A Journey Through the World of Elder Blood

The dual main storylines are really confusing. Could you please put them in the side stories? Other worlds could be side stories, while the main story focuses on the Wizarding World and the protagonist. Other characters and events in the Wizarding World shouldn't be given so much space if they're unrelated to or uninvolved by the protagonist.

This book contains large sections of the original *The Witcher* text; sometimes the author even quotes six chapters at a time. Before its release, approximately twelve chapters were quoted. It's unclear whether the chapters after the release still contain original text. Many readers' dissatisfaction with the dual main storylines stems from this practice.

I don't know at what age the author started smoking in the meantime, but to have the protagonist smoke like a heavy smoker at such a young age probably doesn't make someone a model citizen. Although the protagonist isn't exactly human, writing something like this in a book isn't something to be proud of. Just imagine how you'd feel if your own child started smoking in elementary school.

Homebody, self-indulgent, multitasking, chaotic

The original text that was copied verbatim should be revised; the writing style is far inferior. It doesn't matter if the writing is bad, but the difference is huge when compared with the original text.

Advantage 1. The author's setting and concept are very appealing; 2. The author's writing style is good, and the logic is consistent. 3. The protagonist's personality and other aspects are well described, making for a very enjoyable read. Shortcoming 1. The background descriptions are too extensive, making it tiring to read if you're not familiar with the original work;

It's all a mess, I don't know what you're trying to say?

Well... The dual storylines are too messy. The protagonist has been missing for too long. The protagonist is too weak and useless; his presence or absence doesn't seem to make much difference. The Dungeons & Dragons universe is too complex and too niche. The Witcher saga's original background is too detailed; non-diehard fans probably won't be able to finish it.

The protagonist lives like a side story character.

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