After Clearing the Game, I Became the Villain BOSS

I originally thought that the protagonist would be able to travel back in time. Start the road to invincibility in the harem, and become a crystal god But I found that the author decided to make it a little more interesting, and then it was almost there. Now the overall framework is similar, the three major companies are above everyone, the next layer is the Public Security Bureau, then the civilians, and then the border The edge hammer is also intentional, allowing them to live too comfortably, which will cause resistance. Then with the superficial support of the Public Security Bureau, the border and civilians are increasingly fighting back and forth, and the three major companies only need to sit back and watch the dog fight Maybe when the author just started writing, he changed the overall painting style in the process of writing slowly, which made it a bit awkward. When the new supporting characters first came out, each one was more powerful than the other. Later, when he joined the company, the whole story was misfired, but it was still pretty good It is just too short and I can't finish it one chapter a day (The author works hard every day, it is not difficult to produce high-quality products, double-sided salted fishʕ •ᴥ•ʔ...)

I originally thought that the previous book was not so poisonous and I could read more about it, but it turned out to be very poisonous. In cyberpunk, everyone can die anyway. Why do you think this is a plot routine that is disgusting? Readers, after finishing it, let's go back to the cool novel routine and no one has to die, right? It's just one word, disgusting.

I gave up. I can only say that it was fine in the past. After the company was established, it became more and more awkward.

First of all, the early stage of this book is very good, the control is very good, and it creates a very interesting world view for readers. It combines the elements of Cyber ​​2077 and virtual games, and it can capture the interest of readers in the first place, and it has the flavor of Super Mechanic. But the further the plot develops, the more things start to go wrong. The character of the male protagonist is not three-dimensional enough. The author really wanted to show the three-dimensional and diverse character of the male protagonist, but it may be that the arrangement of plot conflicts is not appropriate enough. In short, the presentation is still too flat. It gives people the feeling that even if I read the full text, it is difficult to even think of a few words to describe the male protagonist in my mind in the first place. And I can understand that the author thinks that the male protagonist's current strength is too shallow and cannot compete with giant companies, but the important and exciting part of the prophetic novel is that he can predict the enemy's prophet and arrange everything many steps in advance. Even if we force the explanation that the plot development is out of control, as a time traveler with full-scale hyperamnesia, the male protagonist should be able to see more and think more from his perspective than we readers can see and think from the window perspective when reading the work. In some places, readers will think that there is a better way to handle it, why can't the male protagonist not do it. If a gold-fingered work makes readers question the protagonist and feel that they can do better than the protagonist, then naturally there will be a lot of dissatisfaction.

Although the characters are very common, they are well shaped and the template characters are written with flesh and blood. After all, the writing is very good. In terms of plot, the main plot is still well controlled in the early stage, but the pace is too fast later and the transition plot is too urgent. Although some plot arrangements in the middle are not ideal, it has its own ideas, and with the compensation of excellent writing skills, it can still touch the heartstrings. It's just the description of the emotional line that really makes me unable to hold my nerves. The male video is full of flavor mixed with a trace of strange, green and astringent female video emotions? The two-dimensional house flavor revealed from time to time makes me satisfied again. When I was watching Qi Ling, I really felt that the author used too much force in his portrayal. He suddenly said "that year, she was XX years old, she was XX years old" twice, which was really difficult to express. The romantic style in the literature of pain suddenly appeared and twisted twice, and it made me miss my face. If it's a deliberate prank, then I'm sorry, it's because I'm blind and I swallowed it wholeheartedly to offend. But during the date with the male protagonist, it was like being beheaded. I know you want to describe the female protagonist as someone who is very good at it, a maternal solo harvester, and an innocent killer. Who can not love awsl? But it seemed that the description was too strong. At that moment, the male protagonist became ↓ in my heart. Fortunately, it was fun for me to watch, otherwise it would be really poisonous.

Sister Yu's level has always been online. I actually didn't feel that it was watery. The emotional support and plot are very good. It feels a bit like the collapse of the past. The protagonist is really disgusting. We originally came to see the dark flow, but the protagonist is a positive character. The book is very good, but the part of saving people is really disgusting. It is comparable to Qi Ling's 8 hours a day. She can obviously sell hundreds of thousands of people to climb up, but she has to save people.

