A Chat Group for the Overlord

There are aliens in The Adventures of Jackie Chan. The episode at Stonehenge in London, England, saw an alien spacecraft appear at the end. In addition to spells and masks , there are magic items in Jackie Chan's Adventures: The Lord has a spell tracker, a crystal ball that can bring people back to the present after traveling to the past, a petrifying potion, and a collection of dark spells with Tara's avatar. Most of Dad's magic equipment is homemade. There is a box to shield the energy of spells, and Wei Zheng's jar. Daolong has a Tang Fan Rubik's Cube, a ball that can seal the soul and view the memories of the sealed person. In addition, there is also the cup of life in Mantab of the Lost City that can keep people young forever. The Eye of Aurora, which has the ability to move through space in the ancient underground city of Venice, allows people to instantly reach wherever they want to go. A magic scroll with powerful magic power that only appears in the Lotus Temple during the full moon The Saint's Staff in the Saint's Temple The Armor of the Eighth Immortal God The Shiva Hand in the Shiva Temple enables the wearer to have four arms. The Monkey King Puppet at Kai Qing Antique Shop in San Francisco The Magic Origami of the Origami Thief in Paris The temple on the mountain of Bhutan contains a gem that can transform and possess powerful destructive power. The cat statue in Daniel's little kamikaze palace that can turn people into half-human, half-cat by scratching them Ireland's ancestral-cursed Gilani emeralds The Riktaji Sutra that can dry up the Ganges River The gloves that can be stolen automatically from the treasure of the Greenbeard Pirates The mirror that seals the Mirror God in Dad's hometown is a memory gem that can go back to the past and change history. The dragon's tooth near San Francisco that can resurrect the Holy Lord. The magic ball of Ma Jiu Wizard that can summon blue soldiers. In the troupe run by dad's friend the beetle, there are magic paints that can make people invisible and pass through walls, a history book about the years that can change Australia's history, and a series of messy magic items.

The eight demons are not low in combat power, but their performance is extremely embarrassing. There is a reason for this. It is a seal. The eight demons were sealed in hell, and their wisdom and strength were consumed by the region. But the Holy Lord was different. He entered the palace for the second time. First, he was sealed by the immortal gods and imprisoned in hell. Afterwards, the eight demons sent the Holy Lord out of hell, intending to let the Holy Lord rescue them. Of course, the Holy Lord did not keep his promise and re-established a human kingdom. At this time, Lope sealed it again, turning him into a stone statue, and split its power into 12 spells. Therefore, it can be judged that the combat power of the eight demons is very high, because the Holy Lord is not the boss of the eight demons. They are ancient demon wizards. Their main power lies in wisdom, but these have been obliterated by the endless time and space of hell, and they only have the most essential power left. The Holy Lord is different from them. He spent most of his time in the human world, so his wisdom and power have not been weakened too much. This is why the Holy Lord's performance is greater than that of other demons. Of course there is another misunderstanding about the 12 spells. Many people think that the 12 Talismans gave the Holy Lord the power, but in fact it was Lope who sealed the Holy Master's power into the 12 Talismans. The abilities of the 12 Talismans originally belonged to the Holy Lord. According to theory, Ximu is actually the most intelligent. He has become one of the eight demon wizards by relying on his own knowledge and wisdom. But the curse of hell is especially aimed at wisdom, so Ximu was weakened the most. But judging from his performance in the animation, he is indeed the smartest among the wizards.

Author, let me tell you, you have to solve the hidden problem of the Holy Lord. What hidden problems does the Holy Lord have? He was sealed in hell, and when he escaped, he gave it to the other seven demons, each of whom had a soul, so his soul was missing. After he came out, he was sealed by Lope, and his ability was stripped away, so he lost his ability again. During the period of being sealed, no I know who knocked off the Dragon Fang and weakened his original strength, so the Holy Lord looks so weak, so the problem he has to solve is the hell seal, Seven Souls, the sealing spell Lopez added to him, solves the Holy Lord's ability, and it is impossible to be stripped away at will, and then there is the Dragon Fang. This way he is the overlord of ancient times.

