Stone Rain in Konoha

After reading dozens of chapters, I summarized the unreasonable points: Jiraiya's strongest fire escape turned out to be the B-level ninjutsu Hao Huoyu, and the protagonist's A-level ninjutsu came easily. Although the level and power of the ninjutsu are not necessarily related, but a It's unreasonable for a chuunin to be exposed to so many A-level ninjutsu The chuunin releases five or six ninjutsu in a row and still says that half of his chakra is left. The protagonist repeatedly shadows a matryoshka doll and laments that others have more chakra, especially the villains. Being able to use water, earth and large-scale ninjutsu at will, everyone is a ghost Baguazhang·Kaitian is the secret of the Hyuga clan. Neji, who is separated from the family, can master it through his own understanding and development. The Hyuga heroine can not only return to the sky, but also One palm to blow out her head and heart, Neji is a complete waste compared to her Why does the villain bring two scrolls recording secret techniques to the battlefield? Is it to increase the risk of intelligence being exposed, and to give a big gift package to the protagonist? The protagonist masters the palm ninjutsu, and can also express that his medical ninjutsu is average. In the official setting, even in the medical class, only a handful of people can use the palm ninjutsu. Tsunade shouted "Weird punch". There is no official statement about Wei Liquan, only Wei Li. Developing jutsus derived from strange powers has pain in the legs In short, the author's settings for ninjutsu, ninja, and chakra are very random, and some details are very embarrassing

Seeing this handsome black guy, I suddenly thought of a preserved egg that can discharge electricity.

The protagonist has no heir, no backstage, and is an orphan. The setting is too ordinary. This kind of person is the protagonist in Eye Legend, and the plot is completely made up. There are too many bugs, and many times it can't be solved, so it is forced. The writing ideas are not coherent, it wastes brain cells, and it is easy to get stuck. . . No, it's a eunuch

There are so many words, why don't you put it on the shelves? The author is really using love to generate electricity...

Hello everyone, I am the author Yu Wenjin. I've been stuck lately, and I'm about to write about the Third Ninja War. The main reason is that I haven't thought of a nickname for the protagonist. If you readers have any good ideas, please comment below. If you like it, the author will definitely use it. Titles that are too ridiculous will not be considered 😁

A common problem among every Hokage fan is that except for the strongest Hokage, they guard the base camp and never go out. Other shadows are running around on the battlefield.

Kneel down

To be honest, I don't think this heroine would be able to marry without an Uchiha-style genocide for Hinata. It's just like no matter how rich you are, you can't openly advertise on the TV station to recruit escort girls. This is a trend of the times and cannot be done. Naruto and Hinata can say that the interests of the third generation and Hinata are tied up in a deal! You see, White Fang is super powerful, and even the third generation is not used to it. The ideas of the Naruto world and the Western ideas of extraordinary beings are two extremes. If you are not orthodox, no matter how strong you are, no one will look down on you.

Can you imagine cloning a tailed beast? It's better to be like other fans' stars in the Hoshi Ninja Village. It is speculated that they are the body fragments of the Ten-Tails, and then fuse the chakras from one to nine tails to synthesize the small Ten-Tails. It is reliable. If the cloning technology is not defective, cloning a lot of Senju Hashirama will directly overwhelm the ninja world.

When I saw Marshal Hei, I thought he was the black-hearted bastard!

Come on, it's well written and has new ideas.

Let me explain here: The character Sarutobi Akoxin in this book is Konohamaru's father. Sarutobi Shinnosuke and Sarutobi Sunset circulated on the Internet are just products of the fandom. They were all written by the author of the ancient times. In fact, the original work did not mention this character and did not have a specific name. The only time it was said that Konohamaru's parents were all ANBU masters directly from the Hokage, there is no more information about these two people. Furthermore, the starting point of Konohamaru's father in ancient times was still the green among the eight colors of Konoha... So, readers should not argue with the author about the name of Konohamaru's father. In this book, his name is Sarutobi Akaxin, and the Jesus I mentioned cannot stop me 😡

In fact, I want to know what the achievements of the third generation were. They didn't go to the battlefield in the second and third battles. It was all the people in the village who worked hard. How did he deal with the dust of the Tsuchikage and the thunder of the Raikage? Except for Uchiha Kagami, the second generation's subordinates all seemed to be the heirs, but they all became elders. Hiruzen, Danzo, Kado Yan, and Koharu, these four people have defeated all the elite soldiers in Konoha. They don't have much strength, so it's strange how they can be advisors.

Is the protagonist too trashy? He has a secret technique but can't defeat Namikaze Minato at the same time? I can only pick up a little girl, I despise it.

I want to ask, is there that black-hearted preserved egg?

What I want to say is why it's not called Black Wing Shiyu. Black Wing Shiyu is so convoluted that it sounds uncomfortable and looks uncomfortable.

I think the destruction of the Uzumaki Country should be led by the Mizugakure Village. Behind them are Uchiha Madara and Black Zetsu. Kaguya was sealed, so Zetsu should be afraid of the sealing technique, and then find a way to destroy the Uzumaki Country. After all, the sealing technique can seal even Kaguya, so the upper limit should be very high.