Reborn in Tokyo, Japan with Naruto

After reading the beginning, it was too depressing and unbearable. The two women around me were unfortunate, and the protagonist herself also had an unfortunate past. Faced with the illegal evil committed by their family, they had the ability to solve their troubles, but they only provided indifferent help. They called it unfamiliar and it was their own private matter. An attitude that tolerates evil deeds, and does not feel unpleasant or disgusting when seeing evil deeds (without losing sanity points), and directly persuades them to quit (although I know that I will save them later, but at the beginning I am so depressed, uncomfortable and angry that I can't wait to express myself as an avenger)

This book is very good, and the author is also very popular He created or perhaps made popular a new genre, and the behind-the-scenes flow was like the god in the novel world at the time, overpowering all other authors who started creating a new writing idea and creating a new era. Brand-new story background The author is really powerful, but it is inevitable that the author will make a lot of mistakes, the pioneer's mistakes I may be the first reader of this book, but I am definitely not the first fan of this book I thought it was an ordinary band at first He came to the city with the power of Naruto, and the text was quite good, so I followed it (I was still trying my best to promote this book) But after he wrote the first flesh-and-blood supporting character, I knew that this book was really not simple, and it would really create an era, and I was responsible for reading it. When I reached the midpoint of the story, I knew that the author collapsed and I gave up the book, but it was undeniable that it was a good book My evaluation: A very good book. This is the evaluation of this book by me, who may be the first reader. See you in the next book

The overall review of this novel is that it is "longer than the content but shorter than the plot." This is not a perfect work, but it is a work worth reading. It is very distinctive. Note that it is a characteristic rather than a highlight, because these characteristics are poisonous points for some people. Characteristics: 1. The author has a very high level of writing, needless to say higher than that of newcomers, and even higher than most novice writers and ordinary street writers. Furthermore, his writing style does not have a heavy personal color, nor does it have the plastic feel of Xiaobai. It is a writing style that is very suitable for Internet articles. (Generally speaking, no one will refuse better writing, generally speaking.) 2. The author has a relatively good understanding of modern military, politics, society and other aspects, and it is not a brainless work. Here you will not see "various modern weapons that are more powerful than movies", "brainwashed soldiers who are not afraid of death", "childish politicians full of personified emotions", "paper passers-by who think about issues without a position" and other kinds of existence with low IQ. (Anyone with a little common sense knows the horror of modern weapons. However, readers who are completely obsessed with FPS shooting games or drama movies are different. They will naively think that all weapons that shoot bullets are similar to firecrackers, and all weapons that shoot grenades are similar to Chinese New Year. Fireworks are almost the same, and they cannot accept the "exaggeration" of modern weapons in this book. Readers like this are advised to leave.) 3. The author has a very deep understanding of Japan, and the Japan he writes is very immersive and realistic. He may have studied in Japan. So the Japanese here are not Japanese with "unrelevant impressions", nor are they Japanese from sacred dramas. In fact, they don't look like Japanese, but look like everyone around us. (No matter where, there are still most ordinary people. However, due to lack of knowledge and laziness, many people like to use the rumors they have heard as templates. The Japanese are perverts, the Indians are rapists, the Russians are careless, and the Americans are shooters... Hi If you like this kind of mindless foreign template, you can go out and turn right, don't be reluctant and attached to it, because this approach is mainstream, I believe you will definitely be able to find more books that suit your taste) 4. The author is a dark stream, which is combined with the previous points. It is precisely because of the "reality of people" that Chaofan's attitude of "looking at people like ants" seems so real. No one will feel cruel if they see a person trample a cockroach to death, only if they see a person killing someone. In other novels, extraordinary cruelty is a slogan, but in this world, cruelty is displayed nakedly. (Lu Xun said that tragedy is the destruction of beautiful things for people to see. These characters are not beautiful, they are not only "politically incorrect" Japanese, but also have shortcomings and all kinds of humble and dirty considerations. However, precisely because of this, they are too vivid, they are like the ordinary people we know and even know. When they die because of the extraordinary influence, the readers It is even difficult to maintain the "God's perspective" and regard human life as a number, so it will be sad for the rabbit to die. New readers should be able to see the book reviews criticizing the extraordinary and ruthless characters, basically for this reason. If you can accept the dark flow, any such comments can be used as praise for the author) Disadvantages: The author always writes crazy plots such as "dog-licking", "forced", "dog-blooded" and "urban". Don't force yourself to eat when eating, skip it reasonably, because it will basically not affect the subsequent plot. You may say, "Why do labor and management have to bother with this?" Come on, if it weren't for these bad habits, this book would have become a god long ago. What would it be like now?

