American Manga's Black Hand Covers the Sky

This chapter is so short that I was extremely surprised. Do you want it to be so short? There is only a slight difference between it and not!

Very well written, updates are too slow

If we continue like this, all the people will probably run away. To be honest, we will be planning that plan all day long. Since the protagonist Golden Finger's power is not so incredible that it can change reality, he has learned the cultivation of Qi and the various uses of Qi. Even if you occasionally write about the protagonist working hard to improve his strength in his spare time, you only need to mention a few sentences. You are not required to write about how to practice, but at least it can let readers know that the protagonist has a sense of crisis and is constantly strengthening himself. And now I'm writing about Susan, about the law of cause and effect for sons, etc. This kind of painful theory is like a chicken laying an egg. Franklin was wiped out by you at the source. Without a future, he can still come to kill you? And when I heard Susan, I was scared to death. Oh my god, the gangster, can he have some consciousness and character? Can you stop acting so badly? Even if you are extremely scared in your heart, you can't even pretend on the surface? Do you get scared in front of women?

If someone is sent to steal the model that Stark's father left for him, and then research new elements, recover Ivan, and announce the discovery of the 119th element first, how miserable Tony Stark will be depends on how much the protagonist hates him. After all, there are no new elements, and there is no solution to rake poisoning.

Why do we always bring Marvel and DC together? You don't have the writing power. You can't handle the plot of so many heroes with different backgrounds. Don't you have any points to make?

Author, are you rushing to let the protagonist reincarnate? Which one of the four basic operations and six advanced operations of telekinesis will the protagonist know? ! Will be entangled. In addition, the protagonist can't do Jue, Lian, Fa, Zhou, Yin, Ning, Yuan, Jian, Liu and Hard. Not even the force that can push several tons of doors. The plot is fast as hell. The main character, the full-time hunter Xiaojie Qiyazhen, has unique talents. It took several years to develop. The main character can say whatever he wants. Continuously adding and subtracting plots, just to answer that sentence, the heart black becomes stronger.

It's been 500 chapters, and the protagonist is still being plotted by an ordinary human being, and he's still running around in New York, the three-thirds of the Earth. He's obviously stronger than Thanos, but he's still trash, and his abilities are almost unused.

Please stop writing a copy of the world. What do you mean by messing around like this? If you think about it, are things in the world of martial arts really useful? It's totally something that can be drawn out in a lottery. I haven't read a single chapter of martial arts. Do you know how embarrassing it is to see a world with a completely different worldview?

Since the introduction of the female protagonist in Chapter 201, I feel that the author has become a little distracted! For example, Chapter 202, such as Chapter 208. There are some things that the protagonist will achieve in the future, but if you write them directly, the feeling will be different! For example, Chapter 202 gave me the feeling that the protagonist is not very capable, but his ambition is not small. Now that the protagonist has a golden finger, he still has abilities. For example, a lottery drawn once a month has a long cool-down time. Unless you draw what you need, the probability of drawing good things is too low. For example, the protagonist's telekinesis ability. The fact that he has this level of telekinesis ability is all because of the author's fault. Because from the perspective of the setting of a full-time hunter, the strength of telekinesis ability has many aspects. For example, constraints, the greater the constraints, the greater the ability in a certain aspect, such as Kurapika. Another example is exercise. After exercise, your reading ability will also improve. But is it in the text? No! As soon as the protagonist turned on his telekinesis ability, he developed his own abilities! No restrictions, no exercise! With the current abilities of the protagonist, it is not easy to become a god. But what did I see? He transcended the long river of time, and a group of his subordinates also transcended the long river of time. His son also transcended the long river of time, and a group of his subordinates' children also transcended the long river of time. Why should he? A once-a-month lottery where you can't get good stuff without relying on the author? Or is it his telekinesis ability? Not to mention the Ten Thousand Worlds, there are quite a few telepathic masters in the Hunter World alone. His telekinesis ability control is low. Even if you pay a certain price, it can be completely lifted. The protagonist's subordinates, such as Xisuo and Ye Gucheng, cannot be controlled at all. So in the recent chapters, I personally think that the protagonist is not very capable and very ambitious! I feel like the author is still lost!

I regretted chasing it, and kept it for a few days to update a chapter. Next time the author writes a book, the author will not read it until the end of the book, unless the author changes his vest.

After reading so much, I welcome this book. Come on, don't give up. 😁😁😁😁

Good book. I finally found a novel that doesn't lick the protagonist of a Western hero. This way it can be bloody. I see the protagonist being humiliated by a Western hero and the protagonist begins to strengthen himself. I support the author on this point. I hope those hypocritical people will be dealt with one by one in the future.

The author shouldn't make the main world a hodgepodge of Marvel, DC, mutants, and Spider-Man. How to solve the conflicts between the worldview and the plot when these are put together? Written like this, none of the books I've followed have been able to finish it!

At first I thought it was purely Marvel, but DC got mixed in. Pure DC and pure Marvel are fine, but I can't accept them being mixed together. All kinds of things, withdraw first.

It is said that Luther has level nine intelligence! This man once created Doomsday and also created the short-lived Superman. In fact, it all started because Clark sucked it himself! At the ninth level of wisdom, can a technology tree without a system be able to turn the world upside down? But Superman provides people with these technology trees~~! The nine-level wisdom of a dog is actually a real villain with resources! Of course these so-called powerful enemies were also trained by Superman himself!

The subject matter is good, but it's a pity that you failed in plot construction and character creation. It was not enjoyable at all.

Didn't Justin Hammer write it down before? Why did he appear again?🤭🤭🤭🤭

If you have a black background, don't try to hide it. No matter how you wash your background, you can't escape the opinions of others. If you want to enter the top circles through the back door, you might as well develop your own strength and go straight to the bottom. Wherever the golden finger is, as long as you are powerful, others are begging to enter your circle. .

Let me remind the author that the book you wrote is (American Manga: Black Hand Covers the Sky), not (Hunter Hunter) fan fiction. Can you please not have too many hunter plots and too many chapters, and sort out the priorities. Even if you can directly transition time in the American comic plot.

The protagonist's calculations in the book are so mindless that they lower the IQ of the characters in the American comic too much. It feels like others just follow the protagonist's calculations and think a little, and the calculations are not successful every time. The author seems not to be good at writing this kind of intrigues. The protagonist in this book does not follow the flow of strength. I feel that the writing has collapsed after reading it.

MW itself is a collapsed world, plus DC, Honkai Impact on Honkai Impact, and the level of power is very confusing. It is rare that this type of story will not collapse in the later stages, and the current plot progress is a bit slow, and there is no specific main line. The current plot seems to be forced to do something by the outside world, rather than advancing with its own clear plan.

Why does the protagonist have such a childish and mature face?