Escape from the Mist Ninja and Start by Stabbing the Teacher in the Back

I realize that you don't have a large and useful psychic beast. Masashi Kishimoto's psychic beast Tadayoshimaru is a chameleon, and can transform into a city through invisibility. If you have this at the beginning, you won't be afraid of being caught up. I didn't get the Kirigakure ninja sword Samega, except for the beheading sword, at least there was one.

The reason is okay, but not sufficient. It is best to add a plan for the future to explain the protagonist's behavior. Otherwise, just saying "good or bad" without being thorough will only make people quit.

The more I read, the more I feel that it was written by AI. I myself have recently started to use AI to write novels, and the style seems to be basically the same

It's 200 chapters, and I'm still banging my head here and there. There are so many buffs and the fighting is not exciting. How can I put it? The writing is okay, but it's too boring.

When did you stop writing about Danzo? Kick me. I feel like I went astray. I was so tired of writing about Konoha.

It's time to run through the plot, there's been too much chatter. You said the protagonist has developed power, but you haven't written out what benefits those things bring to the protagonist, or you have to do everything yourself. You just run around with a girl all day long. You said he has developed his strength, so he sparred with the immature Nagato. The two of them haven't done anything serious yet and have no strong performance. The writing is gentle. In the past, I could still see that I had read the latest chapters at eighty or ninety after raising it for a day or two. Now, after two days, I have read the latest chapter at sixteenth or seventeenth. It can be seen that the follow-up reading is also very bleak.

The subject of Naruto is originally a hot-blooded manga. At the beginning, it was because the protagonist was not from Konoha anymore and had some interest. But judging from the current situation, the plot has been very dull. There is no climax or trough in the advancement of the plot. It feels like it is just a chapter in one sentence, and the protagonist keeps researching and researching. He has superimposed a lot of abilities and is just doing experiments? It feels like it's too focused on experimentation. Hot-blooded comics should be hot-blooded, not bland like this.

The overall plot is okay, but the optimization ability of the protagonist is too vague and conceptual. Almost everything comes to mind. As a result, the process of improving the ability of the master bedroom corner was foggy and chaotic. .

I hope this is a good book with a complete enough story

The writing is okay, but a little short. I want to ask if there are female protagonists. How many are there? I hope the plot is not about falling in love in one chapter.

I have read dozens of chapters so far. The author's writing is concise, not cumbersome, the plot is smooth, and the organization is clear. The character's ability has reached the sky in an exaggerated way without improving. The ability concept is very thoughtful and worth looking forward to. One last thing, don't go back to Konoha like other articles and write exclusively about Konoha's intrigues. That has no future and will be ruined by other people. You can try to look at the entire ninja world and start provocations everywhere.

Goldfinger is average, I didn't really want to watch it, the plot is okay, the writing is pretty fluent, and it's average.

The writing is okay, the plot is okay, the plot is okay, the overall evaluation is mediocre.

It's well written, but it's a pity that there are too few. I really like this narrative rhythm. I will update it slowly and don't die.

Well written, keep it up and give it a try

You can write it, Liangcao. If you can keep it up, it will be great.

The character's ability settings are pretty good, but the layout is too small, and it has never been able to break through the scope of the Naruto world. And when the protagonist's ability involves modifying other people's minds and memories, without certain writing and plot setting capabilities, it is easy to fall apart, which is quite disgusting.

Is Ye Cang the heroine? Or is there a female protagonist?

With this amount of updates, I'm afraid I'll forget about it

To be honest, I am more interested in your extraordinary past life.

I'm crying. After it was released, only you changed from one update to two updates. Everyone else changed from three updates to one update. You really made me cry to death 😭

After it was released, the plot progress was very slow and it seemed very expensive. The writing is good, but it can also be said to be a bit watery, because the actual content is not much and the setting is good. The better you can master that degree.

Take the dark road and leave them with no way to go

Brother, I don't even have confidence that you can finish this update.

Why did you just use One Piece's move? Is this double-opening a string?