The Legend of Kirigakure Kisame

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It's pretty good content. I probably got through the first part, but the story and writing are both good. I hope it gets better and better.

The male protagonist has a good outlook on life. Although he has a bad temper, he is upright. It looks good and feels great. Come on! ! Already collected! When you have time, take a look at my article "My System Might Be a Fake System". Thank you very much.

It's rare to write about Kisame. The paragraphs are too long and there are many meaningless chapters. For example, it says about jumping to Konoha, about Kakashi, and about the origin of the sword. Wouldn't you put this in the extra chapter? ,,, I want to see Kisame's daily life, growth, and changes, but you writing so many irrelevant things disturbs my interest~

Doesn't Kisame have a little sister that he likes? 🙈That one is the heroine

When I first started watching it, I felt like the pig's feet were talking nonsense all the time, and they were very jumpy. Looking at this book, I can't calm down and immerse myself in it. Last time I actually read Chapter 10, but this time I couldn't stand Chapter 2.

Brother, do you know why you don't have a monthly pass? It's because you write too many extras

1. The layout is too dense. 2. The story of the ninja describes and derives the revival of spiritual energy, monsters, samurai, shrine maidens, onmyoji, etc. There are also some swords that produce consciousness and spirituality, which is very confusing. It is not suitable for those who simply want to read derivative fan stories. 3. People are still in Kirigakure, and Kakashi is suddenly interspersed, and there is a sense of disorder. (Personally, I think Kisame is more handsome than Zhasumi)

The author would like to ask here, has anyone read it? If so, please give me the names of a few supporting actors and recommendation votes!

Each paragraph is too long. Let's divide it into points.

When will the breathing method shorten your lifespan? It is obvious that the stripes will shorten your lifespan.

There's something wrong with the text layout, it's like watching a pirated version

Without segmentation, such a large section looks awkward

The writing is quite good, but the paragraphs are not divided into sections, which makes me a little dizzy 😰 Overall, it's pretty good, I support it 🤝

I felt so uncomfortable after reading more than ten chapters. A large section of text was connected together, and I felt dizzy and dizzy.

Your segmentation technology makes my eyes hurt... I really can't stand it.

The chakra in Naruto is as well written as this novel. The will of chakra belongs to Kaguya Otsutsuki. Each ninja only has the right to use it but not to own it. In my opinion, chakra is equivalent to a tree. The seeds of the tree are Kaguya's. The fertilizer for the growth of the tree is the spiritual energy and physical energy of the ninja. After the tree grows, the ninja uses the attributes of the tree.

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You must have played too much with the king, don't use Kisame on the cover

The beginning doesn't feel serious enough, it's a bit Gintama-speak, but it's acceptable if it's usually serious and a little funny. You feel like a husky in the whole world and a wolf passing by occasionally.

There are too many typos, the reading experience is poor, there are chronicle settings that have nothing to do with the plot, and there are too many yy's of my own. I just skipped after reading these, twenty lines at a glance. Sometimes I skip five or six chapters and write about the setting again. Just skip it directly. It doesn't affect the plot. Anyway, the real plot content only accounts for 1/3 of the book.

When writing a novel, don't you know how to divide it into paragraphs? Don't you care if the layout is so rubbish? I don't believe the author doesn't know about this, maybe he's just too lazy to change it, the plot is too yy and not suitable for me

I can't stand it, it's so densely packed with words.

I thought the heroine Terumi Mei?

Is the author very young? The layout is weird, and the main character's speech is also a bit weird, so I'll give it up.

I feel like there is too much nonsense😥😥

This first chapter is so embarrassing

Wouldn't it be nice to plant trees on the wooden planet at the beginning?

Isn't this book most likely to be dissuaded by the typesetting?