In the first three chapters, I thought it was a bit outrageous. The interaction between the protagonist and the mercenaries was really difficult to resist. One kills without blinking, while the other jumps around casually. This feeling of being possessed by the protagonist's aura and causing everyone around him to lower their heads is too obvious. A name makes a female mercenary kill her teammates without hesitation, but when it comes to the protagonist, nothing happens. The protagonist also leaked a name to manipulate the other party. The most outrageous thing is that the female mercenary was also manipulated. No, I don't understand. Who gives you the courage to do such a thing? Female mercenaries are outrageous enough. They can be manipulated and beaten casually. I think the protagonist is just like that. Kicking in the balls, going through the back door, pulling out nails, pulling out hair, beating, forced suffocation, etc. I, an ordinary person, can think of so many ways to torture anyone for a long time, but a mercenary who kills without blinking can't think of it? The mission is to bring an experimenter back, but it doesn't say that the experimenter cannot be tortured. As long as it doesn't cause too many wounds, it's acceptable. I don't believe how a mercenary who kills without batting an eye, especially one who keeps his identity secret so tightly, wouldn't want to know who the informant is as soon as possible. In that case, the priority of the task is no longer the highest. Knowing who betrayed him is the highest priority. I don't understand how the protagonist dares to have sex with a female mercenary. Did he clear the game before time travel? In the course of a daily mission, a mercenary randomly captures a target who knows the name that he has hidden for a long time. There is definitely something wrong with this mission, after all, people are captured at random. At this time, you should think about who did it. The person who did it must have told more than one person. After all, the base is so big and the target is not unique, so the targets in the mission may all know their identity. At this time, pry out from the mouth of the person in front of you which person behind you is the most correct choice. Then what is the fastest way to make people talk? It is execution. People without professional training and strong will will never be able to withstand it. As a result, this plot direction makes people's eyes dark, and they even give out benefits 😰. It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist with such a head-lowering aura.

I haven't seen such an excellent novel for a long time, and I spent two or three days reading it, so I wrote a thousand-word book review to express some opinions 1. The author's writing style is very good. During some key plots, I couldn't turn my eyes away. I have never experienced the meaning of this idiom so deeply. I eagerly, eagerly, eagerly read on. Unlike some novels where I can only know the ending at a glance, the author's plot starts on the tip of a knife. Wu, although readers all know that he can definitely defeat his opponent or make a comeback from a desperate situation, the author is really writing seriously. It is not just a matter of explosion or mechanical deity to solve the problem, but a real battle of wits. This is a very good idea, instead of you punching me, I sneak attack you, you sneak attack me and it is done Second, when it comes to characterization, it is quite profound and profound. I feel that the characters in the novel are alive. This is a very difficult technical job. First of all, it must be true, and secondly, it must be rich. An unreal person will make readers feel fake, and an unrich person will make it difficult for readers to understand deeply. For example, Doctor Gordon in this book, the original frontier king, killed countless people in the first half of his life, but violence always succumbed to higher violence. In the end, his wife and daughter were assassinated, and his family was ruined. Only then did he understand that the most important thing for a person is not strength or dignity, but the people who accompany him. So he put down all his strength for the rest of his life and became an ordinary border doctor. Is this to atone for his sin? Or guilty? Or is it an escape? In short, he has been providing medical services to everyone for decades, and the treatment is free. The author uses many techniques to describe Dr. Gordon, and his kindness is reflected in the conversation with Dongdong. He is bullied by gangsters, which makes people lament the loneliness of the Border King. As a human being, he will be sad and painful for the death of his wife and daughter, and choose to retire from the world. He will be happy when he sees Dongdong grow up, and he will do his best to save patients. He is a evil person. He killed countless people when he was young. Human life is just a number. He is also a good person. After retiring, he worked as a border doctor for decades and saved many people In the end, Dr. Gordon sacrificed himself, illuminated others, and achieved the final redemption just as I thought. I burst into tears at that time. You old man, isn't it good to be alive? What will happen if you die? Why are you trying so hard? An 80-year-old man has to forcefully install a prosthetic body regardless of life and death. Isn't it good to be alive? You are obviously in a safe place. . . 3. Regarding the development of the plot, every step of the author's steps is smooth and silky. Taking the seven clearance props as the main line, he advances step by step. The protagonist's purpose is clear from the beginning, to protect the people around him and win to the end Four. In addition, in terms of plot narrative The author is also a master, and his writing technique of suppressing first and then rising will never go out of style. When we read about the oppression of the people at the bottom and the anti-humanity of the upper class, we will naturally be heartbroken. Then we will read on. Of course, the author will not abuse the master from beginning to end, and will strictly implement the idea of happy ending and the idea of evil being rewarded. But after all, it is not a fairy tale. Sacrifice is inevitable and makes people sigh. This ups and downs of the plot arouses the emotions of the readers and makes us have deeper empathy 5. Finally, a little humble opinion. I personally think that novels must not be smooth sailing, that is, the plot that can be seen at a glance is absolutely not necessary. Foreshadowing and turning points are commonplace skills, but it is true that not every author can master them. The foreshadowing must be cleverly laid, for example, the protagonist's hyperamnesia, I really didn't expect it to be throughout the whole text The turning point should be written just right, so that people can't guess the turning point casually, then it's not called a turning point, but it also can't be completely guessed. No, it just makes people feel baffled It just so happens that the author has done it all. The turning point in the battle is very well written. At the beginning of the battle, the protagonist group is at a disadvantage/advantage, the villain is successful/explosive at the moment, and the protagonist group finally fights back in desperation. It is not abrupt or blunt. Finally, the flowers are sprinkled! Looking forward to the author's next book!

