Immortal for 1,000,000 Years

Chapter 53 The author's description is really amazing. I feel like watching a movie. I am uneducated and can only use "Wow!" Groove! To describe it, it's great 🤭🤭🤭

I started following the author from the last book. I have always felt that the author's writing style is very lifelike. I have been chasing this book. I originally wanted to keep it for a while. But, I really ran out of books to read. So I read the existing serialized chapters in one go. The author has a good grasp of the interesting points of the story and the personalities of the characters. But there are also some shortcomings. I have some suggestions that I hope will help the author. In fact, it is still the creation of characters. In this book, the author's character creation is quite good. But, it's just not bad. In addition to the protagonist and the lolita, it has a full set of characters. But it can only be said to be relatively plump. And the best friends around the protagonist are just not that flat. Their behavioral motivations lack antecedents. That is, the character story before the beginning of the story. Why does the landlady like the protagonist? What story did the young policeman and Teacher John get recognized by the protagonist? And the boy who returned from wandering. Their story with the protagonist. They can write about their past in fragments. This is more conducive to fleshing out the characters. Although these characters are not flat, they are definitely not full-bodied. They are just "the landlord who likes the protagonist", "John with kidney deficiency" and "film policeman who is looking forward to becoming a regular employee". The supporting characters surrounding the protagonist deserve the author's pen and thought to conceive of them. The thoughts of little people are more visible in the brush strokes. What everyone might want to see more is the protagonist and his friends. Rather than the protagonist and his followers

The new book is the most popular one again, please improve it

To be honest, was this book paced? There are so many primary school students who have been clamoring not to use girls or write emotional dramas. Are you the ones who get stimulated by watching this kind of thing? Or was the Qing Dynasty still alive? Eunuchs are harmful Added later: The author's emotional description is pretty good, and I am neutral. As long as the author's description is good, nothing matters. I am just criticizing the book or people who directly hope the author will be like that. I am not criticizing people who like single female protagonists. Welcome to the bar, just forget it.

I hope that the protagonist can spread all the cultivation methods to benefit mankind and lead mankind to the top.

I haven't read this book, so I'd like to ask if it is reliable. Does it have a history of frequent interruptions?

As we all know, Mr. Fan has... A long name, and an even shorter one (sure)

Everything else is good, but I think it's best not to delay the relationship scenes. Several books have been abandoned because of the delay. The male protagonist doesn't agree and is still acting ambiguous. Don't talk about daily life. In my opinion, this is a scumbag acting like a hooligan. A confirmed relationship is daily life. Why drag it on to fish?

This kind of old monster is the most difficult to write. Ten thousand years, women, power, money, knowledge, abilities, all the things we dream of are boring in his eyes. So, how can we write this kind of protagonist without falling apart?

If you can write a bunch of nonsense in such detail, why not write a good plot?