The Northern Lord

Not bad, let's invest 100 and see. Very few books on Mount & Blade have really taken off; they all fizzled out halfway through.

It's pretty good. I hope the author can keep it up. If they maintain this level, or even improve, I'll buy the whole thing. I hope they'll mark it as a featured post.

Guys, what mods do you guys like to use? Note: Warband

What makes the two transmigrated protagonists think the emperor won't kill him? After all, this secret would shake the legitimacy of his rule, especially in a magical world! Constantly relying on plot armor is less satisfying than a simple leveling-up story.

Wow, this land seems a bit too big! In the High Middle Ages, a count could support 120 armored knights, and this little baron can support that many? A standard count's land is 86,000 acres, roughly the size of four counties in China. I hope the author can be more rigorous; even in an alternate world, there should be a standard population ratio and a standard scale.

Writing slowly is fine, but when the author is arranging the characters' (protagonist or antagonist's) actions, they should first consider what they would do in that situation. This can avoid many illogical plot points. Also, when writing about nobles, it's crucial to remember that class has its own stance.

Author, are you kidding me? It's finished? Keep writing!

This plot is just like a movie; the protagonist never takes the initiative. Carter is such a villain, as long and drawn-out as an old woman's foot binding cloth, and the protagonist never bothers to deal with him; he's practically brain-dead.

The beginning is crisp, the fifth chapter is brilliant, the tenth chapter is witty, the fifteenth chapter is foreshadowing, the twentieth chapter is sudden, the twenty-fifth chapter is melodramatic, and the thirtieth chapter is inexplicable. This is the first time I've ever seen a novel that flows so smoothly and so quickly, transforming from a promising seedling into a self-indulgent mess.

The Mount & Blade system in the book was completely useless. After finally reclaiming the territory, capturing the mastermind and his mother, the stepmother was sent back to her family, and the younger brother was adopted by one of the knights under his command. Instead of rallying the hearts and minds of the people and the army within the castle, he went hunting with his friends, where they encountered orcs and fought back fiercely. What kind of crazy move is this?