The Gate of Lind

The author's writing was quite good in the early stage, but once the players started entering the game, the level dropped. It gave me the feeling that it became disorganized and watery. The plot progress was not slow at all, but began to describe the behavior of each player. What I want to see more is that the protagonist uses players to carry out farming construction, personal development, and promote plot development. The focus should be on the protagonist, right? If the player becomes the protagonist, then I probably won't continue watching.

It was very well written before there were no players. After having players, I feel that the reading experience plummets

I read thirty-five chapters in one go. The setting is quite interesting and the writing is smooth. The fourth natural disaster was so real that it made me laugh to death. It's just hard to wait for updates. Will the author update four times a day? (No)

It's a pity that this book It would be nice if I could continue writing Some chapters look messy, but it's actually because of the perspective problem The author's perspective switches the reader between the "protagonist" and the "player" The perspective of the "villain" is hidden, which makes the reader feel "messy" and "invisible" "Understood" In fact, they are all pitfalls. They are the world view and setting of this book, which will be reasonably introduced later It can even be said that almost every stroke has meaning, whether it is echoing before or after, or shaping characters It is a pity that this writing method is more suitable for the real thing, rather than an online novel that is updated every day. After all, if you can't read it all at once, you will want to die.

If you write it to the player, it will lower the level and you can delete it.

It's really good. It's the only one I've read that respects the players instead of treating them like monkeys.

I found that many people criticized this book for its confusing plot and various pacing. I was shocked when I first read this book and thought it was not going to work. Later, I came back to read this book due to an unexpected book shortage. As a result, in my opinion, the plot is pretty good, with plenty of laughs and content. They say the plot is messy, but I think it's pretty good for a new author. Even as a reader, I don't feel uncomfortable. As long as I calm down and read it, it won't feel abrupt. As a book whose theme is obviously about players farming in another world, I think it is normal that there are many pictures. Do we have to keep writing about the main character upgrading the monster-fighting outfit to 13? Then why not just go out and turn left to read the urban-style King of War?

Everything else is fine, but to be honest, as a player streamer, you might as well start an industrial upgrading stream in another world. Because you, the player, are too fragmented and not like the game. It is true that some players like to play Minecraft-type games, but the fun part of Minecraft is building houses. Instead of developing and surviving too realistically. In a game like the real world, how many players have the patience to slowly make cement and collect it? You can write about individual players of this type, but don't write too many. What's more, you chose the anchor. Are you sure it's okay? A streamer's main job is to live broadcast. Will a streamer continue to play a game that cannot be broadcast live? The player you selected at the beginning, the anchor cannot play the same game all the time, because their main job is to play the games they want to other players, and your game focuses more on personal gaming experience, or is completely realistic, and is not something that anchors can play at all. To be honest, when the players didn't show up at the beginning, I felt that there was still a sense of expectation for the players to show up, but when the players appeared, it felt too inconsistent. There is no spell to build things, and the entire game experience feels like a waste of energy points digging trees. It is not that there are no real games, but the reality is that almost no one plays real games. The initial version of Final Fantasy was very real, but then the operation was cumbersome, and in the end few people played it. Now, take a look at what types of so-called life players are.

I really like the author's writing. Why do so many people say that it doesn't look good with players? It's more interesting with players. The author insists, as long as you continue writing, all my monthly votes will be yours.

I don't know if it's an illusion, but I always feel that the descriptions in many places are inexplicable, and I have no idea why this happened.