I rarely write long reviews, but after all, I have read more than 300 chapters of this book, and I do have some feelings about it, so let's review it This book is relatively less about friendship. Other online articles basically start with a few gay friends for the protagonist, and then share weal and woe with a bunch of friends. In fact, there is no plot at all. From the front to the back, you can even see the whole process from strangers to mutual trust through life and death. Some people who were originally enemies become friends, and some completely unknown protagonists meet and accept each other. It feels like it is rare nowadays. Generally speaking, only anime can really follow the flow of the plot and watch the protagonist slowly grow up and the relationship with the people around him slowly change Moreover, the author will write some small events before finishing writing a big event. In fact, these branch lines are not very good! On the contrary, it makes each character more vivid and full Character creation is really a very good aspect of this book. People's emotions are very complex. Some books either have the same emotional template for everyone, or they are too prominent. This one is right in between the two. It's complex but always has some characteristics to show its specialness and independent personality This book has a somewhat epic feel. Although only a few months have passed in the novel, you can still clearly feel the changes of time and the differences around you. Then the protagonist's growth rate is just right, and there is no one-stop success. And at the same time, it's very satisfying This heroine is not the kind that dominates the plot and the character design is disgusting. Except for the airborne landing, which is a bit abrupt, it is still perfect And this kind of talented people from all walks of life challenge the enemy together. It feels like a childhood animation🤔. The key point is that I also like it very much Also, the writing style of this book is the only one I like among the four authors. The other one respects me as a god. The setting of this book is also quite interesting. I feel it is a very high-quality article The main shortcoming is that it only updates one chapter a day, which is really not good. I also hope that the author can interact more with readers. There is often nothing happening. If he does not update, I am really afraid that he will disappear I hope that the next book will also have the advantages of this book. This is one of the few books that is very suitable for my taste Secretly Confess Nobai

It's very exciting, it needs a good plot and a good way of writing.

Oli, come on, Sister Yu!

I couldn't help it, I really couldn't help it, poof, I laughed like crazy!

Shennong is here! Such a fragrant seedling! What kind of grass is this? ! This seedling is too delicious, and the source of the immortality is uncertain, but it is definitely edible at this time! Tasty! It's time to eat! Summary: These seedlings are edible, so feel free to eat them. Okay, that's it. Shennong is gone.

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I probably wanted to read about the transformation story so much that I misunderstood the meaning after reading the introduction. I thought the male protagonist looked at his reflection in the water and found that he had become a white-haired devil.

The book is good to read, the writing is rich, the villain is very smart, and the protagonist is not stupid, but the male protagonist has a problem with his thinking. With wireless evolution, infinite adaptation, and a super brain, plus predicting the future and resource exploration, it really won't be so miserable. Why not go to Borderlands and conquer the whole world, thinking about rules every day, obviously having the strength to create rules, and lending out the zero for 8 hours, and the loss goes to my grandma's house. In the final analysis, the male protagonist's thinking I'm still stuck in the past life, I don't dare to put all my money, tell me the background every day, I'll shoot you in the face, and the ashes will be scattered for you, good book, good reading, but the male protagonist is so miserable, I can't take it in. If it is in this world, the male protagonist's approach is right, but in a supernatural world, the male protagonist will have problems. In reality, the bigger the background, the bigger, extraordinary, and capable you are. I don't eat beef. I feel that the male protagonist focuses on the development of power and forgets to improve his own extraordinary.

