Great Sui State Master

Brother, keep writing. I'm not suitable for this path anymore. It's not that good if I write a book by myself. Or maybe I'll try writing again later when I think I can do it. But I still like reading your novels. I remember I started reading them with "The Factory Man". I see that I am still following the novels you wrote. At that time, when I first read "The Factory Man", I felt that it was written by a novice. But I am more patient and can read it slowly, unless I really can't stand it or I am no longer interested. But as I watched it, my eyes suddenly lit up, everything became interesting, and I was fascinated by it. The writing, character descriptions, fighting, etc. Were all what I liked, so I followed it all the way to the current "The Master of the Sui Dynasty". I started reading online novels in high school, and I have been reading them for seven or eight years now. I used to feel that I had read a lot of novels, and I could name just a few good novels that I had read. I can say they were tied for first place. But after reading the novels you wrote, I felt that those novels were no longer good, and I gave the first place to you in an instant. The novels you wrote are among the best among all the novels I have read. The novel you wrote, I won't comment on anything else. What attracts me is that, like Marvel's Avengers, all the protagonists have relationships and intersections. They don't exist independently, they coexist in your world. This is also what I like very much. I just want to see what kind of story will happen between them, which makes people very excited. Also, some of the laugh points are also very funny. This is also because your characters are well written and vivid. Each character has obvious personality characteristics, which makes the laugh points appear natural and not embarrassing. Therefore, when reading the novel you wrote, you really can't miss a word. You have to read it carefully word by word, otherwise God knows what kind of excitement you will miss. In addition to the laughs, many places are super exciting and exciting, making people feel excited and getting goosebumps. I won't say more about this. I believe many people will have the same thoughts as me after watching it! It's just that I didn't think so when I finished watching "The Factory Gong" because there was no second protagonist at that time. But after watching "Gongsun", "Gongsun" is different from other Three Kingdoms time travels I have watched. The ending is in my imagination, but the path I have taken is something I have never seen. The fate of Sun Liu is also what I want to see. At that time, I was thinking that it was really not worth it for Sun Ce to have such a younger brother. When watching "Weapons", I was looking forward to it from the beginning, what will happen when Xia Yi meets Guan Yu and Lu Bu, and who will be stronger and weaker in the fight. As for "The Imperial Master" that I am following now, I also want to see the story of Lu Liangsheng after he goes to modern times as soon as possible. I also want to see the fifth, sixth and seventh novels you wrote. I used to read your novels, and I wasn't afraid of people laughing at them. I had read the pirated copies for a long time, but later I found that reading the pirated copies was still boring. No one commented or interacted with me, which made a lot of fun less fun. You couldn't see some of the changes in the content, so I came back and read all three of the previous books. I swiped it once and replenished all my subscriptions. My daily recommendation tickets are for you. One ticket is a lot. I will give it to you as soon as I receive one monthly ticket. You have to write it down carefully and not let us down. Otherwise, my essay of several hundred words will be in vain to express my misunderstanding! Finally, I would like to say that what I am most looking forward to is that your novel can be made into a movie, or a web series or animation. As long as it is not too bad and has too many flaws, I will definitely support it. If I can see your novel on the screen, I think there will be no regrets. Come on, brother, write well, for your own dreams, for the people who support you, for Bai Ning, Gongsun Zhi, Xia Yi, Lu Liangsheng, and for those people you wrote with flesh and blood!

Some of the supporting characters are quite disgusting and the plot is a bit unreasonable

After reading twenty-six chapters, let's talk about my feelings. It's really inappropriate that there are so few recommendations for this book. To be honest, I've read a lot of books, and this one is very well written so far! I can think logically, and my IQ is online. I'm not brainless, and I'm not trying to be pretentious. I can only say it's a good book that has been buried! Currently there are only recommendation votes, please wait until next month for monthly votes! I hope the subsequent plots are okay, I will continue to read them, and I will subscribe to support them when I subscribe to the chapters! Come on! I hope the results will get better and better! Don't forget your original intention! Write a good book seriously! Recommend!

