The Northern Lord

Not bad, invest 100 and take a look. There are very few books that write about riding and slashing. They all ended up in the palace halfway.

It feels pretty good. I hope the author can stick to it. If it stays at this level or even better, then it's all settled. I hope I can give you a highlight post.

Let me ask you guys, what mod do you like to use? Note: war group

Why do the two time traveler protagonists think that the emperor will not kill him? After all, this secret will shake the legitimacy of his rule, not to mention it is a magical world! It's better to write a simple upgrade article than relying on halo all the time

Boss, I think your land is a bit big. In the High Middle Ages, an earl could support 120 armored knights. You are so good that a small baron can support so many people. The land of a standard earldom is 86,000 acres, which is roughly the jurisdiction of the four counties of our country. I hope the author can be more rigorous. Even in another world, there must be a standard population comparison and a standard scale.

It doesn't matter if the writing is slow. When arranging the behavior of the characters (whether the protagonist or the villain), the author should first think about what he would do if he were him. This can avoid many unreasonable plots. Also, when writing a story about an aristocrat, you must pay attention to the fact that class has a class position. Some rules of inheritance are not easy to break. This kind of thing is the cornerstone of the aristocracy to maintain its own ruling power. Once someone openly breaks the rules, it is said to be a class enemy. After all, once a precedent is set, who can guarantee that my heir will not encounter the same problem in the future. Such a person will be hostile to all nobles at the same time. Not everyone dares to do this. The book is too young. Please read it after a while to avoid eunuchs. I wish the author a long life.

Author, are you kidding me? Finished? Keep writing!

This plot is really the same as **, the protagonist never takes the initiative The villain Carter is as smelly and long as the old lady's foot wrap, the protagonist never solves it, md is like a cerebral palsy

The beginning is neat, the five chapters are wonderful, the ten chapters are witty, the fifteenth chapter is foreshadowing, the twenty-five chapters are sudden, the twenty-five chapters are bloody, and the thirty chapters are inexplicable. This is the first time I have ever seen a novel that was so smooth, and so quickly transformed from a divine seedling to a self-motivated mess. If ten to fifteen were doubled, fifteen to twenty were doubled, and then all the inexplicable virginal behaviors of the protagonists from twenty to thirty were deleted, the book would not be popular. I would write the last name upside down. But it's a pity that the protagonist is the Virgin, and she is also an inexplicable Virgin. She suddenly fights to the death without any foreshadowing, and is passionate and so on. Maybe the author gets better and better as he writes, but the more I read, the more I feel that the character's behavior is sick. . . It is recommended that the author calm down and then look back, or ask friends who can give pertinent opinions. Well, looking forward to the optimized revised version.

The riding and slashing system in the book has not shown any usefulness at all. After finally regaining the territory, catching the mother and son of the mastermind, the stepmother was sent back to her family, and the younger brother changed his surname and was adopted by his knights. . Then, without gathering the hearts and troops in the castle, he went hunting with his friends, encountered orcs, and killed them. . What kind of cool operation?