During the hostage incident at Xinghai Cinema, the crow's nest boss was described as being too brainless. When three of his own relatives were killed, it was extremely unreasonable for one hostage not to execute him and surrender. In order to allow the protagonist to obtain the later benefits and promote the development of the story, it is really senseless to make the head of an organization in a border area give up everything because of something like "family affection".

Recently I have also been thinking about novels of the same type. Let me tell you a few of the highlights that I personally care about. 1. Integrate game themes, please be sure that some places are a little weird. 2.Abuse for the sake of abuse, for example, the little girl who just appeared in a few chapters was hanged because she knew the protagonist and became the only victim of the incident... 3.The protagonist of the game collapsed. Devilman can't establish the reason why he became a "demon". Is he bad just because he is the protagonist of the game? kk spy incident, reversing too much is like forcing him to open a God's perspective Having him repeatedly point out kk and not kill him or turn him around is to make him do bad things. The ex-girlfriend incident, he killed her for no reason and still made a sign of the cross on his chest, On the other hand, if kk doesn't kill her, then this is true love... The decisive battle incident, if the blood is not forced to open the lock, everyone can't die with a stab, so the trump card must be used cleanly. 4.Tōdo Cinema Incident If I add Bushido Spirit and Imperialist Spirit buffs to this rb guy, I am afraid that he will shout "It's better to be broken than to be ruined." If he gets broken later, it doesn't fit his personality. The character that fits the character should be "Su Jun, I didn't expect you to find my family, but my family has long been prepared to sacrifice for the supreme cause. Haha, Su Jun, let me see, which one of us can kill more. He slowly pulled out his samurai sword and cut through the hearts of the four children in the horrified eyes of the teacher and children. He held up the warm blood like a candied haws. It flowed into the palm of the hand along the handle of the knife. Slowly walked to the window with the tip of the knife downward, and the child's warm body fell to the ground in a free fall. The crowd below was suddenly silent. " 5. Personal opinion only

Got it, I finally know where the sense of dissonance lies. If you are a straight male author who believes in strength, the seven important keys will take up a lot of text to become the main purpose of the protagonist (or describe the layout and preparation in advance). The protagonist's personal combat effectiveness and the combat effectiveness of the supporting characters will also be repeatedly emphasized and demonstrated. However, the author is Sister Yu. Well, as you can see, the plot is promoted by describing the bond and the recovery of the female supporting character. The protagonist is idle and waiting for the plot to come to him (it is said that the opportunity in memory has to wait for time to naturally occur, for fear of interfering with the butterfly effect early, but in fact it is not laid out in advance). If there is emotional tension, it often suppresses first and then increases. After the third time, there may be some aesthetic fatigue. Different dark sides are planned as the background of the event, which is cruel to some readers. Conclusion: The protagonist is just a tool man. In fact, the protagonist is just an ideal figure for the tragic female supporting characters to obtain redemption/happiness. The female protagonist's psychological portrayal and situational encounters are very delicate, while the male protagonist's purpose and subjectivity appear empty and confused. Readers, if you are a boy who is used to watching male videos and feels very comfortable being fed into this book, then it will inevitably be a bit awkward to read it into this book. If you read it more distantly, you will find that --- The protagonist's combat power will always be just enough, don't worry! The female character smells so good! Interacting with wood is so sweet! The world is well-shaped and interesting! Sister Yu, you write well~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Su Mo

[Qi Ling kissed Su Mo sweetly on the lips. He wore a new Lolita dress today and was going shopping with his lover, just like their first date, but she didn't see the fleeting sadness in his eyes. Red dragon spots appeared on his forehead, outlining circles of mysterious lines, the Flame Dragon Blood Code! The red dragon claw penetrated the girl's heart in an instant. Sister Yu's fingers were flying, and the more she wrote, the more she felt. It seemed as if as the words emerged, she could see the look of surprise and fear in the girl's amber eyes. In previous books, amber eyes had always been synonymous with arrogance, but she never thought that they would turn into fear tonight. So much so that when she saw the words "amber eyes", she felt as if someone was staring at her from behind. Is the air conditioner turned on too hot? Why do you feel like a heat wave is coming? Wait, isn't this right? The air conditioner is clearly in front of her computer... Sister Yu turned her head in confusion. The chest of a stunning girl was stained with blood, and the scarlet liquid slid down bit by bit. The originally cute Lolita skirt was dyed bright red. The air seemed to be quiet for a few seconds, and it seemed that only a moment had passed...

