the co-author's introduction is, you hit a passerby (actually it's the heroine I just met for three days), I'm not happy, I'll kill your whole family Long Aotianwen, the early writing style is good, make your own judgment

When you first started your last book, I thought: This is really well written, and maybe it can become a god in one book. Then I read the first one hundred chapters in three days and waited for updates every day. But slowly I realized that something was wrong. Why did I see the situation faster and faster? Were those chapters that attracted me written by someone else? Why is it becoming less and less interesting? But I thought it might be foreshadowing, so I continued reading. It was not until later that the plot became more and more complicated, and more and more holes were dug but there was no sign of filling them. Writing on the left and writing on the right makes my heart feel like feathers. Until I said in my heart what kind of J8 thing is written here? Then jump to watch. In the later stages, I even read several chapters without knowing what I was reading. Many chapters have no impact or advancement on the plot. It doesn't matter whether I watch it or not. I even feel like I'm stupid for spending money to watch this! ! In the end, there was a situation where even a thunderstorm or rain could bring water to a chapter? Do you know what you are doing? Are you worthy of your current readers by writing this kind of thing? If Kavin has no inspiration, you can say that most readers will definitely understand, but you can actually make a chapter watery in a rain! ! ! Didn't you read it several times before sending it out? It is simply consuming your character and popularity! ! ! The words are a bit ugly, but they are the roar of an otherwise loyal reader after being completely disappointed. I won't read your book again until the reviews of your book pick up. If the author realizes his shame and then becomes brave, the chapters he publishes will at least make people feel that you are not dealing with the situation.

First of all, let me state that this is a purely subjective opinion, and I am just complaining about the book. The details of the book are good, the settings are good, and the writing is good. I really don't understand the meaning of copying the twin plots of this wave of "Wonderful Stories of the World". First of all, nearly 10 chapters were wasted, and a key plot point was stuck. When the plot of the first girl and the second girl was unclear, they plagiarized a script that many people knew. Secondly, the main body of this book is a kind of cool novel. Such a vicious and dark story of child abuse itself is in extreme conflict with the overall plot. Come again, do you really look down on 404? Do you really think it's too difficult for someone to report you if they're bored, so you want to make it easier for them? Finally, I have personally seen at least 10 more people copying this script from novels. You, the author, are the best at restoring and modifying details, and you are also the one that makes me the most disgusted. You write such a pure dark story in a semi-invincible novel. The better you write, the more disgusting it will be for readers. . . Directly to death, there is a conflict of themes. To sum up, to be honest, most of those who can read it for the opening scene are either two-dimensional or invincible literature lovers. I have basically read this two-dimensional twin story and don't want to repeat it. I don't want you to plagiarize it again. On the other hand, invincible literature lovers have such a plot that every one of them is disgusting. Is it really the author who uses his superb writing to drive away readers? Or do I just want to write whatever I want if no one reads it? Just let the author be happy. The Twins script was probably worth seeing wandering among the grass jelly before, but then it scored 0 points straight away. Speechless, abandoning the book.

What is the relationship between the author and that person⁄(⁄⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄

I personally like dark texts because they more truly reflect reality and reflection. However, what you wrote before was too slow and too long to get to the expressive part faster. It is also good to speed up the process after listening to readers, but as an author, you must maintain your own mentality and not be easily influenced by readers. You may not be able to find the right style at that time. In short, no matter how you write, some people will like it and some will dislike it. Also, everyone says that you shouldn't write in depth when writing supporting characters, and you should pay more attention and reflection when writing about protagonists. You can watch The Diving Squid who just finished Lord of Mysteries and see how he wrote the supporting characters. For example, if you write too many supporting characters in the upper part, you won't be able to find the priority. . . .

The author's writing style is so weird that I can't even read it

The protagonist has such awesome cheating abilities, but he doesn't have any ultimate pursuit of strength. This makes me uncomfortable. In a world with extraordinary powers, if you remain strong, you will eventually become an ant. If you want to have the qualifications to survive, you must become strong. I don't know what the author thinks. It may be a problem with character creation. The super-inspired female partner is even more uncomfortable. She hides everything, even if she meets a reliable person. Her cowardly character is tolerable, but I can't bear to blindly escape because of cowardice - escape will only lead to destruction in the end, but in the face of it, there may be a glimmer of hope. I didn't read the rest of the book. Being able to read more than 40 chapters already shows that I agree with the setting of this book. The setting is still very interesting. Unfortunately, the character design conflicts with my personal philosophy.

