The Blade of Time

I have read all the updates. How should I put it? It may be a bit offensive to the seniors. You are an author I used to particularly like, but since returning to the starting point, new books always feel less interesting. Let me tell you my personal opinion after reading the seven chapters. I apologize for any offense. First of all, in terms of setting, judging from the current content, the protagonist is a native of the dimensional world. The changed world has been alienated from the laws due to the "cultural invasion" of the earth. This way of writing will make it difficult for readers to substitute and feel the "information gap" when reading, because all the protagonist's knowledge of the earth comes from devouring the memory of that "earth person". In fact, it can be written in another way. As long as the world framework remains unchanged, the protagonist is actually a time traveler from the earth. Under this premise setting, whether it is "Date A Live" or other film and television dramas invading the world, the protagonist can understand the strategy mode immediately. Instead of explaining again and again, it is the corresponding knowledge obtained after swallowing a certain "Earthling". Perhaps the big idea is that the protagonist can later swallow the consciousness of other "Earthlings" so that the indigenous protagonist can obtain more information and swallow whatever he lacks. But everyone seems to have forgotten that the readers of this book are people on earth. No one wants to read a novel in which "one of our own people" is played by the indigenous people, just like being Chinese doesn't want to see Chinese people being bullied by foreigners. This writing method may be unconventional and create an infinite flow novel similar to "anti-travel", but it will cause more readers to abandon it. Then there are some inconsistencies in the advancement of the plot. For example, after reading the first chapter, my first thought was that the protagonist was deliberately "rebellious", which is also a bit out of the ordinary. The reason why he did this was to do a big thing. However, the next development has nothing to do with the "big thing" that the protagonist is going to do. The only thing mentioned is the female corpse. As a result, the plot with the female corpse was interrupted again because of the sudden entry into the "dream world". This makes people feel very uncomfortable to watch, at least I felt very uncomfortable while watching it, because it is not clear what the protagonist wants to do. As for another golden finger, the protagonist only gained something related to golden finger by devouring the consciousness of an "Earthling" in Chapter 4 or Chapter 5. But even in the era of wireless literature many years ago, there was still the saying of the three golden chapters, which used just three chapters to clearly explain the characters, background, golden fingers, etc. Under the current impact of new media and imaginative writing, the three golden chapters seem outdated. If it cannot be explained clearly in the first chapter, readers will not want to read it at all. Even the great masters of Qidian and Platinum, under the impact of new media and imaginative articles, have to adapt to the trend, such as Xinfeng and Feng Lingtianxia. The big golden finger appeared too late, and this is not even a golden finger, because except for the protagonist who has swallowed the consciousness of an "Earthling", he has not shown any more prominence than others. So, can it be understood that other indigenous people can also swallow it? If other people can devour it, is it still a golden finger? Then there is the level setting. The sequence setting is not clearly written, so that when readers look at it, they have no idea what this "sequence" does. This point can be greatly referred to the secrets of Squid Girl. The secrets add up to hundreds of sequences, but each sequence is expressed very clearly, and the abilities, advanced routes, and restraints are all expressed clearly. So although there are many mysterious sequences, readers will not "understand" them. In addition to guessing the nine levels of the sequence and the names of several levels of the seventh sequence, the previous article knows nothing about anything else. It even fails to express clearly the ability to practice the sequence. It is okay to dig holes, but it cannot be left to the readers to guess. Then there is the problem of world line chaos. The world of the first movie is still an unknown plot. Suddenly Tokisaki Kurumi appears to steal the scene, causing the tense atmosphere that has been foreshadowed for so long to disappear. Because what I expect is for the protagonist to defeat the BOSS alone and level up infinitely, instead of suddenly falling in love with Kurumi Tokisaki. This is my first long review in ten years of reading, because I really don't want to see this book continue to be buried. I can especially understand Da Da's urgency after failing to achieve results in many books in a row and wanting to prove himself. After all, the family is waiting for a meal. If you don't work hard to open up a pit, it will be difficult to continue to support yourself with your capital alone. However, when writing, you should still give more consideration to market issues. The competition in the online writing market is getting bigger and bigger, and readers' tastes are also changing. The old writing methods can no longer satisfy most readers. In order to cater to the taste of a few old readers, you should not just dive in and ignore the vast majority of casual readers. This may offend many die-hard fans, but you might as well look back and see how many die-hard fans you have left. One book is less than the next. When this book is finished, how many will be left for the next book? Moreover, the old readers who originally read Endless Arms were young and carefree young men in their prime, but now most of them are potbellied, old and young, and they no longer have much time to read. You still need to consider the new generation of readers and cater to the tastes of young readers. When you reach your peak again, the original group of die-hard fans will still be there, and you will gain a large number of new die-hard fans. If you are confused about the work, you might as well ask other authors (not just flatterers) about their real experiences and communicate with them. Of course, it is also possible that the content is not suitable for me to read alone. It is just my reading sense. Once again, I hope you can forgive me for any offense. Finally, I wish Dada's new book a huge hit and all the best!

It's hard to imagine that an author who has written about Fairy Sword in Infinite Stream would write about… Date A Live? The contrast is too big... Can't we stick to our laurels? You can write Infinite Arms 2, its prequel, or the story of the man who invented real alchemy. Stop torturing yourself. After torturing yourself, you will torture the readers.

There are some black men who are trying to get in the dark. Everyone must keep their eyes open. If I don't like it, I will just delete it and replace it. I will never waste time writing a book review. But some people in the comment area said they didn't like the genre and couldn't understand it, but they were willing to spend several minutes to comment.

Fate is a T0 level unlimited novel writer and a T10086 level fantasy novel writer. The Endless Arms back then allowed me to see the peak of Infinite Ryu. All the Infinite Ryu that came out later felt less interesting than Fate, but I never expected that Fate would never write about Infinite Ryu again. . .

I haven't started reading the book yet, but I know that 0 has opened a new book and is coming to support it. I have liked his books before, and I hope the new book will help!

Dan Da, please listen to me. I believe you are not exhausted. You can write new endless weapons. Let's just study in one field honestly. You are one of the best among the older generation of unlimited flow authors. What do you think of the current unlimited flow? Danda, you won't be reduced to writing two-dimensional things!

I always feel that the author's peak is "Endless Arms", and the rest... I don't want to talk about it

Are there any book friends who like Endless Arms? I don't quite understand which parts you like.

It's Arms 2, it's so good, I originally gave up on Dan Dan's 2 books, but I saw the shadow of the miracle doctor in this book! When I started walking in Quanding, I came to Qidian just to read Dan Dan's book. I finally found the feeling in this book. If it weren't for the setting of Kuang San, it would be perfect! Dan, you are finally back!

Master, can you write Endless Arms 2? Shen Yi lost control of space in an accident. Many people, including the woman in white, were sealed in the depths of space, waiting for the destined people on earth to save them.