One Piece: Summoning the Dead

The weird situation at the beginning is that everyone wants to save their lives, but the protagonist actually wants a girl. . . If he hadn't been the protagonist, he would have died long ago.

How can I put it, the writing is okay, but the beginning of the story feels invincible and exciting, and then the author tries to weaken the protagonist's ability. Apart from being too bland and the protagonist's IQ is not online, there seems to be nothing to complain about. I've watched about half of it. I'll retreat first. If I encounter you next time, I'll come back and look around.

The writing is really bad. Although the protagonist has a high growth potential, the system is not powerful enough to see the protagonist falling in love and being abused. There is only a small dimensional world, and Devil Fruit is needed to grow. The more I watch, the more frustrated I become.

It's better not to write the system, the whole natural fruit, or just physical skills, the timeline is advanced 30 years, the male protagonist should be more stable, have more personality charm, and don't go there and be looked down upon by others. There are so many idiots in One Piece, except to pull the ship over - Jack

I just summoned those two at the beginning and said nothing more after that.

What bullshit is this, given Goldfinger. Then suppress and weaken them desperately

I have no idea what the protagonist is going to do

I read the first chapter, it's so damn toxic, I still haven't recovered from it yet

The first one persuades you to give up, and the last wish directly makes a wish. Saitama's strength and physique can push the world of One Piece, or Superman's thinking can directly create the world. Aladdin's magic lamp and Shenlong exchange back and forth to directly make countless wishes. What kind of system do you need? No, you don't need it, just finish it directly with the first one.

I suggest the author to see how others add characters Voyage: The Strongest Clone System Voyage: Please Call Me Godfather From Admiral to the Gotei 13 These are new books with more than 1 million words, and they are very comfortable to read. The author still needs to work harder on his writing and plot.

The protagonist summons so many undead and then turns into a passerby. Is he afraid that the combat power of the pirate world is not enough? Can you supplement it for them? In fact, there is no need. The strong characters in One Piece are enough. Moreover, if the strength of different systems is dispersed into different camps, it will easily overwhelm the combat power, distract the readers from reading the book, and easily cause drama.

If this book becomes popular, those great masters from the beginning won't have to write books anymore.

There are too many ways to reduce intelligence, and there are also many poisonous points. I still recommend the author to write more articles.

When the book "Pirates" cannot be written, the protagonist needs a bounty, and bounty hunters are the best. The Navy has regulations that do not allow killing big pirates unless necessary.

Let me ask you something, there are so many undead scenes, what's the point of having a protagonist?

The writing is quite good, it changes the plot of the original work, and later tests the author's reasoning ability. It is not a pervert who can quickly increase his strength and the number of his followers to control the pace of writing, and the tasks summoned are also in line with the character of the original work. Looking at the author's writing ambition, I feel that this summoning flow is actually not suitable for summoning too many top general-level characters. The people summoned now can be considered kind-hearted and match the protagonist's personality and work style, but the characters mentioned above are not suitable. The protagonist has the strength of a general, two general-level deputies + several upstream Shichibukai-level crew members, and a proper One Piece style combination is created. Sometimes I don't understand why some summoning streams only summon generals and emperors, while other forces are still confused.

Don't forget Lilynette when you beat Death Stark, they are both very funny.

The male protagonist is just like a silly dog. Apart from always yelling, "Oh my God", it is of no use. He makes three wishes at the beginning, and the first one he thinks of is a woman. As a woman, the male protagonist asks her to do something. It's not something sinister. He just asks the female bastard to look at the navy's memory to see if she has any six moves. Cultivation method, the woman is reluctant to give it up, bargaining, the whole Kimimaro is okay for the second time, so I won't say anything. The third time you make a wish, it's a small space, chicken feathers can't help. If you want to cheat, just do it seriously, otherwise don't give three wishes at the beginning, it's just disgusting, I'm going to get angry just because of the sb character of the male protagonist.