After 10 Years of Sharpening My Sword, I Can Finally Let It Go.

To be honest, this book is really poisonous. Although the protagonist is very powerful, he still has to fight wits. There is no interesting point at all. The author's writing style is also not good, and no chapter is outstanding.

It's ridiculous, the various routines are written in a vulgar way, and sometimes conflict with each other. I feel that what the protagonist does changes from time to time. At the beginning, he acts decisively. He doesn't kill many people when encountering enemies. The first thing is to complete the goal. Then I met the leader of the Jin Yiwei. Well, I didn't remember the official title in the article. He was roughly the leader of the Jin Yiwei. He was all kinds of pretentious, as well as the Manichean elite monster, the Escort Agency and the Qingfeng Thief. The various routines he wrote were just like an assembly line. The writings of Dutian, a mastermind organization behind the scenes, were even lower than the Akatsuki organization in Naruto. After all, the Akatsuki organization still had a goal. You wrote earlier that all kinds of high-ranking people are behind the scenes, and then when the protagonist joins, it is like a low-level gang - hand over your skills and mask, or I will beat you to death, and then the protagonist bursts out with a strong momentum (I also wrote earlier that this organization party uses the mask to send the consciousness to a mysterious space, and the body is still in place, and then it is still an inner-qi martial arts world), and then successfully joined, it is simply inferior.

It's all booked, but there are still a lot of problems. The writing of Zhenbei Houfu is too stupid. Didn't it say at the beginning that the protagonist uses his identity to develop his own power? How could the prince who is guarding the border know nothing? As a prince who has lived near the town for many years, it is a bit too much to know nothing about his own territory. There are still many typos in this book. I hope the author can work hard and improve them.

What is this? There were more than 800 chapters three years ago. How can you still pay these after three years? A eunuch?

I'd better think of a book title seriously.

It is said to be a game world, but there are no players on the shelves yet. I don't know what the use of this setting is. Moreover, as an expansion pack of the game world, the development of major events can be modified at will. It is a bit unreasonable and contradictory. It is better to rebirth directly and not call it game data. The dialogues are a bit over-the-top, but the plot is very graphic, and the plotting aspect feels a bit weak. However, I think the resolution of the crisis in Zhenbei Mansion in the first stage is actually quite reasonable. However, after arriving in the capital, I feel that the protagonist has drifted away, and the protagonist's force is too high. I feel that plotting is not as useful as the protagonist wearing a mask and killing people directly.

The author should take a look at it after he finished writing. Some of the sentences are difficult to understand and are extremely ignorant. In the beginning, he said how powerful this technique is and how arrogant it is, but then there is an even more arrogant one. There is no foreshadowing at all, but this can still be ranked in the top 20.

The author has to decide on a direction. You want to write about the court and the rivers and lakes, but for now, the rivers and lakes are pretty good, and the courts are not interesting.

Some paragraphs, which can be covered in one sentence, feel a bit long-winded, making people want to skip them, and the sentences are a bit awkward, with typos, which affects the reading experience. The subject matter is good, I wish I could pay more attention when coding

I don't feel comfortable reading this book.

It would be better to say less that it is late and that it is sooner 😒. .

，，，，，，，， . However, this book has done something that many novel authors have failed to do. Chapter 143 is a self-questioning chapter. The protagonist reflects on his behavior and resolves not to become the person he once hated. However, it is a pity that many readers may give up without reading this chapter. This book does have many problems. There are many typos and grammatical errors in the early stage, and the narrative is also a bit long-winded. It can be seen that the author should be writing a book for the first time, but as a reader, I can also feel that the author is constantly improving. The advantage of Chinese characters is that typos do not affect reading. I was also inspired by the previous book review. It would be unfair to blindly beat this book to death with a stick.

This book is hard to describe in one word. There are a lot of exclamation points, but it's okay if you read too much. There are a lot of typos, but the meaning can be understood. The writing is mediocre, and I can tolerate this. But your transition, without mentioning this or that, is quite blunt, and it looks very awkward. Although there are many books collecting dust on my bookshelf, there are none as bad as this one.

You update once a day, it's not enough. Please update more.

The plot is compact and rigorous, and the characters are vividly drawn. Although the subject matter is a popular game from another world, the plot is still unexpected and fascinating. I hope the author will continue to do so. There will be no shortage of monthly tickets, rewards are often available, and full subscriptions are available every day.

