A Carefree Life in Evernight

I hope the author can persevere in writing Jiang Ye! Awesome! 🙂

After reading Chapter 52, this is my limit and I can't bear it anymore. Author, you have raised the protagonist's seniority status to a very high level, and then forced him into the experience of those juniors. Don't you think it is very blunt? While you were describing how deep and sincere the brotherhood in Houshan was. While writing about Mo Shanshan copying the chicken soup post, Ning Que peeked into his shower (I know I didn't see anything), Ning Que hid behind Mo Shanshan, etc... I really want to ask you, what would you do if Mo Shanshan was seen by Ning Que? Just one beating and that's it? Is that worthy of Mo Shanshan? Or kill or gouge out eyes? Is that worthy of the brotherhood you forcibly created? Do the senior brothers and sisters in the back mountain think so? It's such a mess Okay, basically Ning Que didn't see anything, so he was just spying on your wife taking a shower! It just passed without a plague? Continue to eulogize your blunt brotherhood? I am really speechless. It is best not to write this kind of plot. Since you are sure that Mo Shanshan is the heroine, then completely separate her from Ning Que and avoid any misunderstandings! Okay, I've read fifty chapters, that's all.

Two recommendation votes every day, the author will give me a reward

Readership** 465895921 Everyone is welcome to join

This novel completely follows the plot. Except for the protagonist being with Shanshan, nothing else can be changed. Just copy the plot exactly. To be honest, I have not read the original novel in its entirety, but the main plot of the TV series has not changed at all. Change, all the elders who are related to the protagonist deserve to die. Even the simplest Li Hunyuan copied it. This part is the most breathtaking to me. He obviously knows the plot and is still acting like a ****. It is better to just let him disappear. Anyway, the writing is no different from the audience.

Is this how the sixth lens is divided? I haven't read the original work! Demon, Apocalypse, Wuju, and Wuliang are all at the same level, they are all the sixth mirror, but they are moving in different directions. Just like the sixth-grade mathematics, Chinese, English and geography textbooks, they are both sixth-grade textbooks, but the subjects are different. You are so clueless😅😅😅

I am invincible in the world. If I don't love mountains, I love Quni.

The last two chapters are really poisonous, with inexplicable plots. You can even kill children and skin them, npnp. What on earth were you thinking about when you wrote it?

The beginning is very awkward, and Sangsang is the younger sister of the protagonist? Is your brain flooded? Even if the protagonist's name is Zhen Yu, is he still the eldest son of the general's mansion who was destroyed? I want to know how the plot is completed? Ning Que and Sang Sang appeared together, and then Sang Sang became his sister? Bull!

Can you stop writing about Ning Que all the time? This is the bad thing about new writers. They always ignore priorities, so there is no need to write about the protagonist, and he has no way to advance? Entering Tianqi? Or have you become a demon? What plans does he have for the difficulties the academy will face in the future, or should he wait for Ning Que's finale!! Speechless