
Then Let the Witch Offer Her Loyalty
那就让魔女献上忠诚
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 9mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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324Chapters
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Weird, so weird, drawing power through witches, the witch status signed in the early stage is just like consumables. I could accept it before signing the second witch, but after the second one, the situation took a turn for the worse. 1. The problem of witch positioning, the feeling of consumables is particularly prominent. The witch can sign contracts repeatedly, and the protagonist is like a successor. The Minotaur feels very strange. When you create a witch character, it is like unlocking a skill slot and then pre-loading the miscellaneous materials. Then taking the witch from other people's hands feels very bad, and it can even be completely avoided. Why does it have to be plundering, and the whole rotten person has to deceive to seize the power of the witch? Frustrating 2. Protagonist positioning The protagonist is a fun-loving person, and I enjoyed watching it. The original Bai Yueguang was deceived, and I said it doesn't matter if we get together or break up. But for Bai Yueguang to awaken the witch, he had to be deceived? Or was it kidnapped? Then he solved the incident, signed a contract with the protagonist, and never betrayed? It's over. I thought I was strategizing, but it turned out to be a big deal. If you think about it carefully, the protagonist never regards the witch as a human being, so if you want to see the witch be frank, sign a contract, and share weal and woe, you can let it go. I'm so stupid, really, the main character's attitude toward the witch was hinted at in the introduction, but I didn't realize it until I saw it.
Um, the system rewards forcing the witch to have a crush on the male protagonist is too toxic for me 😅
The author's book is only suitable for those who have read the entire book
Like the title, the writing is very good, but it contains personal content, and it is very sad. It has been suppressed for a long time, and the writing is slow. It takes a long time for the refreshing moments to appear, but because of the long-term suppression, the refreshing moments will be very refreshing. And because I write slowly, I have to wait for a long time.
Be sure not to keep books in the new book issue, but to read them
Hello everyone, the Qidian recommendation mechanism is now different from before. Recommendations for new books only depend on the number of readers. If there is no follow-up, there will be no recommendation, and it will be difficult for the book to achieve results. You must not raise books during the new book period. If you want to raise books, you can wait until they are on the shelves, otherwise they are likely to die in the seedling stage. If you have time, it is best to read the chapter updates within 24 hours, or browse to the latest chapter, complain, read other people's comments about this chapter, even just hang up and leave it, and then turn to the last page, this will be counted as follow-up reading Please, come and read, I can do everything! (Toshita seat)
Have you ever seen a dragon? A bunch of stuff written randomly, taken for granted.
I finally understand why it's free. The writing after chapter 100 is really bad.
The plot of Bai Yueguang is really awkward. First, the protagonist is hurt by the scumbag and the hero saves the beauty. Then there is the loan sharking mess left by the previous scumbag. The protagonist goes to help solve it. The original character is a licking dog that has been licked for six years. Even if you have passed through the soul, your behavior is not inconsistent with the original person at all 😥
It's really good to read. Please keep writing, I believe this book will be successful.
Come on author, don't be discouraged, this book is well paced and plotted so far. Keep it up and wait for the next wave of recommendations, there are really promising products
After it was put on the shelves, it was written the same way as when I changed characters. I wrote an abstract version of Bai Yueguang JuTM. The male protagonist was originally a "clown", but he turned into a clown. The memes are stinky, long and repeated, and no attention is paid to the plot at all. Such a good beginning is really wasted.
At the beginning, I had a wife, but in the latest, I still have a eunuch. I started quantum reading from the virtual machine, and the plot of the two witches was completely ruined.
It's good to read a long series of chapters, but if you only read two chapters a day, it will be very boring. It feels like you haven't read anything, so it is not suitable for reading. I will read it after I finish it.
It's okay, but man, I still want to watch The Witch. I want to see the system that can be absolutely controlled, how it goes around and turns into an academy and a competition.
Please write back the dark article 🤭
I think it's very beautiful, but now there are too few and it's not enough to watch.
When I read the introduction, I thought the protagonist was epileptic, but later on it turned out that the protagonist was not epileptic and the heroine was epileptic. I guess I can't clear up the heroine's current state. If the male protagonist uses the system to control it later, then I can only say that it's fucked up. The protagonist is not insane at all and is completely like a normal person.
The author let himself go
Basically I can't stand it anymore.
Fake invincible flow
Stress the pace, slow down the heat, and forget about it. The protagonist still stresses his fighting ability. I was beeping for a long time with various explanations as to why the protagonist couldn't do this or that. Anyway, just give a bunch of reasons to restrict the protagonist. Any pure clown can give the protagonist a great sense of oppression and cannot be brought in at all.
Authors should make statistics on changes in the audience for their works
Fewer subscriptions and less follow-up. Maybe it's not that the style isn't suitable, but that the readership that I've accumulated before has changed and is growing. Personally, I loved this kind of book when I was in middle school and high school. Now that I read these, I can only find it hard to swallow. The limitations need to be analyzed by you, not just by the readers. At present, the transformation has completely failed. Perhaps, the readership group has changed, and we have to find ways to attract new readers. Instead of forcibly changing the selling points of your works. The old saying "Those who are like me will live, and those who are like me will die" is exactly the current situation. Hey, just my personal thoughts, above.
I came from reading second-hand books. I am a student and poor. Sister Yu is still not suitable for this style. Although the dark style is not very popular anymore, the world view of the previous book is really good. The feeling of wasteland style changing the world is attractive across the ages. I hope to see another shocking plot like knocking down the Tower of Babel.
AI recommended your book, but the attitude seems wrong. No matter how you look at it, it doesn't look like a self-interested, serious, or funny article. To me, funny things are more disgusting than the Holy Mother.
I gave you the monthly pass, please give me more updates😡
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I really can't do it anymore
Yw protagonist + system brainwashed female character
The previous dark novels were okay, but few people liked them. The previous one was good. Revolution and unity are all attractive factors. I hope to see plots like knocking down the Tower of Babel in the future. Oh, by the way, don't be ridiculous. It's good to be humorous occasionally like Su Xiao, but it's not good to become a character.
Guys, please give me some advice as to whether this book can be used as a trap.
I want to read dark novels. The dark novels written by Pisces are so immersive. Although they are very cruel, I just like this 😭
Is the boss still alive? Are you ready to continue writing?
At the time of Kino's trial. Respect me like a god, he's very handsome there. Let's get another book like this.
Luo Miaoyou is not a witch, so who is the ever-changing witch?
If Alexander has magnetic field control, can the author add magnetic field eddy currents to him to heat metal, a magnetic deflection shield, and the ability to use magnetic fields to scan and sense the entire map?
Why did the hero hide the truth about his life for three years after he faked his death in the finale?