
Counterattack of Civilian Ninjas
平民忍者的逆袭
- Status
- Completed
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- 780k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Come on, author! After searching for a long time, I finally found a novel with the same taste. The author is great. Just do what you want. Support and come on!
Author, I would like to ask, if the protagonist does not have a golden finger, then what is a civilian counterattack? Although the world of Naruto is said to be a world where as long as you have talent, you can defy the heavens, but everyone knows that it is just a world where people compete for blood. If ordinary people really want to be awesome, where will they be without any golden fingers? Look at the Yondaime Hokage, isn't his golden finger the flying thunder god? If there is no flying thunder god, then he is just an ordinary jounin. If the protagonist does not have a system, then what is the average IQ of the golden finger? You really can't become a very awesome person.
The time traveler himself is the biggest problem, not to mention knowing the plot and various information well. . . .
Naruto is actually a legend of the eyes. It is basically impossible to defeat the Otsutsuki clan just by learning ninjutsu, so physical skills are useful. However, the author has greater potential to develop his own tricks from extraordinary factors such as spiritual power. It is suitable for time-travel novels to use the various inspirations or directions of the modern information explosion.
If you want the main character to use a Chinese name, that's fine, but if you babble a lot and make yourself look patriotic, then why would you write Naruto? Naruto or anime
You can name the book you write whatever you want. I am a reader. Isn't it okay for me to complain about the name to make a joke? For example, your book is like the goods sold by a merchant. We are customers. If we are not satisfied with the goods, why don't we tell them?
It's really boring if the protagonist doesn't become Hokage. Everyone knows that the third generation is a trap for Konoha. He makes Konoha weaker and weaker and has fierce internal fighting. Let alone Konoha's strength, this really has nothing to do with the third generation. Look at who is responsible for the powerful families and foundations of Konoha. They are all caused by the first generation and the second generation. Of course, the credit is greater for the development of the second generation. After all, The first generation is a joke 😁 and to be honest, in fact, according to our real world, the third generation itself is very unreasonable. As a guard, even if you have a successor (but you are just a successor), even if the second generation says it is for future successors, but the country (village) is so big, so what if you are old, can you really not afford to wait? Look at how old the Tsuchikage has lost his teeth. The third generation and the others are just like being a bodyguard and losing their own leader. It would be nice if our country directly treated such a person as a treason and made you the top leader. (No matter how you think about it in the original book, it's very embarrassing for someone to be protected as a protector. I don't want to let the old people who fight against the second generation want to murder you?) I think the third generation in the original book wants to engage in internal strife. Compared with the second generation old people (those who have the right to conquer the world), the third generation is super bad at politics, technology, overall situation, people, resources, etc., Which is more than one level worse than the second generation. Compared with the second generation, they are scum. Look at it compared to the original work. The so-called clown reputation of "Doctor" is not something special. In the end, even his own alliance country (the country of whirlpool) was wiped out. What a scum.
The plot of the time traveler is useless. Even the reborn ones make mistakes. Don't say you are the only one who has read the comics. Do you know what month and day Jiraiya died? Do you know what time the night of genocide started? Do you know how to practice shadow clones? Even if you can read the text, do you have enough chakra? The so-called following the plot means that the author is not strong enough in writing, and then he just follows the plot he made up. The protagonist can always succeed, just like Chu Xuan, does he have a high IQ? He knows the results first and then pushes the process. The real smart people push the results through the process, so just read the novel. If you really time travel, even if you are a fool, if you have the strength of a big pillar, you will be awesome. Otherwise, even if you are with a very smart person, you will be an ordinary civilian with no chakra and no ninjutsu. The chakra in the whole body cannot use a three-body jutsu. It is useless. Even if you become a big businessman, you will be exploited and bullied by daimyo and other powerful people.