First-class ideas, second-rate background, third-rate writing skills, and inferior protagonists

This book is generally well written, with well-drawn portraits and supporting characters. It's just a pity: the beginning is ordinary, the middle is exciting, then it gets out of control, and it ends poorly.

This book is really a pity. Among the original batch of books, the creativity and early plots of this book can be said to be excellent, and the various plots are also quite attractive. However, it is a pity that in the middle period, the perspectives of other supporting characters begin to switch back and forth, which does not help to promote the plot. It often takes dozens of chapters to develop a small story. The contradictions are not prominent enough and a good story is not told well. This is quite a failure. It would have been better if it had promoted the plot or other functions. As a result, this pattern was completely repeated later, and then it gave people the feeling of being in the water all the time, and the number of words did increase. However, the plot and writing style have not improved, but the breath of water has been revealed in the constant updates. High, the tide is not exciting enough, and daily life is too dull. This is also the reason why I did not continue to subscribe to the original version after chasing more than 200 chapters. To put it simply, a good hand of cards is played badly. The author should pay attention to this problem. Instead of trying to increase the word count, the writing style and plot will be improved, and readers will buy it and increase the character. , Are you afraid that you won't have any money? 🙂This is the reason for the decline in subscriptions. I hope the author can listen to my suggestions.

Too many descriptive words and it becomes boring. I generally understand that the author should highlight a character and then spend a lot of space describing her, such as a street artist. But it was too long and too trivial, so I skipped large sections. Because it is an online novel first, not traditional literature. It is good to have details, but there are too many descriptive details that have nothing to do with the protagonist. I don't know where to focus my reading. If you say this is a behind-the-scenes story, a group drama. I feel again that the author has forgotten the important role you once highlighted. The angel, the broken-hand brother, the sexy girl, the soon-to-be girlfriend... The characters have become blurred when they don't appear much in such a long chapter, but they are the characters you once focused on describing. Group dramas require profound writing skills, which I feel you, the author, cannot achieve. It is much better to describe the interactions and transformations of successful characters under controllable circumstances than to blindly add new characters.

The author's writing is really good, especially the recent update. The plot is comparable to Boruto's biography. It's so awesome. I really can't appreciate your art. I won't bother you to make money. Let's go now 🙂

The story structure is very good, but the author likes the nagging life of Shuizhang, and those are the student lives of very young children. They are full of boring self-interest, the rhythm is mediocre, and the skills in the title of the book rarely appear. It should be that the imagination of skills and life cannot be developed, so it can only be written in boring life articles.