Just read a little bit and comment. The quick-tongued Pioneer The writing is okay, you can read it, and it's quite exciting. It's not too poisonous It's just the introduction. . . High EQ: Introduction to retro flow, dreaming back to ten years ago Low EQ: This introduction is too strong, it will explode if you take one more look

I was still hanged like this. I only saw this chapter, and I didn't want to care about any resurrection or other twists later on. When the mercenary group was collecting characters before, they had to endure it for the sake of misery. This kidnapping plot caused a child to die like this, and it was done so hard to write it to death. I couldn't appreciate it, couldn't accept it, and just let it go. I hope the more you write, the better.

Su Mo woke up suddenly, breathing heavily, and his back was soaked with cold sweat. "Am I... Back?" Looking at the computer screen in front of me, I still stayed on the achievement page. The information on my phone kept scrolling. A group of friends were still shocked because they had completed the level with all the achievements... A month later, in the darkened room, Su Mo leaned back in his chair in despair. Over the past month, he had been constantly looking for a way to travel back in time, even retracing the trajectory from the morning of the time travel several times, but to no avail. He didn't even know the reason for his time travel. Captain Su, who had always been strategizing, lost his direction for the first time. His time travel, the acquisition of customs clearance props, his powerful strength, and the most important partners... Seemed to be just a dream for him.                                               But the memories of the scenes are extremely clear in my mind... The life and death dependence on Nobai, the infinite endurance of Dong Dong, KK who was just a street thief in the beginning, the future living in the sewer, and most importantly... Turning enemies into friends with Qi Ling.                                                                        The mobile phone lit up, and a group of friends @ him, "Boss, didn't the official of "Dawn of Dawn" plan to make a DLC recently and invited you to give some reference opinions? I heard that a new production team was also changed, what do you plan to do?"       Su Mo didn't plan to go at first. He was not interested in anything now, but after all, they made "Dawn" and gave him such a beautiful and dreamy experience. After replying to the group friends, Su Mo lay down and went to sleep early. Tomorrow he plans to provide his own time-travel experience as a reference to the new production team. If it is finally adopted, it can also serve as his memory of that experience. With deep thoughts, Su Mo fell asleep. The next day, Su Mo got up early, washed up and took a taxi. The company of "Dawn" is located in the city center. It was his first time to go there. When he saw the tall building, he was stunned. No, man. The style of this building makes me feel that the technology is many years ahead of the times. Walking into the company, he asked the girl at the front desk and revealed his identity. Su Mo took the elevator to the seventh floor. "The reception room... The reception room, oh, it's here." Su Mo opened the door and went in. When he saw the members of the new production team, his pupils shrank suddenly and he froze in place.          ，，，……，！ Even his old friend Schenkov and Odiana, who had been kind to him, were there. "Brother!", KK's eyes were red. "Leader!", Future smiled. "Boss!", Dong Dong's voice was also choked with sobs. It was only then that Su Mo came back to his senses, "I... Am I still dreaming?" Chu Nanyi came up and gave him a big hug, "Hey, hey, leader, we have worked very hard to find you, are you still wondering if you are dreaming?" Fenrir patted Su Mo on the shoulder, "We fought side by side not long ago. I will be sad if you forget so quickly." Future patted his flat chest and said proudly, "With Ben's genius chief designer and Qi Ling's top IQ, plus Mo Tong's memorized human documents, isn't it easy to build a machine that can travel through time? It's just a little troublesome to find the coordinates." Qiling? Oh, by the way, where did Qiling go? Just when Su Mo was about to ask, a pair of small white hands hugged his waist, and her soft body hugged him from behind. The silver-haired girl said in a trembling voice: "Mo, my love, welcome home..."

The gold content of the protagonist's total achievements is still decreasing.

It seemed okay at first, but after the character Qi Ling came out, she became extremely toxic.

There are a lot of plots in the past, false confessions, saying you are young when you get married, and marrying a man when you grow up. Is it reasonable to avoid pitfalls and delete comments?

After reading more than 300 chapters, I came to the conclusion that as long as the protagonist is a woman, I can forgive him and kill him if he is a man. This is outrageous.

The writing is good, but the plot is really unbearable.

Suddenly, there are a few highly poisonous arrows stuck behind WOC. From the beginning, I saw that the protagonist is quite awesome and nothing can be seen from behind. Isn't your protagonist suffering from hyperamnesia? Isn't it full achievement? Where it comes into play is that it feels like a character in the beginning, but later on you can't compete with the original protagonist in everything, and your full achievement development speed is so slow.