Hall of a Thousand Mechanisms

I have been reading Yuanfen's book for a few years, and I feel unhappy when I look at the report card of the new book. The quality of the book is better than most of the previous books. However, because he changed platforms, the accumulated traffic disappeared. At the same time, as the age of reading changes, the taste of books has changed. Take a look at the top books. Some of them are authors who were popular in the past few years. I would like to suggest if you can find a platform to recommend it and pin it to the top. In this current trend, the aroma of wine is also afraid of the depth of the alley!

How can I put it, except for Tian Feng and Dao Dao Congxin, I have read all of Dan Da's books. Qian Ji Dian always felt that the development of the story was too smooth. Xiu Yi was making a living on Purgatory Island, Shen Yi was struggling to survive in the city, Su Chen was following suit on the mainland, and Tang Jie was on guard at all times in the ancient sect. Although he encountered many desperate situations, he relied on his brain to solve them, but no one was afraid of risking his life. If you like Dan Da's books, you like this kind of passion. Without losing her rationality, she can grasp the overall situation and charge into battle. Ning Ye is indeed good at using her brain, but she lacks the excitement of PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds before. Using her own wisdom to find a way out in a seemingly desperate situation is the most brilliant and most attractive part of Dan Da's writing. Dan Da's description of fighting is not bad, but the protagonist has always used skills such as illusions to face the enemy, which is indeed a bit less meaningful. Also, the protagonist's golden finger is opened too early. Whenever he encounters any obstacles in his practice, he just stacks this technique on top of that one, which looks very bland. As for breaking through in battle, which is a tried and tested routine in Xianxia novels, it is impossible to figure out. The above are some of my own opinions. I feel ashamed to say that I used to read pirated books. Later I found out that Dan Da had reached the starting point, so I officially became a full-time publisher. The reason for the poor performance of Thousand Machines Palace was because Dan Da did not write what readers really wanted to read. I hope Dan Da can think about this issue so that this good book will not be buried and no one knows about it.

First of all, I want to say that for me, this book is a good book. So far, although this book has flaws, it still cannot conceal the fact that it is a good book. To be very subjective, this book is the best one after returning to the starting point The plot is exquisitely designed and amazing. Just like playing chess, it is naturally very powerful, but when I watched Langya Bang, I felt that this was a very good book. It's a good TV series, but in the later stage I suddenly found that I already understood the direction of the plot. Because Mei Changsu and Prince Jing could not make a mistake once, they must always win in the plot, so I no longer paid attention to the layout. The emotional line happened to explode in the later period, but it did not affect the viewing experience The protagonist of this book still can't be wrong, but the author never made me guess the process, so this part is wonderful. But in the same way, after knowing the result, even if the plot is unexpected, after reading it, I still have the feeling that "this is indeed the direction" after reading it

How many firsts have I lost for Danda? For Danda, an old bookworm of more than ten years gave me the first recharge at Qidian. Com, the first time I gave him a reward, the first time I gave him a monthly ticket, the first time I subscribed, and the first time I gave him a real-name comment. I never knew I could do so much for a man other than my son!

Known realms: First realm, Zangxiang realm Second realm, Hualun realm Third realm, Ten Thousand Dharma realm Fourth realm, Innocent realm Fifth realm, Nirvana realm Sixth realm, Heavenly Realm Seventh realm, Flying Immortal realm The seven-killing sword skill learned by the protagonist Ning Ye corresponds to the realm: Zangxiang: Killing Heart ~ Killing Body Hualun: Murderous Qi ~ Killing Power Ten Thousand Techniques: Killing Intent ~ God of Killing Wu Guo: Heavenly Kill Nirvana: None Nine major magical arts and ten major buildings of Qianji Palace: Xuanji Ruler - Heaven Measuring Technique Throne of Creation - Wu Tian Technique Ten Thousand Symbols Diagram - Deception Technique Kunlun Mirror - Questioning Heaven Technique Eternal Spring - Heaven-repairing technique Demon refining tower - Heaven-changing technique Heart-washing pool - Heaven-cutting technique Hidden Heaven Prison - Heaven-seizing technique (contains Dinggan Pearl) Dragon-breaking platform - Unknown Xumiwu (no magic) Currently known distribution map of the forces of the Evergreen Kyushu The three central continents: Mozhou, Liezhou, and Tianzhou Mozhou borders Liezhou, Tianzhou, Yunzhou, and Hanzhou , bordering a small part of Yanzhou Three major alliances: (The latter two alliances are speculation, and by default, three of the nine sects mentioned in Chi Wanning's statement in the chapter on general trends are one alliance) 1. Black and White Shrine - Mozhou, Yuji Zhan Dao, Mu Puppet Sect, Wanhua Valley Discord Haotianmen - Yunzhou Taiyin Gate - Hanzhou 2. Mu Puppet Sect - Tianzhou Longyang Mansion - The name of the continent is unknown Yanyu Tower - Haizhou, Zhanhai area 3. Wanhua Valley - Yanzhou Shengwang Pavilion - The name of the continent is unknown Ji Zhan Dao - liezhou