In Chapter 16, there is a section that is so poisonous that it can reach heaven! I endured the previous situation, but the result is still coming! If you put yourself in your shoes, a neighbor might be cute and petite at most, but if he dislikes you and has a vicious tongue, and ends up hitting you, I would like to ask you, what would you do? I am a good person, so to speak. My approach is to just screw him to death and ignore him from now on, just to clear the door for him personally! Goodbye! Deeply poisonous

This protagonist must be mentally ill. There are plug-ins like offline. You can use a few clones to become whatever you want. Find a few people with online IQ and high status, use ninjutsu and deception, saying that you are a powerful person who is about to burp. If you don't want to break the inheritance, I will give you an enema and practice your magic. By the way, my enemies came with me. It's almost too late, and maybe I'll leave some legacy to someone in this world. Let him be careful, give him some purpose and motivation. As long as anyone with a normal IQ will stay up and practice hard, who will come out to look for trouble and think they are invincible until they can ignore most hot weapons? Chen Laomo took too many medicines and developed a problem, which became similar to Taoism. This protagonist is sick and has a limited IQ. Things that can be easily solved are killed by a bunch of innocent people all day long, and then act like I am working so hard to avoid being discovered that I am the mastermind behind the scenes.

If you have something to say, I can't stand it when I start a new book again with this exposed writing style! If you really feel like it's not working out, just stop writing and take a few days off. Tickets will still reward you, so don't let it go unfinished! If you are going to die, your reputation will also be ruined in the future. Even if your new book is good, no one will buy it.

I suddenly wanted to see if the author had any new books. I read this book a long time ago. I was just a high school student at the time. I just thought the story was interesting. Now that I have picked it up and read a few chapters, I found that the author's writing skills are really strong. The description of details is very delicate and natural. It can be said that the image and character of Kaibu and Sada are established in just a few scenes. And each character is not a Facebook label, but rather complex and changing. This kind of writing power was very good back then, and now that fast-food reading is popular, it is even more impressive. It is a pity that after so many years, the author has not been able to finish any of his books. It is really a pity. Alas, it is difficult to calm down after all

This book was probably written by two people. The first and second half of it were particularly enjoyable. I read it three times. Japanese light novel style, if you want to read online novels, you don't need to click on it. Since the middle period (Osaka Hyundai Demon Night Parade), it has been particularly watery and unfinished. It has been finished in a hurry and has not filled in any pitfalls. Suddenly the finale is amazing and then disappears. PS: The most important point is that this book has nothing to do with the Naruto system or ninjutsu. The author himself said that he has never read Naruto. It is an urban light novel about the mastermind behind the scenes in Naruto's skin.

When the protagonist ends up pretending to be cool in front of ordinary people, that's when the protagonist's coolness completely drops. The mastermind behind the scenes should not be punished. The protagonist is always aloof and making overall plans, and it is played as a strategy game. Civilization series, Victoria series, Anno series, do players of these games have to lower their status and become a mortal in that small world? Impossible. The player determines the direction of the entire country or civilization with absolute selfless rationality and indifference. The life and death of hundreds of millions of mortals are just data to him. A random rational decision can lead to rivers of blood (for example, slavery in Civilization 4 accelerates killings, which I often do). Mortal emperors and generals are like passing clouds, and the changes in the sea are just a blink in your eyes. In this case, there is no need for you to personally participate in that small battle to fight against the enemy tanks, because it is meaningless. Your energy is destined to be focused on overall planning, and changes in the overall situation will affect winning or losing. It is really stupid to throw yourself into a small mortal life and worry about it, affecting your own strategies and plans.

I haven't been comfortable reading the chapters recently, and I prefer the first half of the novel. The main plot should be about the protagonist doing things and becoming stronger, and the subplot should be about the protagonist's pink daily life and the joyful story of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. The few generals under my command can only be used as ancillaries to make things happen. If you think they are worth writing about, you can write a side story, but don't write about the side characters in a eloquent way. A novel can only have one protagonist. The author is now showing signs of changing to n protagonists. The writing is so confusing! ! ! The protagonist's love triangle is still forcibly ambiguous. The principal of the kendo club forcefully stated that the school must have you to pretend to be the protagonist, and the follow-up routine was forcibly stopped. Every time when the plot starts to attract people, I forcefully cut off and write other plots. I want to know if Snake Girl and Ghost will get into a fight after meeting in Korea or what? I want to know what the protagonist's daily life is like as a kendo minister! ! I want to know whether you will give Tsuchimikado the seal book that you mentioned last time! ! ! If a novel with a good beginning is written like this, I suspect that you can't write anything, so you can only cut off the plot. I would rather see what the protagonist does when he is dressed as Bai Heno, and what the protagonist's daily life is like. Compared with the various half-written plots in this recent episode, it is particularly interesting to see the protagonist chopping vegetables and practicing knife skills.