How can I put it this way? I haven't read the paid chapters yet. I also like the protagonist and the daily warm descriptions, and I don't have any dislikes. However, I couldn't read the part about praying for rain in the northwest. I think this is worth elaborating on. The northwest is a bit anxious. First of all, there is no transition from the capital to the northwest and some other developments. It's a bit uncomfortable. (I don't count the excessive daily life at home. The strength and adventures are not strange.) Secondly, Qiu Yu, I always feel that the writing is not satisfactory. The villain has no IQ, which makes the protagonist even less intelligent. It is written by a black hand, but the exploration of the conspiracy feels very abrupt, and then Qiu Yu himself turns into a half-demon. If this is what I thought, The level of foreshadowing is a bit low, and it should be improved. The whole story feels too bland, and sometimes it's too everyday, which is not good at all. I think you can learn from your writing style in terms of fighting scenes and strategy design. It's too bland, the sensational part is too stiff, and the saint's behavior is too confusing. The sense of fatigue is too obvious. I suggest you do some foreshadowing that first suppresses and then rises. In short, there must be ups and downs and "pits". It is not good if the writing is too peaceful. I suggest you learn Fenghuo (general manager), cuckoo bird for drama, and three scum for burying pits. In this way, adding your thoughts and the meaning of the book will definitely bring you to a higher level.

I remember the prince is not Yang Yong? When did he become Yang Guang?

After reading Chapter 139, I felt like "It's great!!!" The writing in this chapter (Chapter 139) is very exciting, just like a tea lover drinking a cup of good tea. All kinds of urban life are described, the characters have outstanding personality characteristics and full images, and the plot moves forward without any delay. On the contrary, it's wonderful! It is comparable to the first chapter of the four famous novels "Journey to the West". When I was a child, I only read "Journey to the West" for the plot. When I grow up, I read "Journey to the West" for the details of the text. In the details of the pen and ink, you can see the author's writing skills! Compared with the first chapter of "Journey to the West", there is also this detailed description: "jumping trees and climbing branches, picking flowers and fruits; throwing marbles, what?; Running in sand nests, building pagodas; catching dragonflies and throwing wax; praying to God and worshiping Bodhisattva; pulling kudzu and weaving; catching lice, biting and pinching; arranging sweaters and picking nails; pushing and wiping; pushing and pressing; pulling and pulling, let him be stubborn under the green pine forest, Cleaning along the green water stream. The next day, the monkeys gathered the fairy fruits, laid out the stone stools and tables, and arranged the fairy wine and delicacies: The golden pills were played with waxed cherries, which were red and yellow. The color was really sweet; the ripe plums, which were red and yellow, had a sour taste. Longan has sweet flesh and thin skin; fire lychee has a small red core. The branches are thick and the loquats have buds and leaves. The shade is like fat and creamy cheese. The red sacs and black seeds are ripe for watermelon. The four-petal yellow-skinned persimmon is cracked, and the red sand grains are like fire crystal beads. The hard flesh of taro and chestnut can be used for tea, and the hazelnut and grape can be used for wine. The dishes are filled with oranges, sugarcane, and oranges. Cooked yam and boiled polygonatum are cooked in a stone pot over a low fire. How can the world be more peaceful than the beautiful monkey king?

The author's writing is very good, and the book seems quite comfortable. Don't be fooled by some of the comments in the book review section.

I have read many books about the Sui Dynasty but not many. This one is considered a masterpiece.

I don't know if I should recommend it to others, but this book brought me tears. I have a heart full of kindness, chivalry, and true feelings. Sometimes when I read a book, I suddenly wonder what kind of person the author would be. If he were strong and strong, he would be a chivalrous man who would help when the road is rough. If he was a scholar, he would probably be a humble person who is as clear-eyed as jade in the world. The characters and stories in the book seem to really depict a world of flesh and blood, with all living creatures. The author's lack of writing skills did not show it, but he could see that he was a humble scholar. There are thousands of words in my heart, but I can only be a stable bookworm and see the hearty world in the book. As the author said, you write slowly and I read slowly. The last sentence should be addressed to the viewer. Don't worry about the comments when you read it for the first time. Read it in one go and immerse yourself in it.

