Huang Liang Asked

The mountains and rivers are safe, there is sorrow in the world, Qingming, I wish you good health. 😳😳😳

Can you imagine that I am still working overtime 😭? I really work for how long for how much I get paid. Hey, the epidemic is over, and we will resume double holidays this week. It is expected that we will have double updates from Saturday onwards. I am sorry for the gentlemen who gave me rewards and votes. However, I will not stop reading or cut off the book. Please believe in a man who works until two o'clock every day. 😁

The few sentences in Chapter 44 are very good 👍. I like it. I have read it many times. It is interesting. The writing is getting more and more exciting. I can continue reading this book.

The story of this book is probably what I want to write the most since I have been reading novels for more than ten years. An ancient world full of poems, songs, gods, demons and ghosts. If I can't finish writing this book, I don't think there is anything else in this world worth persisting on. So, again, I may not be able to maintain stable updates for more than two updates due to some things in reality (ps: To be honest, maintaining this level of writing style is really only at a speed of 1000/h at most), but even if I work until three or four in the morning, I will definitely keep updating, it will never be unfinished, and it will definitely not be super-supervised. This book, no matter what the score is, is guaranteed to be two million words, so let's talk about it here 🪖 (ps: I'm still putting this flag here.)

The writing is good, but it always feels like it's missing some flavor. The author may have wanted to present the protagonist as a monk who is aloof from the outside world, but also involved in the world, but he always felt that the pace of the period was not grasped well, that is, it was not exciting enough, and the performance was not good.

The plot in the first few scenes at the beginning was awkwardly written in ink, and the beginning with clouds and mountains and fog was tiring and unattractive to read. I've read four chapters, but I'm not sure what's behind.

I've read Ke Qiyuan's book Ke Qiyuan is reading you, which is bland and tasteless.

The female ghost wanted to kill the protagonist at first. The protagonist didn't care at all about helping the female ghost practice and become a father and a mother. The female fox demon plotted against the protagonist openly. The protagonist was not angry at all and happily entered the trap. If it were a male ghost, he would probably be killed by demons soon. Even though he is a human being, he still has to look at demons and monsters from the perspective of equality between humans and demons.

The writing is actually good, but the issue of female ghosts is not handled very well. At that time, the female ghost already wanted to kill someone. If it were not the protagonist, she would have been killed by someone else. If she killed his enemy, there would be no problem. But implicating other innocent people is unjustifiable in every aspect. It is said that all living beings are the same and there is no difference. There is also a saying that people kill people and pay for their lives with their lives. But as long as the ghost murderer eliminates some of his own resentment, nothing will happen to him?

I cast three recommendation votes today, come on

Damn, a person who cultivates immortality is always scheming and scheming, and he also writes a lot of classical Chinese, which is very painful to watch.

I don't understand why he doesn't go home. Didn't he have a dream for thirty years? Isn't it the time before waking up or dreaming? Why is there only one name in the family?

In fact, what I want to know most is whether the author can persevere. After all, this book is not bad, but the results are a bit poor.