Chi Wan Ning is obviously just an ordinary character, why did she arrange for Ning Ye to fall in love with her and be with her? Why is the relationship progressing so quickly? Isn't it okay to treat Chi Wanning as a tool like Gongsun Li? Let's not talk about how ridiculous the love between them is. Just treat it like a bastard looking at a mung bean, and they look at each other romantically for a thousand years. The male and female protagonists redeem each other, but later on, they arrange a male protagonist to be attracted to a passerby. Don't you think it's inconsistent? I can't stand being so disgusted. Stocks are popular because other people write well and the tone of the plot is different. You don't know how to write, so why would you write something disgusting? Isn't it good to exploit strengths and avoid weaknesses? I have to write emotional dramas that are disgusting, but my writing style is also poor, and I prefer to rely on romance and sensationalism.

Qingmu was greedy for Chi Wan Ning's body, and wanted to use her as a cauldron to reach nirvana from Wu Guo, and sent Mrs. Yu to urge her to practice diligently and reach a certain level within five years. Later, Chi Wan Ning was hooked up by Ning Ye, and Qing Mu did not beat the mandarin ducks. He thought it was a good thing, as it would make Chi Wan Ning feel more at ease in the Black and White Demon Palace. First of all, some people question, isn't Qingmu afraid that Chi Wanning will be seduced and elope? You should be confident in this. After all, the Taiqing Shenshui Jue is like a chain. Before Chi Wanning reaches a great level of practice, she cannot run away, and she is even more reluctant to die in order to stay with Ning Ye forever. Then there is Chi Wan Ning's body and the furnace cauldron. This should be related to the settings of the furnace cauldron. Some people are worried that Chi Wanning's first blood being taken by Ning Ye will affect Qingmu's cultivation. Judging from Qin Shusheng's previous words and Chi Wanning's partying every now and then, Qingmu's cauldron is not a disposable item and does not care about first blood. As for whether Chi Wan Ning will not be willing to be a furnace cauldron after having a loving brother, this question does not exist at all, because she will definitely not be willing to do so without a loving brother. So does Ning Ye's existence pose a threat to Aoki? The difference between a Zangxiang boy and the Muzan boss is like the difference between an ant and a giant dragon. Aoki doesn't need to have this kind of persecution delusion at all. The last thing is the furnace cauldron. The woman may be damaged, but she should not die, at least not immediately. The cultivator cherishes his life. As the saying goes, it is better to die than to live. Aoki is not a high-level demon, right? Friends, what do you think about this issue? The takeaway guy is already asking if he needs to heat up Aoki's lunch box = ͟͟͞͞(꒪ᗜ꒪ ‧̣̥̇)

When the Tianji Gate created the Thousand Machines Palace, it planned to build the number one divine object in heaven and earth. Therefore, there are many mysterious and wonderful buildings in it: Ask the Sky The Kunlun Mirror deduce time and space, and move the space Seize the Sky The Hidden Heaven Prison has no access to the heaven and the earth, which can trap the powerful Point to the Sky The Duanlong Platform sins to kill the immortals, attacking three times Deceiving the Sky The Vientiane Diagram evolves all living beings, a super illusion Mending the Sky The Eternal Fountain brings back the dead and heals the wounded Changing the Sky The Demon Refining Tower refines the demons and seizes demon energy Jie Tian The Heart Washing Pool cleanses the human heart and knows the hearts of others Measure the Sky Xuan Ji Chi comprehends the secrets of heaven and masters the nine arts Wutian The throne of creation creates all things, holding the stars and catching the moon Of course, some of them are not completed and are themselves half-finished products. As the saying goes, heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs. It seems that Tianjimen will not give Fat Tian any face today. 🌚

Well, Palace of Thousand Machines is indeed well written, but now that I see it, I feel that the structure of the realm is not perfect. The improvement of each realm seems to be just that the spiritual power becomes stronger and the spells become stronger, but the aspects of improvement are not obvious. The Huanlun seems to be able to automatically cast spells, and its usefulness is basically not mentioned. The means of Wanfa and Wushou are still at the level of "Dharma". It doesn't reflect an essential leap at all. (For example: such as the spiritual attack in the Xianlu Zaitian state of mind, and the telekinetic method in the Zifu state) If these are imperfect, I am really afraid of relying on Gen Zi Mi to improve at will in the later stage. In addition, as an article about the background of Xianxia, ​​if these backgrounds are not perfect, the later fights will be completely impossible to write. In comparison, the five realms and fourteenth levels of the Immortal Road are very complete, and the direction of improvement at each stage is obvious. The realm of the spiritual disciple is to expand the capacity of spiritual energy, the realm of transcendence is to connect the world and condense the consciousness, the Tianxin is to condense the Tianxin for the first time to touch the spiritual consciousness, the Zifu is to hone the soul, and the Immortal platform is to transform the immortal energy. Each realm has special abilities, and the fights in the later stages are also exciting.

The only fully ordered book in Qidian after Game of Gods, I'll give it a high-quality one.