The World Journey of Ancient Blood

This book contains a large amount of the original text of "The Witcher". Sometimes the author will even move 6 original chapters in a row. About 12 chapters were moved before it was put on the shelf. I don't know if the original text will be available for the chapters after it is put on the shelf. The dual main plot that many readers are dissatisfied with is caused by this behavior. The original text is separated from the fan fiction, which greatly reduces the male protagonist's protagonist status and lowers the perception of the book. And no matter how good the original text is, it is the original author and excellent translator, not a "porter" who moves the original text of a blockbuster to the fandom... After all, readers come to read the fanfic. If we want to read the original text, we can go to the original work😅 I just searched for pirated copies, and sure enough, there are still some original texts. Is it a bit too much to ask readers to subscribe to translations provided by Witcher enthusiasts? 😅

I haven't read the original work, but I feel that large sections are borrowed from the original work of The Witcher and Ice and Fire... Or maybe the original text has been slightly changed.

The concept and subject matter are great, other authors should do their best.

The dual main lines are really confusing. Can we put them in a side story? The other worlds are side stories. The text is mainly about the wizarding world and we are watching the protagonist. As long as the characters and events in other wizarding worlds have nothing to do with the protagonist or are not involved, there is no need to go into so much detail. If the protagonist is not involved or involved, there is no need to go into so much detail. They are just supporting characters in this article. Have you ever seen supporting characters written in more detail than the protagonist? To talk about such details, we might as well play the Witcher trilogy in more detail.

I don't know at what age the author started taking time out, but if you can make the protagonist smoke like a long-time smoker at such a young age, he probably isn't a regular person. Although the protagonist is not a human being, it is not commendable to write this kind of thing in a book. Think about how you feel when your own child started smoking in elementary school.

The house smells bad, gets high, has many threads, is messy

I suggest you revise the original text that I copied, as there are too many gaps in writing. It doesn't matter if the writing is not good, but it makes a big difference if you have the original text for comparison.

Advantages 1. The author's settings and ideas are very attractive; 2. The author's writing style is not bad and the logic is self-consistent; 3. The protagonist's character is well described in all aspects, and it is very comfortable to read. Disadvantages 1. There are too many setting background descriptions, and it is very tiring to read the original work if you don't understand it; 2. The dual narrative mode is not the single line of ordinary online novels, and you may not be used to it; 3. The main line is unclear, and you don't know what to do. In summary, if you don't understand the Witcher series (referring to novels, games and related backgrounds), it is not recommended to read it.

It's a mess, I don't know what you want to express?

What can I say... The double line is too messy. The main character disappears for too long. The main character is too weak to be of much use, and it seems that he would be of little use without him. The dnd system is too complex and too niche. The original background of The Witcher is too detailed. If you are not a senior fan, you may not be able to read it.

The protagonist lives like a side character

HP hates nanny articles the most. . .

It feels like the protagonist has been struggling for a long time and nothing has changed.

Obviously the writing collapsed due to dual-line advancement... Not recommended

The spell-casting system is so confusing, and it's so frustrating to watch. It's also a spell slot, a transcription scroll, a wand, and a gem... It's not just a game, so why is it like this? Can't we maintain one spellcasting system? After reading a lot of novels, the spellcasting system is simple and clear (compared to you), but you make it so complicated. You can make the story more complicated, and it won't be a big problem and it'll be tolerable. I can't bear the complexity of the spellcasting system. I came to read the novel to relieve my boredom, not to find an unhappy big brother for myself! When do you focus on one system? DND is really stupid. Isn't it great to use a wand to chant spells and cast spells, and to make special effects by gesticulating with your hands? Also, quickly get rid of your writing style influenced by foreigners, it is too depressing. (Poor sense of immersion) 😭😭😭

This book made me very painful to read.

It's a pity for this subject matter, who doesn't want to travel in various worlds with the blood of the ancients? It's just that the author wrote it in one sentence

The story concept of this book is okay, but the writing is too messy. Even if I have some understanding of the background of the world, I sometimes get upset while reading it (insert too many wizard background texts). People who don't understand the plot may not be able to read it. After all, there are always background texts that have nothing to do with the protagonist.

I can't write it anymore, I will update it later and post it in the group, no need to spend money.

It's been almost a month, no more updates? This book is actually quite well written.

After reading the free chapter, I was quite confused. I saw that the protagonist time-traveled from his birth to the age of 4 and then traveled back in time. When he was about 10 years old, he drove with Medea? ? ? ? ? ?

Author, I just read it for a while. Most of us are still interested in the wizarding world, and the other chapters can be a little less. Your writing style is very good, but I personally am not interested in those worlds. Personal opinion

(1) Collect a fan title, and you can send it out when it is operational in the future. (2) Any world you want to travel to can be anything (except the places you must go to in the outline), 😂 I will think about how to cast spells in other worlds...

Why would you commit suicide for such a good book?

Just a stranger, is this protagonist a pile driver like Jie Luotuo 😃

The story is too divided and the character center cannot be seen.

It is recommended to change the name and change Ciri's name. If I hadn't been persistently looking for Witcher fans, I really wouldn't have been able to figure out how to use it in the original work.

You actually updated two books at the same time. I thought you were a loser.

What's the reason? Did you drive too much?

…Well, when is the author's next book going to be written?