The martial arts master of the Song Dynasty is the master of the factory, the Warriors of the Three Kingdoms of the White Wolf, the super powers of the weapons master, and now the fantasy Sui and Tang Dynasties of the Sui Dynasty. Will there be immortals and demons in the Qin Dynasty in the other three books?

____I have been cultivating for more than ten years, and now I have set foot on the golden elixir avenue. I am playing this worldly world, and I want to stay in this vast network to respond to the cause and effect of that avenue and receive a true disciple with excellent qualifications. Anyone who sees my message here can reply here. This is also the first test for me to test you. I am waiting for good news!

You can also go up to attack the ignorant king and the rebellious ministers, write down the nine springs, and hang a sword on your waist.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the presence of the imperial court is too weak. I'm sorry for the word "imperial court".

From the factory owner to the Great Master of the Sui Dynasty, this book has a unique charm in its portrayal of characters and so on. I like every character very much. I hope the author will work harder (ง •̀_•́)ง👍👍👍

It's good-looking, very good in every aspect, and can be read by old bookworms. I have a worry. The author must have an outline. I can see that there may be a tragedy in this book in the future, so I'm sorry, I am quite afraid of tragedy now. This book may be sweet at the beginning and bitter at the end. I don't want to taste bitterness again, at least not for this period of time. In short, the author's writing is very good, at least it seems like this so far, but now I am worried that the subsequent development of this book will be tragic, so I'm sorry, I offer a monthly ticket, and I will come again when I have the opportunity.

The recommendation has been submitted, the writing is good, keep up the good work

With a pen in your hand, you can write thousands of beautiful articles.

It can depict the prosperity of mountains, rivers and the prosperity of the world.

Kill the demons and monsters and wipe out all injustices in the world.

It's really well written, good luck to the author.

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I think the first few pictures are a bit annoying to me. I always feel that the author is perfunctory. At first, I thought it was a masterpiece. Really, from the first few pictures of a person's article, I can tell whether he has the potential to be a masterpiece. Then I felt uncomfortable instantly. It was okay in the village, but I felt something was wrong in the capital city. First, you buy a donkey first and then a pen. When you get to him, you buy a pen first and then the protagonist asked about buying a pen halfway. Then my father said that you can also buy an older one. Secondly, it is very rare to spend two words to write literacy. Logically speaking, the pen shop is equivalent to our high-end clothing store. , The migrant workers were kicked out at first when they entered, and then they said that we are all tens of millions, and then the contradiction was highlighted. At this point, the waiter slowly introduced it, and then ten cents changed to fifteen cents. I don't think this part was right. Later, the protagonist showed off his power and bought the pen and grabbed some paper and ink. I remember he was just a child. He is still a child from a rural area who has never been to the city a few times. Why do I feel that this child was instantly possessed by a later generations of Mo bully youths? There are also some inexplicable plots interspersed in the middle. I suspect that the author made major changes, but did not delete them. Overall, it won't be a masterpiece, but I can't say for sure. I hope it slaps me in the face.

It's better than I thought. I didn't dare to read the author's books. There is always a trace of literary youth. I started to write the last book, but always gave up halfway. But with the last book, I began to find that the author no longer stubbornly splashes his literary youth. The story is indeed like the moon, which should wax and wane, but it should bring light and happiness to readers. Only such books can be considered mainstream. Niche books do not mean bad books, but It is definitely not a good book. A book that cannot be recognized by most people may be satisfied in the shouts of a small group of book fans, but it also loses its way to the top. Because it lives in the pride of itself and a few people, it is unable and does not want to see clearly the mainstream. It is paranoid that it is following the herd, and everyone is drunk. My solitary arrogance will gradually destroy the enthusiasm. After all, enthusiasm comes from life, and if I can't survive, where will the enthusiasm come from? What shocked me the most was that the author was not defeated by the success of Chang Gong and the gap between the following books. Every book is seeking changes. I don't know if I can be considered a mainstream reader, but I think such a book can definitely meet the mainstream market positioning. Maybe the indigenous people The setting scared away a large group of readers who were originally a little afraid of the author, but if I kept reading, I really felt that this book had found a balance between relaxation and literary youth. I can't go wrong on this path. I hope this book can be written well and get the grades it deserves.

