The Ascension of Martial Arts

Removing Chapter 1 might retain some readers.

To be honest, forgive my ignorance, but I haven't read any of the author's other books. If you're a new author and you start charging within the first hundred chapters, no matter how talented you are, it will deter countless people. Of course, if the author is rich and just writes for fun, then please consider this my rambling!

To be honest, this book doesn't deserve the word "dimensional ascension." How can the protagonist, who doesn't even possess the wisdom to create, ascend to a higher dimension? The system is like raising pigs, herding the protagonist from one pigpen to another, with the pig's horns searching for food, and sometimes the system gives him some pig feed.

The beginning was written in a very lowbrow style, with all the slapstick and comedic elements that made the character too unappealing.

The key to time-travel novels is to be different; it's not enough to just kill off one character. There needs to be change. For example, I might change the world, but don't use some kind of world-correcting power as an excuse later on. In many time-travel novels I've seen, like the one in Xingzilin where the protagonist undergoes such drastic changes, it's just that later they explain away the world's powerful corrective abilities, and the rest of the plot still goes on.

Is it confirmed that the main character is a college student and not a primary school student?

This is yet another book that writes martial arts like an online game, listing a bunch of attributes. Whether it's cultivation or martial arts, what's with all the talk about physical strength and intelligence? Even if the author pushes the protagonist's intelligence to the limit, the protagonist will still act like a fool. What limits the protagonist's intelligence isn't the attribute points in the book, but the author's wisdom. So stop deceiving yourself with all this attribute point stuff.

The world of "Legend of the Emperor 6: Hongwu Emperor" features the Five Spirits of Tianxiang (Treasure Trove, Martial God Weapon, Taiji Mystic Coffin, Treasure Basin, and Supreme Dragon Palace), which are very useful to the protagonist. Especially valuable among the Five Spirits are the Treasure Trove (containing the essence of Chinese wisdom and culture collected by Wen Tianxiang from the Zhou…

You could write some of Wen Ruian's books. I've already written countless books by Jin Yong and others on Qidian, and I'm getting a bit tired of them.

That's some really unique thought process!