The Heavens Test Their Martial Arts

I've wanted to say it for a long time. Why don't you read it yourself after you finish writing it? There are really many typos. This is a matter of attitude. Otherwise, you can read it in less than a quarter of an hour...

Can the author please stop having those second-rate lines? They are very dramatic, very naive, and very discouraging.

The writing of the main world is really unbearable. The word count is so pretentious and slaps-in-the-face, there are too many nonsense and noobs' routines. You, the author, are also talented.

The writing is average, the dialogue is a bit awkward, and the main character's name changes around a lot. .

You can still read the first 65 chapters. Until I read Chapter 66, it was extremely poisonous. Just stopped watching it. Even if what you write later is not poisonous.

I just saw Full Moon Wine, and I remember correctly, there is a rumor, 3 turns, 6 sits, 8 crawls,,, does the daughter of pig's feet have to be full moon to crawl?

The plot design is very good, but the dialogue between the characters is too wordy. I want to express the style of Gu Long's novels, but the writing power is not enough, please use some patience!

I feel very good after reading it. The description of the battle is also very touching. The relationship between the characters in the main world is also very clear and there is no feeling of being in a fog. It is just that there are too few chapters and it is not enough to read.

Everything else was fine, but there was just one problem: too many very beautiful women appeared, causing too much trouble. For example, Han Yan, I don't know why the author added such a poisonous point. The green tea girl went through all the trouble to find a useless second-generation official like the protagonist as a shield, and then all kinds of sperm came to look for trouble.

Keep it for another month and see if it will die. .

This book is mainly written by the author. Why is it about the Three Kingdoms? I can accept it by directly killing a bunch of readers and then jumping and devouring it. However, you have beaten them to death and become immortals. Those who come back to fight for a planet can't be beaten in any way. You have become the first genius of the human race. You are still so weak. You are a universe, and the main world is only one planet. In the end, you are really written like this. I am convinced. What's even more poisonous is the Three Kingdoms Come Again, which everyone doesn't read. The author really wrote the book after drinking. It's also a poisonous point. After you swallow it, you can directly change it to Perfect or Cover the Sky. It's fine. It just develops slowly. The main thing is to write about swallowing and directly increase the combat power too high. Just go and swallow it and write about the earth, but you have to write about it. In the universe, I didn't understand this. I thought the earth would be enough, and then I went to finish the plot. I waited until I had at least passed the level of covering the sky before writing the part that swallowed the earth. Then after finishing writing, I went to Zhuxian. Zhuxian was okay. In fact, the Three Kingdoms shouldn't be written. How could there be so much trouble in Zhuxian directly? The author himself has no choice but to make a mistake. He can only read the plot later, but I clearly feel that the author can't continue writing. If it doesn't work, just cut it off and start another book. With the current situation of updating and subscribing to Shuangba Street, it can really be cut off. This is my little suggestion, don't spray.

Now that I have read more than 200 chapters, I will ask if the person named Yu is the heroine. If so, I will delete it. I don't want to waste my time. I have never disliked a character so much in so many novels...

Abandoned book, how many innocent people have been killed by Aunt Gongsun, but the protagonist can actually marry her, speechless

After this introduction, the head swordsman of the Shaozhuang of Shenjian Villa forcibly persuaded him to quit. This is just like him eating daddy when there are 6 people in the family and 5 of them are eating.

It starts with Tiger Head, which is very well written, with online IQ and decisive killing. After Miss Yu came out, the protagonist's IQ plummeted and he was indecisive. After Qianqiu Jing came out, it turned the cool novel into a sadistic novel. The protagonist no longer has such a thing as a brain. In the dungeon world, I suffered a bloody blow, and in the main world, I made enemies everywhere without thinking. I have nothing to say! Can't be saved

The book is filled with a sense of superiority from the world of high-level martial arts. Your true intention is to kill everything, and other people's martial arts are just frivolous scum. It's embarrassing to watch. It's far inferior to the protagonist who comes from a world without demons. It's so satisfying to defeat the villain boss with talent and hard work. I'm convinced to quit.

I would like to ask what is the significance of the protagonist's time travel? Lu Xiaofeng's world is shattered. If he returns to the main world and becomes a martial artist, then why are you traveling across time?

Please don't write about the harem, okay? Even if I write, I write it more naturally, like a fool, and I am engaged to my enemy.

This book was well written in the early stages, but I couldn't stand it anymore and it was already broken. Eunuch!

In fact, the writing is quite good, but there is one thing that I really can't accept: the soul travels to other trial worlds, uses other people's bodies to marry the woman you like and have children, and then returns to the main world... This setting is a bit toxic, so I can't stand it. I wonder how many people gave up this book because of this reason? ?

I quite liked it. As a result, it was cool to return to the main world. The main world was praised to the heavens before. Even the so-called accompanying souls are out, in a proper fantasy fairy tale style. The result is a warrior? Warrior? Wu Wei? Martial arts school? What the hell is this? Can you use some snacks for this setting? You are a fool, you are not as good as the acquired innate master... I am really drunk. Abandoned. Bye-Bye

Forcibly weakening the world of Devouring Starry Sky, the author probably has never seen the original work of Devouring Starry Sky. Behind the original universe is the Cosmic Sea, and beyond that is the Origin Continent. If you include the worldview in Snow Eagle, there is also Chaotic Source Space. I've read so many novels, but none of them have the same strength as Swallowing the Stars.

The first time I saw this statement was in the online game novel "Super Player", but the problem is that it is an online game! In that novel, the Dugu Nine Swords are still based on the movie version, such as swinging swords, lifting swords, etc. Fu Hongxue learned his sword skills from the magic sword secret book of "The Invincible Magic Sword" Tian Tian Yu. His sword skills are far more than just this one sword. Of course, his sword skills are fast. It is impossible for any martial arts to have only one style, then there will be no changes. What does not change is a dead thing, and there is no living soul. Just like Ah Fei's sword, he seems to have only one thrust, but he can thrust from different angles, angles you can't imagine, so this kind of thrust must be matched with different techniques. The protagonist only practices one move because he wants to become a master through a simple method, but the road to success is never simple. Many of us like to talk about transforming quantitative changes into qualitative changes, but in philosophy quantitative changes not only refer to quantitative changes, but also include structural changes and arrangement changes. When graphite turns into diamond, the number of carbon atoms does not change, but the arrangement changes, which is also a quantitative change. The protagonist's idea of ​​practicing swordsmanship is like trying to stack carbon and let the carbon turn into diamond through quantitative changes. It is completely different.

It really feels like rubbish to rank commanders and lieutenants like this! Even the words "Dou Po Wu Wang Wu Zong Wu Zun" sound better than this, even the words "acquired, innate, master, great master, heaven and man" sound better than this.

Seeing that the protagonist in Chapter 21 marries a guy like Gongsun who specializes in poisoning and killing ordinary innocent people and is not afraid of being poisoned to death, do you think that if you catch her and get married, she will like you and even your personality will change for you? If you don't poison a few people who are unhappy every day by treating people's lives like ants, do you think oppression will make her like you?

To cheat, you need to be aware of cheating, learn the art of drawing swords, and pretend to be very stupid. There is no master style at all. It is acceptable for masters like Ye Gucheng and Ximen Chuixue to be abused by you, but it is ridiculous if you can abuse Ximen by instructing your wife. Obviously without any experience, you can teach a peerless master by working behind closed doors. If the depth is not enough, don't pretend. Only by preparing the groundwork can you write the feeling of a real master. Don't pretend for the sake of pretending.

I gave up, I feel like the mental attack was too severe.

I've told you before, the main world is not bad, who knows, it's worse