A Chat Group for the Overlord

Jackie Chan Adventures There are aliens, in the episode about Stonehenge in London, England. Finally, the alien spaceship appeared. Besides the talismans and masks... In addition, the magical items in Jackie Chan Adventures include: Shendu's...

The eight demons are quite powerful, but their performance was extremely embarrassing, and there are reasons for this. It was a seal. The eight demons were sealed in Hell, their wisdom and power eroded by the underworld. But Shendu was different; he was imprisoned twice. First, he was sealed by an immortal god and imprisoned in Hell.

Author, let me tell you, you need to solve Shendu's hidden problems. What are Shendu's hidden problems? He was sealed in Hell, and when he escaped, he gave each of the other seven demons a soul, so his soul is incomplete. After escaping, he was sealed again by Lopez, and his abilities were stripped away, so he is incomplete again.

I was turned off by the author's attempts to whitewash Itachi. All that talk about being superior and selfless. Itachi was just an uneducated African boy soldier. If he were truly a saint, he wouldn't have spared Sasuke. So, if his brother could live, all other children, babies, and women should die? 😅 But to be fair, in Japan, there should be more Itachis the better.

The subject matter is good, and the writing isn't bad, but the author just loves to pull off bizarre plot twists. Why insist on supporting that female student? What's the point? Just for fun, to satisfy your own twisted sense of humor? There are plenty of plot points worth exploring, why fixate on that female student? And don't you think some of the characters already have very little presence?

Chat groups and similar infinite-world themes don't go far. They're fun at first, but later on, they become tiresome and the power levels collapse. Also, different worlds have different rules, power systems, and settings, making it easy for them to flop. I suggest writing about a single world.

Book review: 1. Character development is ruined; Kars becomes a simp, Loki is just a tool, and Sasuke... 2. The plot is weak, there's no main storyline, and the slice-of-life scenes are just filler. 3. Supporting characters are reduced to mere tools or background figures; the chat group is a collective portrait of people talking, abandoning the enjoyment of the moment.

Before reading a book, first look at the table of contents and reviews. 😎 What the heck is Uchiha Josuke? JoJo hype? Brainless Stand users? This thing is so damn discouraging; the Stand ability makes absolutely no sense. 😤 In particular, the time-stop and time-delete abilities are completely against the will of the world, and the key is that they have no cost or side effects.

If you had written the protagonist with a truly authentic Shendu personality, it would be far better than it is now. The protagonist doesn't deserve the name Shendu at all. It would have been better to give Shendu a chat group; the protagonist's charisma is nowhere near Shendu's.

Snake Grass, honestly, please come back and start a new book! Your One Piece writing is truly among the top three on Qidian. You captured the essence of One Piece perfectly, with incredibly vivid imagery. It's wonderful that you're playing to your strengths in your area of ​​expertise! I'm really looking forward to your new book. Keep it up!!!