The King's Avatar: Monster Hunter

It's quite a rare hunter fanfic. Although I haven't read much about Hunter, I've always played Monster Hunter. What I'm looking forward to is the anecdotes about meeting the humans in the star base of the New World. It doesn't have to be the fifth phase, and I don't know if there will be Blue Star (dense fog). Maybe the pig's feet will be regarded as dragons or unknown humans in the forest. I hope the author can develop more interesting content and details based on the main body and the ice field.

After reading dozens of chapters, tell me your feelings. The most basic feeling is that the author is very confused. Since you have been given cheating, then cheat openly. Opening plug-ins or being a noob will only make people feel more frustrated. If the author wants to write something profound. There are twists and turns in the story. Then just don't give it a plug-in. The current situation is not pleasing to both sides. And the plot of Monster Hunter World is very boring. For those who have never played the Monster Hunter game. Isn't this just a place to fight monsters? No matter how ingeniously designed your Ability Oath is, it will still be insipid. Because there is no sense of immersion, I can only look forward to the reward after the successful hunt at the end - you only need to watch this part. After all, those who like hunters are more willing to see who has an IQ online. The interaction of characters with different personalities. The author also writes this well. But once I got to Monster Hunting, all I saw were brainless dragons, and I had no expectations at all.

Hunter and Monster Hunter are almost not integrated into the plot. They look like the difference between the main world and the training room. The two worlds have no intersection or collision at all In addition, the story of Hunter can only be original because it is in a different period from the original plot. As a result, it was written as a stand-alone, and the popular science and conjecture articles take up a lot of space This leads to the fact that many people must be interested in it. Skip and watch until you are willing to get in touch with the world. Look at the boring sky arena. I want to show the plot of mutual suspicion and battle of wits but I can't feel how smart the protagonist is. After a long time, I just went to kill the person directly. I wrote a lot of pages just to let the protagonist know that this person wanted to harm me, so I decided to kill her As a fanfiction writer, I almost only have a little contact with Hisoka and Kate, and the rest are all in single player. For readers like me who specifically want to read fanfiction, this is no different from trying to sell someone else's meat Monster Hunter has always been in single player and has no conflict with full-time hunters, so there is no story at all. As a result, as long as the Monster Hunter chapter is full of science fiction, it is better to bring Kate in to explore together, which is more interesting than pioneering the wilderness by myself Hunter has almost no contact or interaction with the original character, so there is definitely no bond or story. The protagonist basically plays by himself. This writing method is just to borrow the background setting of Hunter. Those who want to see a real intersection with the original character may feel that 80% of the whole story is watery The plot line of Hunter is almost the same as the original, why not just synchronize the timeline? The only difference is that the protagonist didn't go to beat up Dick and Youkesin City, otherwise it would be exactly the same The following is the summary of what I really want to criticize: Fan humanities are not like fan humanities. I only read Hunter Hunter for a long time. After getting in touch with Kate and Hisoka, most of the rest of the chapter is just a sea of ​​covers. Setting up the two worlds and preventing them from intersecting is too much to write. The plot has no ups and downs, the people have no emotional highs and lows, and even Chicken Soup for the Soul is not on a stand-alone game all day long. It is even harder. The only thing I missed was that the protagonist had zero character design at the beginning, which was like starting the game directly without adjusting anything The entire plot seemed like the author didn't set an outline at all and just wrote it randomly. I have read more than 100 chapters and still haven't figured out what the protagonist wants to do and what the final goal is. How is this different from a confused Lu She who has no desire and motivation, and is forced by the player (the author) to practice and progress like a string puppet for no reason... I don't understand what's interesting about this

I have always felt that there is something missing in this "research investigation". After reading it for several days, I finally figured it out. There is a missing "research report". After hunting, you will get a hunting outfit. The more you understand about the hunting outfit, the stronger it becomes. So what kind of efforts has the protagonist made as an ecological investigator + monster hunter? The most conspicuous part of the whole article: taking photos. Such a superficial survey makes readers less immersed in the research and lacks the atmosphere of research. Because a key step of recording and feedback is missing, the description of the protagonist's behavior of shooting and tracking prey gives readers much less feeling. If you add a recording link, tracking will become less empty. If you add a feedback link, surveys and research will have a sense of immersion. For example, the first step is the recording process: While tracking the Flying Thunder Dragon, it was found that the Flying Thunder Dragon only had the ability to fly for a short time. When flying, it used... While tracking the Flying Thunder Dragon, it was discovered that the Flying Thunder Dragon would briefly stay at the top of the tree to observe other prey. ... The above is the behavior of prey, and it can also describe the surrounding ecology. Flying Thunder Dragon likes to live in groups or alone, and the surrounding environment... Is the environment that Flying Thunder Dragon likes. It can also be picked out to write about the prey in the future. Those who live in groups become solitary, which is even more special. The second step is the feedback link: Use the power of mind to materialize a research report, and record everything about the Flying Thunder Dragon in the report, what kind of special ability, what organ is borrowed or what is released, what kind of organ is it. After the investigation task is completed, the research and hunting will be completed on xx, xx, year xx. Through the research report, the reader will be given more sense of involvement and can be cheated reasonably. Why does the hunter have an HR level? Isn't this just a matter of giving the prey's life energy to the protagonist after the research report! You can also use this research report to temporarily use the ability to hunt monsters recorded in the book! For example, dragon's breath, lightning blessing, golden lion's roar or laser, etc. Mentioning HR (Hunting Level), is there also WR (Weapon Trial Level)? Don't adjust the WR settings? （🐶）

Monster Hunter World is well written, Hunter World is written like shit. This is not a world where people in a full-time hunter have a monster hunter plug-in, but the opposite. The world of monster hunter has everything you want, with rich stories of bonds, emotions, struggles, and fierce battles. There are no friends or feelings in the world of Hunter, and it is right to be surrounded by the whole world. The most important thing is that after watching it, I feel that the protagonist should not go back to the world of Hunter. There is no beautiful place at all. Why come back? You can practice in Monster Hunter. An Xin prefers to write about Monster Hunter World, which would be better.

I talk to myself throughout the article, one nonsense sentence after another, I assume one sentence and then deny it. I feel that the author is very reasonable, but in fact it is a vast ocean. The hunter world of the rich and traitorous old thief is infinitely rich, enough for you to write an essay. Sorry, no one who reads hunter fan fiction knows less than you. This kind of pretense of talking to yourself will make even your last fan fans angry.

Is there no one in Monster Hunter world? Not changing the map? Ancient forest is the only point? If it's not the only one, can the protagonist go to other maps by himself? Do you know where the desert is? Do you know where the snow mountain is? Hunting monsters purely by chance? No need for information? Want to hunt a battle-hardened dragon and still have to rely on luck? Or is it more disgusting to bring outsiders into this world?

After reading a few chapters, I still don't know what I'm talking about! The sea, you are all water 🤫

Seeing now, I feel really aggrieved, especially the part about the celebrity siblings. I obviously thought it was troublesome, so why not just break up the relationship between the two of them? How decisive I was towards that fan in the first place, but later on I became ink-stained. Is it because she is a woman that I can't bear to attack her? Vomited

The author obviously didn't classify each character in his mind. As a result, the protagonist's followers were 50-50 split. How could he still have a plan with a soldier? Five emperors versus six emperors?