I was persuaded to back down by the author Xi Itachi's strength. What's wrong with standing tall is that I am a small person. Itachi is just an uneducated young African soldier. If he were to be such a saint, he would not let Sasuke go. Other children, babies, and women should die if your brother can survive. 😅However, there is a saying that the more weasels in Japan, the better.

The subject matter of the author is good, and the writing style is not too bad, but he just likes to do sexy things. Why do you have to support that female student? Picture what? Just for fun and to satisfy your own evil tastes? There are so many plots worth digging into, why do we have to stick to that female student? And don't you think that the presence of several characters now is very low? What is the role of Matou Kariya's appearance? Just to save Sakura and kill bugs? There are already many people in the book review area who are dissatisfied with these plots of yours. If you don't explain why you are still here to smash up the female students, what are you trying to do? Engage in reader mentality? I also know that writing a book is difficult, but you can't do this either,

Infinite themes like chat groups can't go far. It's very interesting in the early stage, but in the later stage, it becomes fatigued and the power collapses. There are also different worlds with different rules, power systems, and settings. It's easy to get lost. It is recommended to write a single world.

Opinions on this book: 1. The character design collapsed, Kaz became a licking dog, Loki's tool man, and Sasuke. . . 2. The plot is dull, there is no main line, it is daily routine 3. The supporting characters are humanized and backgrounded, and the chat group is like a group of people, so it is better to give up. 4. Frivolous, the whole book is too frivolous, no matter the language, characters, plot or 5. No idea, except for the Rocky chapter with a little new surprise (but the ancient character's design collapsed, the author let himself go, and the bad taste was excessive), it is basically the same as the fanfic ten years ago, changing the tragedy and leaving everything unchanged. Revision comments: 1. If the Holy Lord is localized, it will be more interesting if he is not a time traveler 2. Strengthen the logical cause and effect, which can be linked together like "Kingdom Bloodline" and form its own main line 3. There must be subsequent development of the world of different group members. After Esdeath became the emperor, she suppressed everything, but the middle and lower-level bureaucrats of the empire are still there, and all the darkness has not changed. Someone must stand up in the darkness again. Isn't this another big plot? This is cool! ! ! 4. Let your imagination run wild, "The Master of Dreams of All Realms" does a great job. What changes have occurred in the world of Death? ? ? Basically nothing! 5. Following the main line, the Holy Lord world has been around for so long, what about the Saint Seiyas? Walloon? In the Holy Lord world, you are useless except for the borrowed Holy Lord settings and a Tara. The world of the Holy Lord originally emphasized the balance of yin and yang. If the Holy Lord is so powerful, the Saint Warriors should have appeared long ago and be stronger. 6. Personality is very important. Changing the personality in fan fiction is the most taboo, as it will ruin your popularity.

Before reading a book, read the table of contents and comments first😎 What the hell is Josuke Uchiha? jo blows? Brainless substitute? This thing is too disgusting, the substitute ability has no logic at all 😤 Especially the two bugs of time stop and time delete are completely against the will of the world. The key is that there is no consumption and side effects, so it can only be used in Jo's world. Using it in other worlds is purely seeking death. The will of the world will crush the user to death or kick him out of the world in an instant.

If you write the protagonist as a true Holy Lord, he will definitely be better than now. The protagonist is not worthy of the name Holy Lord. It's better to let the Holy Lord get a chat group. The charm of the protagonist is far worse than that of the Holy Lord.

Snake Grass, I sincerely say, come back and start a new book. Your Pirates book is really among the top three from the starting point. It has the taste of Pirates and is particularly graphic. It is really good to use your strengths in the areas you are good at! I'm really looking forward to your new book, keep it up! ! !