Hogwarts: The Strongest Wizard

As a time-traveler, has the protagonist experienced college life before time-traveling? You can severely report those Death Eater families, and then study magic alone from the age of 2 to 9. After entering Hogwarts, you suddenly long for friendship, and feel that the friendship at Hogwarts will last a lifetime. Curious? Is the protagonist mentally mature? This looks very frustrating, let me sort it out. The protagonist is the current patriarch of Black's clan. Both his parents died. He inherited the legacy of the richest man (very rich), and no one in the clan can compete with you (because Black is the only protagonist). As a time traveler, there is a strongest wizard system. Seeing this, I thought that the protagonist can become the third generation Dark Lord. Even if you don't study black magic, you can be comparable to Dumbledore in the future. As a result, the protagonist is far inferior to the young Tom Riddle (who entered Slytherin as a Muggle wizard at that time, much worse than the protagonist, at least the protagonist is not short of money). The protagonist is a very rich and systematic time traveler (currently he has a group of not weak alchemists), but his behavior and habits are similar to those of ordinary natives. I need friendship, otherwise he will be lonely, and he has been isolated from the public. I have read many fan fictions about Slytherin for a period of time, and I felt uncomfortable in the early stages of this book. Friends, if you are a young man in your twenties and have been living in the wizarding world for almost ten years, and you have entered school and been isolated by a group of teenagers, what would you think and do?

"We have power, we fight alone, we love the dark arts, we are Azkaban"

There is something wrong with the logic. It can be said that the performance in admission is completely inconsistent with the previous one. In order to improve his isolation situation, he is crazy about adding points to his own college??? To be honest, when I was 2 years old, I could think of someone who could relieve the pressure on my assets by reporting it. A person who stayed in an ancient house until he was 11 years old could not stand the loneliness when he got to school. It is outrageous. Do you play with others every day between the ages of 2 and 9? No, according to the book, he is studying magic by himself. Then why would such a person behave so unwisely after entering school?

If you write a tile, it will be tiled when you get to the branch It is normal for authors to have their own preferences when writing novels, but if a novel has a lot of subjective colors, it will be ruined, because there will be big problems with the logic I haven't said anything about family property before, but when talking about allies, They actually chose Weasley and Longbottom. This is really cool. In my opinion, the Malfoy family values family ties, has a rich family fortune, and is very close to each other. They have the same enemies and the same difficulties, and they are sympathizers with each other. They are far more reliable than the Weasley family. After all, why did Malfoy annex Black? Malfoy is not short of money, and has a bad reputation. On the contrary, Weasley needs the heritage of the Black family more to complete the family's revival. It is nonsense to exclude Malfoy and choose Weasley. Longbottom is even more nonsense. The protagonist's family has tortured the wife of the current head of the family crazy, can he still be considered? When it comes to the branch, the lack of applause is even more problematic. With the cultivation of the Slytherin nobles, even if this person is the person who killed his father, these people will not lose their dignity. This is the noble, otherwise the inheritance will be broken long ago. Do you know how writing this makes Lao Deng feel? The Slytherin force is finished. They are divided due to internal cowardice and can be squeezed a little harder. So at this time, Slytherin does not join the team for warmth, but still engages in this kind of plot. It is simply treating the Slytherins as fools The first 10 chapters set the tone, and there should not be these problems.

They say your butt determines your head. Since he is the head of the Black family, why would he want to be friends with the Longbottoms and Weasleys while alienating the Malfoys? This doesn't make sense no matter how you think about it. Longbottom and Weasley were originally frustrated in the wizarding world, so they supported Dumbledore's views and opposed the political ideology of pure-blood supremacy. On the other hand, the protagonist is a beneficiary of the idea of ​​pure blood supremacy, but he is doing things like eating his own food and ruining his own fortune. I have lived for more than 20 years and have never met a person like this in society. Even if it is a novel, it must follow the minimum logical thinking, otherwise the reader will feel uncomfortable.

Is this a magical world or a tadpole looking for its mother? A time traveler who is now powerful, is still afraid of being alone, afraid of being ostracized by his classmates, and longs to be friends with little kids??? The troll must have sucked your brain dry.

A strange novel, suspected of being a self-pleasure novel. Let's not talk about anything else. As mentioned before, the system draws three cards and then draws one card. The comments have been pointed out for you but they have not been changed. The second one is the transfiguration bug. I found it out by changing into a sniffer on the train. This is already poisonous enough. Then there is a list of magical creatures that cannot be transformed. Do you know it or not? You didn't copy and paste it from someone else's book, did you?

I originally thought the setting was pretty good, but I was shocked by the setting of a time-traveling adult protagonist that requires the friendship of an 11-year-old child.

The author should consider going to an elementary school for a few years to see if you can play with a group of brats. An adult's desire to be friends with a group of elementary school students is really poisonous. A time traveler with no ambitions leads a system and ends up living like a elementary school student. It's poisonous.

I just want to ask, who is the heroine?