Invincible Master's Great Uncle

It's a bit too much. I just tolerated it when Bai Ye made the elders in his sect mixed with men and women. Now you have a saint girl from the Fenglei Sect. You didn't say what the male protagonist thought of her before. She just said that she wanted to go to Zhongzhou with the male protagonist. Okay, you agreed, I tolerated it, and then what? The male protagonist doesn't have any psychological description, saying that he has fallen in love with a saintly girl, and he starts to flirt with her, asking her to commit himself to her. What is the author thinking?

I'm a noob at writing, but the plot is just okay, so I'll leave it out of respect.

The plot has just begun and a woman appears and then what happens... This makes me feel sick and I don't know what to write 😤😤

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Alas, it feels like you are getting shorter and shorter. Don't you want to get longer?

Why do I always regard Qin Jue as Qiyu 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

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This is the first time I read such a relaxing novel. It feels good to relax. The writing is a bit interesting. You can watch the apprentice act cute and watch the villain slap in the face. You don't have to worry about the protagonist being defeated... Let's talk about the problem. The opponent's level jumps too fast. According to the growth system of your novel, the average person can write a book of 3 million or even 5 million words, but you have nothing to write for 1 million, and the plot is too scattered. The character description is not enough. For example, the other time traveler you arranged did not write anything about him at all. There is also Luo Weiwei, who has almost no personality in the description, but occasionally there are good ones, such as Bai Ye. Invincible articles are relatively niche nowadays, as you can tell by reading the comments section. The author can consider writing a formal upgrade flow, embellished with some interesting descriptions of your own, which can still be read easily. Come on!

The reviews of this book are simply unreadable. There are a lot of curses The most outrageous thing is that there are still people arguing about whether Fairy King plagiarized or not. No, you don't care whether he plagiarized or not. It's outrageous for you to discuss another book in this book, right?

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Uh... What can I say, the beginning of the novel is pretty good. But it always seems a bit uninteresting. A sect disciple, knowing that the protagonist is his great uncle, can still have a conversation as if he is in love! And when the protagonist knows the secret of your technique, you should at least have respect and fear. The dialogue was awkward to watch. The second thing is that this world of cultivating immortals feels like it has been passed through by seniors, and the live broadcast has been done. It seems like there are people coming in after more than a hundred chapters, and it's a mess. Just like a good recipe, the oil is not hot, the flavor is insufficient, and the pan is cooked too early. What a waste!

Persist until Chapter 7 and die from poison

This novel by the author is very interesting. It is true that the protagonist has invincible power, but he will not be bound by the idea of ​​​​"with great ability, great responsibility" that is close to moral kidnapping. Do whatever comes to your mind, be free. There is no such mindless pretentious plot, which makes people feel comfortable watching it. This is a work worth recommending, and the author can keep updating it. 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹

Well, the protagonist is male, but the author often feminizes the protagonist, such as rolling his eyes, slender fingers, being forcibly kissed, and curling his lips. . . 😥 I don't know whether the author is a man or a woman. Every time I think of that scene, a man curls his lips and rolls his eyes. He can't stand it. If the plot hadn't been so good, he would have died of poison. But in the chapters I've read so far, eye-rolling still happens quite often. If it's a male author, can the ending of the chapter be removed?😅

I just saw it yesterday. It's very interesting. Maybe I like to read more light-hearted novels. Good luck, author. Looking forward to your next novel.

Invincible is an old cliché. The protagonist is very strong, but others don't know it. They all look down on him, and then he is slapped in the face. This cycle continues, and he keeps meeting people and is looked down upon. In the end, he is slapped in the face, or shocked. It doesn't feel very innovative. Let's see what happens next.

I see so many people talking about poison in the comment area. I don't believe it. Wait until I try it.

It's 2023, and I can still read a novel about a villain and a mentally retarded person from 10 years ago.

The woman immediately told her to leave as soon as she came out. It was so embarrassing. I have read a lot of Invincible novels, and the woman immediately vomited when she came out.

Destroying the enemy with one blow and leaving the whole audience with shocked eyes is the popular pretense nowadays. Also, killing the younger one and then beating up the older one is in line with the character of a otaku who is afraid of trouble. Although this will make you lose the chance of water numbers

There are still two days to get the college entrance examination results. I wish all the college entrance examination candidates to get into the ideal university.

Because I only read it with a single female protagonist. There are too few invincible stories that don't open a harem. It's hard for my mental mysophobia.

Although the writing is relatively simple, there is no need to write dozens or hundreds of comments in every chapter. Haven't you been poisoned? Why are you coming back? I can't find one book among a hundred books that both suits my taste and has good writing, so I came here to read some short stories. It's not just for you guys to criticize your writing skills while reading. I saw comments posted about wanting to read and read again. It's not for you to take out the trash. If you can't stand it, don't read it. Go and look for books with unparalleled writing, interesting plots, and no poisonous points. Also, don't take the books at the top of the rankings as an example. If the author has that kind of writing, it has nothing to do with you.

If you don't know how to write emotional stories, you don't have to write them. I feel that the author wants to make the protagonist more fairy-like. The introduction of events feels a bit uninteresting. Also, it's not rigorous and affects the senses.

Personally, I think this book is very good. If the author works harder and updates it, I think it will have more subscribers.

Wouldn't it be nice for all the brothers and sisters in the book club to actively speak and post to increase the activity of our book club and let it unlock benefits early? Like Reply Post are all active. When you unlock the benefits, it's great.

I'm back again, oh, I miss you so much

The setting and general plot are good, but the specific plot is not well written. The writing is surprisingly lacking in vocabulary. It cannot describe beauties or things between men and women. It is too stiff.

Good guy, you gave me a fright, and you ended up scattering flowers.

After reading the free chapters, I read dozens of paid chapters and then skipped to read the next few chapters. Here is a summary of the drug test: Comprehensive evaluation: A basic level novel, it will be boring if you read it continuously. After reading other novels where the protagonist is very difficult and miserable, you can read this adjustment. The protagonist is invincible, no effort or struggle is required, and he is invincible from beginning to end (I haven't watched the ending, but I have read the chapters near the end) No other character can maliciously plot against the protagonist. Basically, villains are spoiled by the protagonist when their plan is about to succeed. First they are crazy and want to kill the protagonist, and then they are easily crushed to death by the protagonist. This scenario must have repeated dozens of times. The main character and the supporting characters are not outstanding, but there is nothing special about them The main character has no cp and no ideas at all. He should always be Chu. There have been several female characters around him, but there is no female plot