I read this novel for the first time about four years ago. I really liked it at the time, and I still like it now. Even though the ending is a bit rushed, this novel is one of the few that I have read three times. Although the writing and story are definitely not as good as the Lord of Mysteries, I just think it is very good-looking. I particularly like the style of After the Rain without a knife. So far, he is the only author who makes me read his new book after finishing a novel. , I have always felt that as a writer, Rain After the Knife has great potential, but, I know everything 🙃. After reading his book, I went to pursue his other books. It hurt so much that I regretted it. At first, I had some expectations for him, but then I saw that his book was discontinued after only a dozen or 20 chapters, and a sense of despair suddenly came to my heart. Originally, the book Rebirth of Japan after the War, I thought it was well written, and it turned out 😭

Speaking of which, can you turn a sacred tree into a human being?😰

Next it's time for Mizuno Sora's 'Shura Field' 😁

I hope the author can write a novel in which only he is an extraordinary person. It will definitely become popular if nothing happens.

Now that we are living in Japan, it would not be authentic without the A-V plot.

The novel is good, but could you stop writing and suddenly change the scene? When the war was about to start, I suddenly lost track of where I was writing, and I stopped writing about the situation when the war started. I couldn't read it better.

If you don't complain, you won't be happy The early stage is okay, but in the later stage, the protagonist can complete three chapters in a hurry

This book broke down when I wrote Takahashi and I couldn't read it anymore.

Emm, it's a familiar scene again, a masterpiece in the early and mid-term, but it collapsed in the later stage I feel that in the later stage, Mizuno Sora suddenly became a god, and the charming supporting characters did not explain the results properly (I really like the Black Angel Takahashi (ಥ_ಥ)) The author's feelings about The description of extraordinary scenes is still good, and the supporting characters are also very good. It is a rare masterpiece of invincible writing (behind the scenes), but unfortunately it collapsed in the later stage. In fact, I think it would be good to write another one or two hundred chapters to finish it well For example, Sanzo enters the underworld, and hell finally becomes empty; Takahashi transforms into a fallen angel and competes with the western heaven for God's authority; he composes a tragic song of prosperity between the human world and the supernatural world, and then Mizuno becomes a god, connecting heaven and earth. From then on, the human world does not appear holy, and the supernatural becomes its own world (just an explanation of the human world) Looking forward to the author's new book, I hope his writing skills can improve. It is too difficult for the student party to subscribe to it all. . . The first order recommendation must be supported!

I feel like you, the author, are going to collapse.

When I first started reading this novel, I only saw over 100 pictures. I wanted to raise it, but it ended badly. 😢It makes me a little sad. I generally don't read novels with finales. Because it's very sad. What impressed me deeply about this novel was the plot of the male and female protagonists. This allowed me to see the simple love life and the ending of each character. If this novel didn't include Naruto themes, this would be the ideal daily life. Today I came to Qidian to support the author. But when I saw the comments section, they all said it was a bad ending. What a shame. The beginning showed me the beauty. Although I haven't watched it later, I can keep my fantasy alive. Stay at the beautiful ones. I just sent a picture as a souvenir of my departure.

I think the author could create a hero with super chakra talent to act as the villain. It is best to have a tragic life experience and rely on tenacity to survive. Once again, you accidentally gain superpowers, but your heart is twisted because of the suffering. You believe that absolute power can change everything. You are decisive in killing and resourceful. You don't trust anyone except yourself. As a person with super powers, he hates social injustice, especially the cold-blooded plutocrats who are super-powered upstarts and corrupt governments. In order to create a new world of equality, he formed a black organization called Daybreak to fight against the official. Preferably someone who shares superpowers but is slightly weaker than the protagonist.

