The Gate of Lind

The author wrote quite well in the early parts, but the quality dropped after the players started entering the game. It felt disorganized and weak, and the plot progressed much slower, focusing more on describing the players' actions. What I wanted to see was the protagonist using the players for farming, development, and plot advancement—shouldn't the focus be on the protagonist? If the players become the protagonist, I probably won't continue reading.

It was written very well before there were players. The reading experience has plummeted since players joined.

I read all 35 chapters in one go. The premise is quite interesting, and the writing flows smoothly. The Fourth Calamity was so realistic it cracked me up. It's just so hard to wait for updates! Will the author release four chapters a day? (Just kidding!)

What a pity about this book I wish I could keep writing. Some chapters seem disorganized, which is actually due to the perspective. The author's perspective shifts between that of the "protagonist" and the "player." The author concealed the "villain's" perspective, which led readers to find the story confusing and difficult to understand.

The writing about players lowers the standard; it can be deleted.

It's really good. It's the only book I've read that respects players instead of treating them like monkeys.

I noticed many people criticizing this book for its messy plot and stirring up trouble. When I first saw it, I was quite taken aback, thinking it wouldn't be good. However, due to an unexpected reading slump, I reread it. In my opinion, the plot is quite good, with plenty of humor and depth. Everyone says the plot is messy, but I think it's already quite good for a new author.

Everything else is fine, but to be honest, instead of sticking to a player-centric approach, you might as well switch to an industrial upgrade build in another world. Because your player is too fragmented, and it doesn't feel like a game at all.

I really enjoy the author's writing. Why are so many people saying it's not as good after adding players, that it's more interesting with players? Author, keep going! As long as you keep writing, all my monthly votes are yours.

I don't know if it's just my imagination, but I feel like a lot of the descriptions are inexplicable, and I have no idea why these things happened.