I think this book is very good. Although I almost gave up after reading the first chapter, mainly because of aesthetic fatigue 😎, but the writing from the second chapter onwards was very interesting. It feels like it's a bit more advanced than the previous book, and the gags are well integrated. To be honest, authors of novels do have to be a little stubborn, because old bookworms will leave if they find it good, and those who haven't read a few books will keep beeping at the bottom. If they really follow their way of writing, all novels will become a routine, that is, a running account style that collects everything and Long Aotian fights monsters and upgrades, because as long as it is mainstream enough, you will not make mistakes! There is nothing to complain about except boring! The last book has this sign. I have never understood whether those who say kneeling girls don't have eyes or brains? Or does it mean that you have never had any contact with girls outside your family in real life? Anyway, come on, author. If it wasn't rare to see a new author who could keep reading, and if you didn't want to be ruined by these people, there would be no need to say so many words.

First of all, I apologize for the pirated version of the author's first book. I think the first book was very well written. All the characters were flesh and blood, and it made me see some things in life. Then I came here to find you, so now I officially support you, and I will order all of your new books, so you have to work hard, Daddy! ! ! Kombard! ! ! ۹(･༥･´)و ̑̑

So what, I haven't seen the extras from the previous book yet.

I feel like the funny style overpowers the dark style a little bit

I really like this style. My recent writing is darker and quite attractive*

Thanks to Qidian for recommending me the 29th unfinished eunuch novel

Carrying a knife but not an umbrella on a rainy night?

I just came to read online articles. I don't want to watch Notre Dame, I don't want to watch Les Misérables, I don't want to read these classic Internet articles, and I have no interest in digging deeply into people's hearts and dark sides. I also don't want to think of myself as a psychopath. It was for this reason that I couldn't read your last book until I was halfway through it. Don't expect your new book to go away for the same reason. ps: It turns out I'm not the only one saying this. Everyone feels the same way.

Don't be arrogant. As far as I know, some authors have been updated. Some of them got angry and scolded them when they asked for leave for a single chapter. As a result, the backend automatically updated the saved manuscripts the next day...

Guys, don't wait. There's no explanation for not updating. How many days has it been? Too bad. Delete the book and leave.

The originally cheerful painting style suddenly turned dark, and it was still far-fetched to be dark for the sake of being dark. The feeling that you, the protagonist of the novel, gave me was that if you have some power, you can kill people without blinking an eye. Others pay attention to the principle of repaying injustices with their creditors. You killed an old woman and killed others in the whole society, which is basically the same as the early Long Aotian style. The little girl is even more inexplicable. Domestic violence turns into cannibalism. I don't know how twisted the mind of people who defend themselves after seeing these things is. It is enough to protect the little girl from exposing domestic violence. Yes, it is very troublesome and difficult, but isn't using the law to protect one's own rights and interests a basic way to resolve disputes in modern society? If someone like you has a problem and commits murder or instigates murder, your brain circuit must be very strange.

Remember, this is the second new book, right? The previous one had a different name... Oh, should I concentrate on writing the last one? It's almost finished, should I write it well... You deleted the new book and then came up with a new one...

I asked why it became one update a day. I bet you are preparing this book

Come on😊The author welcomes everyone's water experience!

Just write a book and feel comfortable with it. This kind of brainless and tragic supporting character is just a tool, a passerby, without any depth, and you also create a tragic character, just like various draft contestants, you must tell your touching story! So just feel free to do it. I'm not happy, so give it up! The layout is too small, it would be nice if it doesn't end badly.

The author's name reminds me of carrying a knife without an umbrella on a rainy night

The opening Earth Explosion Sky Star only absorbs earth? Not attractive? Look at the monster's arm, which is tens of meters long. How much material should be filled to make a ball? It is still a relatively densely populated area. I feel like this ball is too small to kill thousands of people... Why is there no explanation at all? (After reading other posts, I have a technological background. There are not many cameras in places with a large flow of people in the city center. The protagonist embraces the sun and launches black balls on the road, and nothing happens afterwards, but it's too bad)

The number of people who died when they saw the Earth Exploding Sky Star was pitifully small, and it was reasonable to expect that it would be at least tens of thousands of people, as a result. It's obvious that this is the product of the author's brainstorming, without an outline or thinking. Shu Huang saw it again, it seems I was right

Are you still recommending eunuch novels? Can you give it to other books? You really don't pull s when you're standing 🙂

Author: Your name reminds me of that person

People who come to the daily detonation point come in and complain when they see the introduction. The size and height of the Earth Explosion Star. . . It really can't destroy much ground, unless you increase the height to a very high level, or the size is enlarged to cover most of Tokyo. . . . Otherwise, we really can't destroy Tokyo.

They all look great, I hope they will be cherished