The knight of justice hesitated in the face of reality, maybe he was deceived? Friends often joke: "People can't learn anything from history." Takeo Moribu's personality determines that he can only see the front. He gives justice to everything he can see like a burning fire, and gradually everything he sees is filled with justice. However, there will always be people who come out to destroy things, either with good intentions or with bad intentions. Although he is confused, he still tries his best to uphold justice. It's not that he didn't think about looking back, but someone told him that what he saw when he looked back was not necessarily true. What to do? He hesitated. They prepared a "mirror" for him. Everything in the mirror is the same as before. Although there is darkness, it is still full of justice. So, he was relieved When the monk pointed directly at the darkness, he hesitated again. A knight of justice, a knight with something that he could not part with, would not believe that behind the light of justice, there was always darkness hidden. He could not imagine how deep it was, so deep that it was even more difficult to look directly at than the surging and shining firelight. People avoided it and embraced justice The monk saw it, he saw the darkness behind the burning flames. He was noble. Among the scattered eyes, he was the only one who could look directly at the other person. So he stepped over the flames, even though the flames were enough to overturn a mortal's perspective and make him stop and apologize for justice. With his skin living up to his glory, he calmly asked Takeo Moribe, intending to solve the darkness, although he might not be able to solve it. If this flame of justice can really block all "darkness", then it is not because of justice that he, who is so small, can pass. The people around him were admired but disappointed. They were equally small, but they could not be as great as him. Perhaps this is the case with the gods and Buddhas in history. People with low self-esteem and shame give them all kinds of magical powers and powers just so that they can kneel down in front of them with peace of mind and accept teaching and guidance.

🤭 Before, when he swept through a certain religious place, the protagonist saved a group of victims. The girls who were sacrificed by their biological parents to be ravaged by a large group of men came to find the white-collar OL whose parents wanted to persuade them to leave, but were betrayed by their parents and dragged up for a living sacrifice. When this mental and physical body fell into pain and despair, a swordsman floated over, just like Li Bai, killing one person every ten steps and leaving no trace for a thousand miles. Saving everyone from the sea of suffering is so shocking in the hearts of these girls at this time. It can even be said to be the seed of persistence in the hearts of these women. After all, these parents sent everyone into this pit of fire (after that, these families can be said to be completely broken up. After all, parents must learn from their relatives in this kind of thing. Become an enemy, even if your parents are mentally broken and suddenly wake up), the protagonist inadvertently wins the hearts of a group of girls. No matter who this swordsman is, whether he is a ghost, a demon, a fairy, or something else, he is the pillar of their hearts. People know that ghosts are scary, and ghosts know that people's hearts are poisonous. So-called people, so-called parents and relatives are not as good as him 🤭 Even these girls will gradually form a fanatical group (sometimes it is very scary for Japanese people to go to extremes). After the Tokyo incident, the official admitted the truth of the previous church, and these people went to the stage to support the swordsman and the bone girl crazily. 🤫 Many authors in Japan began to create works, with stories about the swordsman and the bone girl, and set off a wave. Japanese kendo people worshiped the protagonist as the first swordsman, who can cut bullets with swords and kill people invisible. What kind of state has this sword practice reached? The suspicions of the Onmyoji sisters have also spread about the Akabei incident. Even so-called experts and kendo people said that this person's kendo has surpassed Miyamoto Musashi and others. 🤭 The advantage is that the protagonist will get many unexpected benefits when going out as this swordsman in the future. The first is to draw a sword to help when he sees an injustice. At least it is not bad. It is a ghost or monster with good intentions. The official is also willing to deal with such an existence. It is more suitable to deceive people and deceive everyone.