The Two-Goal Legend

The characters in the book felt too impetuous and aggressive. The protagonist's characterization also had significant issues; he didn't act like a high school student, nor like an adult. Furthermore, the reading experience was somewhat disorganized.

A female celebrity became famous for her breasts (humorous).

Damn! After writing 91 chapters, I finally scored the first football goal in the novel! It scared me half to death! I hope to keep up the good work and score goals like dogs and provide assists everywhere from now on.

Dude, I'm not trying to provoke you, but if you were writing a book full-time, this book definitely wouldn't earn even one percent of your expected income; it would probably flop. Your intentions in writing this book were probably good. Being tied to both snooker and soccer systems, the excessive setup in the early stages seems fine to me: a student studying in England, whose relatives suddenly…

Finally, we're getting back to the main theme of the novel. You can't keep padding the story; the readership is dwindling. Keep updating! Here's your recommendation vote!

Dude, how long until your old book is finished? What's it about? You need to catch up on the pace of this book quickly; the plot is too slow, how are you going to do well in sales? Are you not a professional writer? I suggest you work while writing, as a hobby, otherwise you'll probably be eating dirt.

The writing is fresh and original; please release it soon for a massive release.

Should I write about snooker or football? 😰

This book has been signed for a contract, so readers can rest assured to collect and invest in it. Also, the seedlings need lots of watering, please!

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