Nowadays, some readers have a bit of a TikTok keyboard orientation. Let's not talk about how much they read. They wish they could read all the books. Don't always use your own set of unconventional aesthetics to read every work. In fact, if you look at some inexplicable books that have made it to the list, you can see that the book reading crowd is quite young. In fact, You may not understand the pain of some of us old bookworms. In the current situation, we have no books to read, and it is very painful. It is rare to find a good fairy grass. Don't always criticize. Some people think that sacrificing oneself for others is pure hypocrisy. The human nature you yourself talk about is complicated. Have you ever thought that what is higher than human nature is faith? From a young child in a mountain village to gaining power, since there is the possibility of losing control, why are there no scholars who have read poetry and books and know how to care about thousands of people? Why do some people think that loving all living beings is disgusting? The bullshit arguments that are so popular are really weird. The protagonist is never merciless in killing people, and he is never timid in saving people. It's really funny that you can say this to someone with such an innocent heart.

What kind of crazy trend is there now? There are a lot of women in driving novels, all kinds of marginalia, all kinds of easy ones. Serious novels either have no heroine or only one heroine. If you write some emotional scenes, you will be called a harem. Just like eunuchs, the ancient background forces a single heroine, who is also Shi Lezhi.

I opened it over and over again, but ended up getting stuck on Saving the Vixen. They were too kind, too simple, and I could feel that the author wanted to portray a saint, a savior who would save all people in the world from fire and water, but he was too overconfident. I am also a good person, and I have foreseen the various betrayals that I will encounter in the future. The image of a rotten good person who is scarred and still insists on doing good, it affects people's mood too much, just like when I saw myself. . . Reading is a happy thing. The protagonist will definitely be stabbed in the back. If he is not betrayed, he will always be on tenterhooks. Being stabbed in the back makes it very uncomfortable to watch. I wanted to read it many times, but finally decided to leave. Please don't criticize me with a glass heart, thank you.

This book is so well written! It's a positive book! It is also one of the few books in Qidian that is not biased against Buddhism or Taoism. Thanks to my circle of friends for recommending this book. Like👍! The first few dozen chapters are written with exquisite writing, characterization, pastoral scenery, and warmth of rural neighbors... It really makes people feel like they are recalling the rural days of the 1980s and 1990s. It's a pity that I don't have much money to reward, so I will give you a small reward of 5,000 coins. Come on, author! Full subscription support.

From chasing the first sequence to the Great Sui Dynasty, I couldn't read the rest This book is really comfortable to read! The plot and characters are so good. Haha, the eight kings, the jealous protector Hong Lian, the Taoist priest who takes the blame, Lao Donkey, and the sister who makes clothes for Master Toad. It's interesting to think about Master Toad's melancholy appearance in his little coat. Needless to say, the male protagonist is very immersive and you can feel his changes and growth along the way. I like this kind of purposeful protagonist Rather than those who carry hatred, fight against the sky and the earth, upgrade to grab treasures and clear dungeons, take revenge and change maps, and repeat it again As expected, you can always find good books when you open the starting point Sanjiang every once in a while Do you have any recommendations for books of the same type?

The character creation, writing style, and plot connection are all okay, but after reading more than 200 chapters to avenging the teacher who was sentenced to death by the emperor, I felt that it was weird to read. After thinking about it carefully, I finally realized that the protagonist has become an immortal, and there are no immortal masters around the emperor? Just a national master? The emperor himself can't cultivate immortality? Even with the big setting of A Chinese Ghost Story, why did the emperor tear down the city wall while painting at Jinshi's place? The emperor didn't realize the difference between immortals and mortals, and he went to kill his teacher? Any other book about cultivating immortals would be equivalent to a mortal seeking death in front of the golden elixir. The source of the violation was finally found. For the logic party, this setting is particularly uncomfortable.