Fans do have to write their own stuff, but the Naruto world itself actually has its own strength growth routes that can be explored. It is recommended that the author consider both ends. ①Grassroots counterattack No. 1 Ninjutsu: Eight Gate Dunjia. This is almost the only incredible ninjutsu that can touch the Six Paths level and has low restrictions. Compared with blood stains, inheritance of secret techniques, and suitability of talents, at least on the surface, Eight Gates Dunjia only seems to require hard work. Moreover, there is indeed the possibility of growth of the Eight Gate Dungeon: the genin Dai can kick the ninja swordsmen to death, and the jounin Kai can kick the sternum of Rokudo Madara. This technique may have the possibility to continue to develop. After all, Boruto is still upgrading its strength level. ②Grassroots counterattack the second ninjutsu: Senjutsu. The authority of the reincarnation eye suppressed countless ninjutsu. The only senjutsu that survived, its status naturally increased. Although it also requires extremely high talent, with ordinary ninjas as imaginary enemies, many secret techniques are no different from fairy techniques. But with those immortals as imaginary enemies, even if the blood stains eliminate Chen Dun, it may not be worth the immortal skills. ③Other Ninjutsu: Once the blood-stained snare is drawn, the most outstanding thing is that you don't break the defense. What's the point of learning the Five Elements Escape Technique no matter how fancy it is? On the contrary, auxiliary ninjutsu such as Shadow Clone, Seduction Technique, and Flying Thunder God show their talents. ④ Taking the theatrical version as a clue, you can find some ninjutsu that break through the pattern of Liu Dao's biological son. You can also find some using Boruto as a clue. Although the quality of the movie version and Boruto is far inferior to the original comics, some setting additions can still be absorbed. Using the formula book as a breakthrough, you can also find some forgotten S-level ninjutsu.
Come on, author, write according to your own ideas 💡, don't let a moment 🐷 disturb your thoughts. The novel you wrote is very good,
In other dimensional worlds, time travel may be the biggest golden finger, but Naruto? What can a civilian do? So what if you know the plot? What chance does Naruto have? There are no plug-ins, and there is no bloodline of the Otsutsuki clan. To reach the top, you have to become a disciple of the Sannin. If you want to have a life in your later years, you can only live at the level of Minato (and you need top qualifications). Of course, you can also learn Yakushi Kabuto, but... If an ordinary loser travels through time, forget it, it is easy to get lost. Or learn the Eight Gate Dunjia and become a real man in five seconds. When the final battle comes, try to see if you can kill Otsutsuki Kaguya with one kick. If you can't, just leave it to the masses. Writing about the struggles of ordinary people in a world where blood is paramount and is still extraordinary? I'm afraid it's not Shi Lezhi.
After reading dozens of chapters, it turned out that I was only four years old, and I finally realized that I had spent so much time watching kindergarten children do such crazy things. Give up, give up
It's not okay to name this. It's not China. You can't change China's name even if you restart it.
: Basically the author talked about the setting in the side of a long story. . . The three golden chapters are basically not interesting to read, and at the beginning, the author spends most of the chapter explaining why the protagonist is called Li Mingyi. He also said that there are Chinese, Western, and Japanese-style names in Naruto, and the protagonist said that he would use this name. . . Emmmm, how should I put it, it was too sudden and too deliberate. In fact, it is okay to set the protagonist as a poor man without a surname from the beginning, which is called Mingyi. As for the surname, I will tell it when I introduce myself after I go to school. I will say that I will be called Li Mingyi from now on, and I will let the name of Li Shi be known in the ninja world. Then I will express my love for the village, and then express my wish to be Hokage in the future. . . This is more acceptable. There shouldn't be too many messy settings in the article! ! ! As for chakra training, I was really confused when I saw the visualization method. Did I go to the fantasy channel by the wrong way? And what about the setting that incense can help you experience spiritual abilities? Has the author written fantasy before? I used to like reading fantasy novels, but I don't like them all mixed together like this. Personally, I feel like the poison is quite uncomfortable. There is also a timeline. Kishimoto himself can't figure out the problems on the timeline. It doesn't matter if there are no big mistakes. Based on what I've read before, I personally feel it's a bit like a fantasy training novel wearing the skin of Naruto. . .
Remind the author that what you wrote is a fanfic, not an original work. It deviates so much from the original work that I have to wonder if the author has really watched Naruto? I really can't stand it anymore, it's too toxic, I'll give it up.