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After watching it for 30 minutes, the only thing that came to my mind was "It's too late!" That was fast. Storytelling or something. This sentence is basically included in every fighting scene. I would like to give the author a little advice not to say this sentence again. Is it okay to say a split second or a split second? It's really uncomfortable. Others don't know. Anyway, I think it affects the experience.

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After reading more than ten chapters, I would like to call the author the author with the most typos and sentences.

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It takes ten years to sharpen a sword, just for one moment.

What do you mean? Still updated?

The book is quite good, and there are relatively few in this category. Personally, I think the biggest problem is that they keep looking for trouble! ! ! When one troublemaker is eliminated, another one will be picked up immediately. There are not many but there are. I read it and the whole story is that when the troublemaker falls, another one will come to cause trouble for some reason. It has not stopped. It makes people feel a little uncomfortable watching it, it's too deliberate. Apart from this, it was quite enjoyable to read. Summary: A person who plays tricks and conspiracies, but has a sarcastic face, just wants to kill his master, solving one problem after another, solving one problem after another, forever. This is the biggest contradiction! If you have a sarcastic face, you should use Wushuang. Don't play tricks and tricks. It's not fun at all. This book would be much better if it restrained its sarcasm a little bit.

Friends, what do you think is good about this book? You might as well leave a comment here. Below is the original post. —————————————————— Currently, all chapters have been subscribed, for no other reason than to feel justified in scolding. Just this kind of book? Still exquisite? Also recommended? If you don't know how to write about a battle of wits, don't write about it. Day by day, it was embarrassing and forced to do it. Your spy chief doesn't even know who the second son of the target family looks like? Adding an organization is useless. After recruiting a bunch of subordinates, they boasted for a long time about how awesome this one was and how powerful that one was, and that's it? I calculated and calculated every day, but in the end I solved the problem with a wave of instant kills. So what are you doing here with me? Just messing around. ———————————————————— Edit this post for the second time. There are a few things I want to talk about. First of all, I am quite surprised that this author has not deleted this post. I have posted quite a few posts with full reviews like this, and this is probably the only one that still exists. First of all, let me praise you. It's good to be able to hear the yelling and scolding. I also hope that the author can really write excellent works in the future. One more thing, let's talk about two things with the book friends who saw this post. First, protection should be given to new authors and new books, but does this protection mean that negative reviews should disappear? Should we ignore the bad and unreasonable aspects of some works? Is it wrong to vent your dissatisfaction with a new book like this in a book review section? So if someone chooses not to read the book because of these posts, is it because the writing is not good or because there are too many negative comments in the book review section? Secondly, do we have the right to comment like this for all book lovers? We book friends might as well discuss these two things together. In addition, I keep this book in my own reading list. Turn on automatic subscription. Screenshot as proof. If someone says I just took a screenshot to deceive them, I can't do anything.

Some people cheered, some yelled. This is the difference between new bookworms and old bookworms. I believe that most of the people who are applauded are new bookworms, and most of those who are scolded are old bookworms. In one sentence, if you want to read this book, don't use your brain, just read ten lines at a glance, and don't care about the details. If you want to savor it, go for an early walk! It's full of flaws, and it's an awkward comparison 🤐🤐🤐

The biggest problem with this book is that there are constant schemings and schemings. Others are determined to kill your whole family. If you don't have the strength, forget it. If you have the strength and power, you will show off every day, just to slow down the pace and improve the word count? You have so many killers, if you kill one of the emperor's thugs today and another one tomorrow, will he still have other things in his mind? Aren't you essentially putting your own character before the lives of others?

I can write this book, but it's too little 🤫

I haven't finished the last one yet, and I've started a new one, another eunuch book. I don't dare to read your book, it's poisonous.

The dean said to a mentally ill patient: "This time you saved a man who fell into the water. You did a good job. Unfortunately, he hanged himself." The mentally ill patient said proudly: "I hung him up to dry!"

What are you writing? The word count is endless, and you no longer pursue any plot! I'm still working on anti-theft all day long. The number of words in a chapter for repeated paragraphs is very high. Shui Quanqin, otherwise you should stop writing. Trying to find so many words is very troublesome to the brain. If you have some self-awareness, you won't do this. Where is your sense of shame?