Don't talk nonsense about the supremacy of bloodline, it's all passed down by ancestors with their knowledge
I read between the lines and everything is poisonous
He also said that without cheats, it would grow by 10% every day. This is basically the template of "One Punch Man"!
I was convinced, why did the Second Hokage have to be written to death? The early Yin Yang, Miko, was a bit poisonous, so I won't talk about it. I stopped reading it.
If you're not the eldest brother, can't you give me a Japanese name? Four characters will do! It would be too embarrassing for you to just use Li Mingyi.
Read 236 chapters in one go. I really can't stand it any longer, and the deviation from what I wrote in the beginning is getting bigger and bigger. I feel like the style of painting has suddenly changed, and it's really too watery. Abandoned.
There are very few authors like this, especially those who look like a cynical young man. Be confrontational with anyone. Have personality. The ending of this book is predictable. Give me a chestnut to describe the author's operation. You go to buy vegetables, and the author sells them. The author has written the price. The stalls were also set up. A sign was also set up: If you don't buy it, don't blabber. Buy my food and I'll serve you. But you don't buy it? Just take a look? Are you asking about the price? The author is: *******...(Not blocking, you can imagine) That's pretty much it. The author is also a cow tea, and potential customers don't want it. Other authors strive for it. After all, everyone is different and it is difficult to agree with everyone. As long as you write well, there will definitely be readers willing to stay. But the author is so unique and unique, a little green among thousands of flowers. I don't care, maybe it's just for fun. I am not a relative of the author, nor do I have anything to do with him. It is rare to see such a weird person say a few nonsense words. It's best if you don't delete it. The author has already criticized readers like this, so he probably won't care too much.
Looking at your update speed, I ask you, author, is it broken? Did it collapse? You are already awesome at how old you are. When you grow up, you still write a dick. The protagonist is always how old. It's like you are bragging about a child. You still write like this, love to read, don't read and leave, and will never compromise with the readers? Why are you so stubborn and publish a book on a public platform? Why don't you write it and read it yourself? Um? The three major pitfalls of online articles: giving away girls, giving money, and giving power! Are you addicted to the fact that you always arrange for the protagonist to give away power to others for free? And the name of the protagonist. If your name is Li Mingyi, just Li Mingyi. Do you have no common sense or something? Mr. Li Mingyi? Orochimaru called him that? Can't he let others call him Mingyijun? Or clear meaning? What are you obsessed with?
What's the Hokage! What's the Five Shadows! What's the Five Kingdoms? I want to lead the Ming Dynasty's cavalry to conquer a great world! Unify the universe, end the war, and benefit the people! (Does the protagonist think it's awesome?) 🤓
After reading the Naruto Almanac, here comes the question
May I ask when did Uzumaki Mito, the first generation of the Kyuubi Jinchuuriki, die?
Author, you can do it! This idea is quite novel! I watched it all night! I have been reading fan fiction for many years, and I have already passed the stage of squirming within the framework of the original work. Now I want to read the subversion!
I read the introduction. Isn't the world of Naruto a world based on blood? If you don't have a good bloodline, no plug-ins, and are just the foresight of a time traveler, wouldn't your upper limit be just a powerful cannon fodder?
Brother, it's okay if the plot is rounded off, but if it's not rounded off, it's like me, just write the pig's feet to death and say this is a Tsukuyomi world. Goose goose🤓🤓
Hey, pretending to resurrect a corpse and pretending to be dead again,,,,
If you consider the setting of the theatrical version, the Sharingan can indeed see through the movement of chakra to a certain extent. If I remember correctly, at the end of the theatrical version of Bonds (Zero-Tail, Sky Fortress), Sasuke used acupuncture points to block Shennong's chakra route, thereby invalidating the opponent's pseudo-immortality. But at that time, Sasuke was already a three-magatama Sharingan. From the perspective of insight alone, the Byakugan was superior. After all, even the most unskilled Byakugan can see the opponent's meridians and chakra, while low-level Sharingan such as the Magatama Sharingan should only have a bonus in dynamic vision. This also explains why only advanced Sharingan has the ability to copy ordinary ninjutsu, because only advanced Sharingan can see the effect of chakra movement.